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#26 Jan 06, 2008 7:18 AM
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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story
@ Deathseeker. Thats a character who no one is controlling in general, but who every one can use in their dialogs and texts. If for example Ratchet talks to someone, but he's unsure wether he can just talk to you directly. (afraid of spoiling others stories). He can instead talk to an NPC. NPCs are good to use, but you would have to make them stick to character.
@ Ratchet. I created this . But you make your own story. Paralell with the others of course.
No individual knickers here. Of course. You write your story through your own or your characters eyes. (Don't write about the character in "I" form. Third person always)
@ every one. No individual stories, NO ONE SPOILS YOUR STORY. everyone writes in a connection to their team and work this story out perfectly. Read the Rules section. [recommended]
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#27 Jan 06, 2008 7:21 AM
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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story
i have read the rules.....
so im not aloud to say my background? wait can you please tell me exaculy what im aloud/not aloud to do
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#28 Jan 06, 2008 8:33 AM
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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story
Yes, you are allowed to say your background. Of course. This is not like the regular RPG. I only do the introduction, and helps abit along. You write the story about YOUR character. Which means everything connected to him. Background, actions, feelings, thoughs etc. You simply just write a story. But instead of others continueing on yours, you do. It's quite simply really. The only thing you need to watch is that you write at the same time as others. Visions, background, dreams = ALLOWED.
don't write:
My character traveled in time and killed the golden dragon
Do your story individual and parallell with the other writers. So if Deathseeker for example writes in his story that he sees Ratcher sneaking around in the bushes. You can write why you sneaked around in the bushes. It's frankly very simple.
I'll do the introduction now and kick it off.
Introduction, Artisans Allience
The king of the dragons, Hearin, was sitting pacently at his throne. Arround him sat the comanders of the Artisan allience army. They've heard word that a portal had opened in the centrals of their terretory. The same portal had appeared multiple places across the realms, and it is said to carry you to another world.
Hearin raised his voice and said: "Why do you not enter it then? We must find that Golden Egg. The Magic Coalition, The Peacekeeper army and the southern tribes have probably entered it already."
In red anger Hearin threw his cup across the table. The red wine got spilled over the closest general.
The general looked over at Hearin and replied: "My lord, we are currently trying to go through the portals, but it seems as if it's some kind of spell on them. We've seen a person enter one in the Magical Coalition. She was said to be very young and goes by the name Koni."
The general pointed over the field outside the castle window.
"There are chosen ones you see. Only the youngest and most succsesfull seems to be able to cross."
The silence filled the room. A faint breeze blew across the tables.
Hearin looked across the table at the fields.
"These chosen ones must be found. Send orders to all of the Artisan allience. Prepare for combat and enter the portals."
The word quickly spread across the lands. People from all over the Dragon Kingdom came to test the portals. Almost everyone failed to enter the portal.
But the strange thing was, the ones that had managed to get through the portals was younger than the youngest warriors in the army. They were children.
Tyrus, Cepxis and Rapid, three younglings from the Artisans Allience had succses fully broken through the portal.
They were sitting around the campfire all alone in a dark misty realm. They could see other portals open around them. They were having a small meeting. Tyrus had been appointer as the leader of the three. And they were about to start looking for the golden egg.
Introduction. The Magical Coalition
Koni, a young cat witch from the Charmed Ridge had managed to open and walk through the portal at the Evening Lake home. Other magicians had tried for four nights and four days to open the portal, but without succses. The dragons in the Magic Crafters had heard word that the Artisans dragons had found a way to enter the portals. Desperate to get the Golden egg before the others the elder Dragon Omphus has sent an Egg thief with a letter to the Artisans World. The letter contained a contract, which made a temporarly allience between the two forces.
The Artisans Army agreed and soon the Magic Crafters knew how to break through. An intense search for young dragons, witches, wizards and thieves was set out.
Koni sat on the mountain side all alone. She seemed to be in a kind of swamp. In the far east she could see a castle covered in dark clouds.
But what she focused on at the moment was three young Artisans sitting around a camp fire. If she could get along with them, maybe they could save a poor damsel in distress.
Koni was all alone, and her magical powers was limited. If she could succsesfully bribe the Artisans to allow her to join, she would have protection in these dark misty swamps.
Introduction. Peace Keeper Army.
The peace keeper army stood outside the immense portal that had appeared in the middle of Zephyr. They had heard word from their allies, the Tribes, that it was possible to enter the portal. A brave warrior named Jinzo stood third in the line. The PK armies was not known for order at queues but this was an emergency, and a WAR.
The first one in the line was the great warrior Huccirt from the ancient Gnorc army.
An immense roar covered the plains as he yelped.
"ROOOAR!... No petty portal is keeping... ME from getting my blood thirst quenched."
He held his sword hi up and charged against the portals. Silence filled the crowds. Fear and amasement.
The portal had let Huccrt through. But not in the way he wanted it too.
Huccirt was laying on the ground, in an unknown desert oase.
"Where... Am... I!!!?" he said.
but what Huccirt hadn't realized was that he was just on the other side of the portal. The PK army laughed as they saw Huccirt believing he was in a complete new realm.
Ashamed Huccirt hid behind some rocks.
Jinzo looked around him and thought: "fools..."
He pushed the warrior infront of him aside and entered the portal unseen.
Jinzo had appeared in a remote Realm covered in mist and fungus. In the far he could see a camp fire.
The PK army continued to try to enter the portal, they didn't know that Jinzo had already passed through.
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Introduction. The Tribes
The tribes gathered in the middle of the Autumn Plains. A portal had appeared in the Skelos Badlands.
THe leader of the tribes Kyun-Shima raised his staff.
" The Artisans allience, Magical goofers and stupid uk-uk army stole our Golden Egg last time, and look at the results. We are not going to let any dragon or other creature unleach the powers of the egg again. These portals will lead you to the realms of Iccurim. But only the chosen ones can pass."
silent filled the plains. Everyone was mute. The tribe-leader was a wise man. He had lived longer, and knew more than any other creature in the realms.
" The danger we face before us is not to hide from. We must face the Golden Dragon again. The other alliences refuses to listen, but we know better."
He pointedd his finger towards a young cave men sitting in the mids of the crowds.
" Colm, you are wiser than your age. Surely such powers must've been rewarded. It could be, that you... Colm, may be one that carries the sacred powers."
The tribes gathered around the portal in expentations. The tribe leader turned against Colm.
" Colm, enter the portal and lit a camp fire. There will be many tasks to over come, but you should face them with intelect and intelligence. We will continue to search for the chosen ones in the Tribal terretories."
Without a single word more, Colm was pushed through the portal. The tribes saw no more of Colm that day, and they knew they wouln't, for a very long time.
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The introductions is set. Now intruduce your story, background etc. and then start the story.
The main objective is to get to the castle in the horizon. Interfere with the other characters and try to come up with good events. Remember, everything you write effect another ones story in one way or another.
You've been given a large space to write in. Read the first post carefully again before starting.
You do not have to wait for group leader to start your introduction. BUT! You cannot take control over another character with out them being introduced first. If a person is absent in the beginning, like Tyrus who has a major role. The role will be passed down to someone else.
Koni is an NPC which means that she is controlable by ANY ONE! But don't take her out of character. She's an airhead who can't walk and eat at the same time. She is very pretty and proud of it, and is sometimes a pain in the butt. She complains about everything and anything around her. And her major issue in the beginning is her dirty shoes. She's a tactical mind though, so she knows how to play her cards.
More NPCs will be introduced later as I see them fit. Artisans won't get any NPCs as they seems to be more than the other coalitions.
It's war between the different kingdoms so don't go to pretty on them unless you want to. All goes by your own story, so joining up with another force, making an allience is fine.
You hold the cards, you have the story.
@ other: The ones with no alliences will have to write how they got to the portal, now as an introduction or later on. The portals opened all over the realms so it's quite a free space.
KICK OFF! POPCORN STORY STARTS NOW!
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#29 Jan 06, 2008 8:42 AM
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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story
EDIT: i'll change it, what do you mean "YOU DO NOT WAIT FOR OTHER TO REPLY."? Oh and what does my introduction sposed to be like?
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#30 Jan 06, 2008 8:52 AM
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OOC: @ Rathcet thats cool. But remember, this is your first post. YOU DO NOT WAIT FOR OTHER TO REPLY. This goes to you all. You write your story, it's supposed to be least four lines. I would say that you just Introduce your characternow Ratchet and wait with the dialogs till other has been introduced. If for example Afronova writes next, he won't be able to "reply" you. Cuz he isn't close to you. Hope you understood that.
I don't meen to be *bleep*y. This is just a small reminder from the Rules section. So just introduce your character ATM. We will have to wait for the others.
And this is a popcorn story. you do not write in " * action * " and then a dialog. You write it like you would have written a story or a fan fiction. hope that explained abit.
This is not a RPG but a popcorn story. The difference is huge. A popcorn story is a free Fan fiction based story with many writers. Each writer write their individual story paralel with the others. All stories happens at the same time, and is all heading for the same ending. The ending is very floating and much can happen during the story.
An RPG is more of Dialog. you take control of a character and control differerent actions. You do not write like you would have if you'd been writing a book.
Look in the first post, theres a good example of "Radio Shows" <- which in this case is RPG like writing
There is examples on how to write there.
REad the FORMAT section. http://www.spyroforum.com/topic-2982:ad … story.html
If anyone have anymore questions PM me.
I was prepared to be a little "*bleep*y" in the beginning seeing that there has never been any popcorn stories here. Only RPGs. So don't take it personally, anyone do mistakes the first time.
Isn't really a mistake either.
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#31 Jan 06, 2008 9:04 AM
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As word had spread throughout the realms Arcana heard about this not long form now.He knew he had to take action.So as he left for the other realms to see about everything else,a strange thing haapened.His heart began to hurt and beat faster.As his heart did this,he remebered that this made the destruction before.
He soon felt to a hard landing in front of tree where he stopped it from happening.Arcana knew that these were going to be the hardest times he'd ever face.As he started back to look at the other realms for clues he all that he had to know.There was one downfall though.He colud not go through.
He had to find the one portal lost from history.But it was located in Peace Keepers army.They hadn't known about it yet.He was going to need help so this time he'd finally reveal him self to the world.
Ayumi...well will miss you dearly..a...changer..in my life..Ayumi..the Demon wolf...best friend,and bro to me.One of the Great 7.
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#32 Jan 06, 2008 9:07 AM
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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story
i really dont know what to do at all
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#33 Jan 06, 2008 9:08 AM
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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story
OOc: I edited the previous post Ratcher. Read it carefully. XD I feel so *bleep*y at the moment. PM if theres any more questions.
@ Deathseeker: OMG! I'm beginning to feel like a Mod. Don't take this personally okay, but the FONT color is supposed to be used when your character is talking.
And last. Really sorry for being such a *bleep* D:
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#34 Jan 06, 2008 9:14 AM
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OOC: no i already read that and it made me even more confused, tell me what i am sposed to write (yes, i read the rules)
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#35 Jan 06, 2008 9:53 AM
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OOC: PM me for more questions. Introduce your character into the story. Background and such. I did not say how any of the Artisans characters entered the portals. That space is free for you to fill.
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#36 Jan 06, 2008 9:55 AM
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OOC: so i have to say the stuff i said in My description?
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OCC:Just get on with it!Will ya?!?!
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OOC: i cant really get on with it when i dont know what to do
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#39 Jan 06, 2008 10:07 AM
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OCC:I TELL YOU THEN MYSELF!You have to make the parts of how you get to those portals.It's very simple!You write what you do and if someone sees you they can say something to you and maybe help you out.I show you.(you're in this one)
As Arcana Fira went on to find help he saw a creature he'd never seen.She was sitting looking at a lake,Hello?I want to know who you are?He was asking because he'd need help.
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#40 Jan 06, 2008 10:07 AM
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OOC: Again. PM for questions regarding this. Ratchet does not have to be the first to post, so don't push him okey.
No... Simply write for example how you got into the portal. And as it will be the first time your character is in the story write about him abit. More then in the description.
You can do it simple, by just writing what he's doing. Or do it abit more complex by adding thoughts.
PM if theres anything else. We don't want to fill this forum up with "OOC"s as they will disturb the story.
As word had spread throughout the realms Arcana heard about this not long form now.He knew he had to take action.So as he left for the other realms to see about everything else,a strange thing haapened.His heart began to hurt and beat faster.As his heart did this,he remebered that this made the destruction before.
He soon felt to a hard landing in front of tree where he stopped it from happening.Arcana knew that these were going to be the hardest times he'd ever face.As he started back to look at the other realms for clues he all that he had to know.There was one downfall though.He colud not go through.
He had to find the one portal lost from history.But it was located in Peace Keepers army.They hadn't known about it yet.He was going to need help so this time he'd finally reveal him self to the world.
Just so that people know that Deathseeker ssaid something. Many OOC's gets in the way kinda'.
You can wait for other Ratchet. I was prepared for troubles like this when writing a Popcorn story. PM me okey!
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#41 Jan 06, 2008 10:23 AM
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OOC: okay, i'll try and write one, tell me if i did it wrong.
Rapid is a stelagon, a cross between a fruit bat and a dragon. They are half made of metal.He hated the DM, anything related the DM and even anything that reminded him of the DM, this Golden egg really Sizzled his tail. He had this grudge because the DM had cast a spell many years ago which wiped his family from ever existance, he never knew why, and he had always tried to break the spell.
THe only other family member that didn't get wiped was his cousin, Sentrake, however, he hadn't heard of Sentrake that much because Sentrake liked to wander. Any trouble that Rapid ever heard he would come to, especially if it was to do with the DM, he didn't want people to get hurt like he did. To move to these places, Rapid used his special abilities which all stelagons had. THese special abilities included time travel and super spped.
He had joined the artisan realm's alliance for the same reason as all the rest of the people there, to destroy the golden egg. He knew that the Golden egg had many powers, and that power could be used for more evil than the dark master.
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#42 Jan 06, 2008 1:23 PM
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OOC: good introduction. More of a detailed introduction than a story part. Now continue like you did the last part. Don't write to hasty okay. Explain more into things and write full and outlined storyies. Almost as small chapters. I will do the NPC introduction now. I won't put in many post, but this just might give you a proper clue on how to write. I realize now that I should've given more examples in the beginning. My bad, sorry.
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The sun was setting in the horizon. The castles at Charmed Ridge seemed so faint and unclear in the dazed sun light. In the middle of the city square, Koni the seducing mistress was doing her famous dance.
The witches and wizards sat silent. "The setting sun colors the sky with its colors... Faint screams is heard... as if the world is just an endless syclus. Of dreams."
Koni closed her eyes and carefully opened her umbrella. Her beauty stunned the crowd. "A dream... an Illusion. All is but a dream within a dream within a..." .
The petals of the cherry trees covered the last sun beams with sparkles. In just a second, the feelings around Charmed Ridge was more mmagic and beautiful then ever. Koni was a master of setting events and using them as her advantage.
Faint sounds of the calming autumn breeze covered the mountain side. "Let me take you on... to a beautiful dream! .
Koni spun around once and looked over the audience. Her famous dance shined as the sun went down. Koni was like the sun itself. Bringing heat and warmth to everyone around her. The darkness had begun to settle in the horizon, but Konis dance somewhat kept the light.
Later the same night Koni was in her quarters, preparing for her beauty sleep, to end this long day. Outside of her window witches and wizards was still trying to enter the mystical portal that had appeared the day before. Koni thought. "Only those who have a pure heart can enter the portal, as with the sun, it shines. .
She reached for her umbrella and carefully opened it.
Koni climbed up on the edge of her window and looked over the horizon. The petals was still flying unseen throughout the darkness.
As silent as the wind she jumped out the window. The autumn breeze carried her gliding down towards the portal. As she closed in she carefully closed her eyes and threw a flash spell at the portal.
" Magic..."
The moon covered the Charmed Ridge with it's ice cold beauty. It was like the warmth and happiness had disappeared. The witches and wizards only gazed at the portal, knowing that their beloved Koni was gone. The leader of the cats, king Azchel quickly sent word to the Magic Crafter Dragons.
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OOC: I like to put feelings and discribing events in my stories. And by that creating a kind of emotion around them.
I may change color, seeing that Yellow is hard to read... <.<
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Cepxis was sitting next to Cyrus on his left hand side. His hooves had changed into a greyish colour, meaning that he was in an impassive phase. As they talked about their plans to get the egg, he breifly glanced down at them. They had changed a dark yellow colour and he knew that that meant...
"We're being watched", He whispered,"Don't make a move"
As he sensed the presanced of the person, He honed in on it using his telepathic abilities. It was a small cat and she was using what looked like a vision and audio spell.
I would advise that you do not cross us ... Koni, He said to her as he probed her mind for information , I too can use spells and you know what ... Freeze
He had been preparing to shoot a freezing spell while talking to her and at the time he said freeze, he had released it, hopefully, freezing her and making them able to plan.
ooc: Ratchet, If you think this is complicated, I was am in one of these at the moment on another forum and there is like 6000 words explaining it and how to make your bio, you need to include a job, details of past and liniage, it has it's own currancy, political corruption, magick and LOADS more.
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OOC: It is kinda hard to explain... NUUU!!! <.< meh character just turned to Ice. XD. I will change my font color from yellow to orange. Yellow is abit too flashy.
" I too can use spells and you know what ... Freeze "
At the blink of an eye, ice covered around Koni surrounding her completely. It was like a stationed blizzard simply turning everything inside to ice. Koni had been stroken with her weakness, frost and darkness.
The swamps was dark as the night and the ice was colder then an artic storm. Koni coulnd't move a limb.
"You see, I am a damsell in distress... you wouldn't leave a poor defence less, not to mention BEAUTiful feline like me out in the woods alone now would you? Or is you as cold as this ice? ... well let me heal your damaged soul... let my heat compell you.
Koni sent her womenly vines across the swamps. Of course she knew that Cepxis wouldn't bite on the hook. Her eyes had just started to get used to the blurry darkness.
The ice was so hard. So cold.
Koni could break the ice if she only could grab her umbrella, her wand, her sun. Her eyes got again peeled on the blue dragon by the camp fire.
"I will break our contact now... the next time you sense me near by, give me a notice M'kay!
Koni closed her eyes, the warmth that she had brought Charmed Ridge for years surrounded her. "I am not as stupid as I look Dragon!" .
Crystal shards of diamond dust scattered about on the hill side. Ice flied in all directions.
Koni spun around on her heal making a circular formation with her umbrella. A fire circle. She tapped her heels once and stopped.
A light three times as strong as the camp fire lit as Koni trusted her umbrella to the ground.
Koni had learned some tricks from the Cat wizards, she could manipulate and controll structures and nature.
The flash lasted no longer then three quarters of a second. The Artisans by the camp fire barely noticed.
On the hill side nothing could be seen. Only a ring in the mud.
" until next time... hun!
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When Arcana went to the Misty Bog he knew this was gonig to take a long flight to the portal.As he entered he said to himself,*If I cannot destroy the golden egg then I'd rather die than saty hurt.He jumped itno the prtoal only to find that there was a double portal so he took his chances with the left..it led him straight to one of the portals.He jumped into that one.He got in but only found darkness in most of it.So he started off not knowing the events that would happen here.
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#46 Jan 06, 2008 9:27 PM
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(Hope I can jump in without breaking any of the rules ^_^)
Nothing, just nothing. Nothing filled the young one's mind, nothing. No memories, no thoughts, not even an emotion as he was forced through time and space itself, traveling through the very portal that so many had tried to get through. He did not know he was going through it, then again, he knew nothing at this point, not himself, not even where he had been. It was like he had just been born, fresh and new, without a memory to return to in the lonley dead of the night.
As time and space soon met face to face and the portal's final turning came closer, the young purple dragon's gold eyes slowly opened, a lost, sad gaze in them, his body in a lying position as he was sent soaring through the rip in time travel.
Finally, it ended and the young dragon was sent crashing into the ground, tumbling in a ball and came to a stop. His eyes now closed, his throat dry, he did not even try and get up, his whole mind was slowly starting to rise from the darkness of his slumber, yet still, no memories surfaced. The dragon remained motionless for a few seconds, until his eyes opened once more, but his surrondings were blurred for the moment, with no clue to his location, though in truth, he was barely ten feet away from where the other "heroes" had landed.
"We're going to free his people, travel to the deepest, darkest pits of the volcanic mines and free the lost dragon"
"Then! It's Karaoke!"
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#47 Jan 06, 2008 10:03 PM
- Clawtooth35
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ooc: Errr... Cepxis is a faun.
Whoa, okay, she can use very advanced Fire Magic. Well, a Water spell next time and.. cats hate water anyway.
He looked at his mismatched compatriots. The blue and golden Dragon, Tyras, who, seemingly, had not noticed the sudden dissappearence of their spectator and the strange creature, the Skellagon, Rapide. He appeared to have some hidden agenda and one that required the Egg to be destroyed.
"We'd better get some sleep", Cepxis remarked, I know that tomorow will be a long day".
He began putting up a magic forcefield within 10 meters around the campfire. As he did so, he was muttering enchantments.
"Protecta Requei, Laus Ergo, Horeblis Incantatus...".
When he was finished he turned to his two companions
"These are special forcefields, Nothing that wasn't inside the radius when I cast them will be able to come in. We however will be able to walk in and out of them at our leisure for ... you know. The Neon Yellow Line marks the boundary. I do not have any authority on this matter however I suggest that we use this as our base for the remainder of the campeign. The decision is with you Tyrus".
With that, he found a spot near the edge of the field, unpcked his blanket and slept.
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THE CAKE IS A LIE!!!
THE CAKE IS REAL!!!
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#48 Jan 06, 2008 11:14 PM
- Antr the Rolf
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So when he saw this he had visions of him protecting the golden egg,for which he did not want to happen.His visions showed him training it to kill.He knew this would happen if he did not kill it.
The temptation was to great for him turn away if it happen.So he got so angry he unleashed his black fire.So he stared to grow madder until said.AAAAAAHHHHHH!!I WILL DESTROY THAT EGG!!!As he began to callm down he saw Civex and stopped to talk to him.You.I want to know n help me destroying that egg.Please if I don't I will become its father and protect it forever.I have seen all of the events in this world.I'm an Artisan dragon.I need all the help I can get for this one.
Ayumi...well will miss you dearly..a...changer..in my life..Ayumi..the Demon wolf...best friend,and bro to me.One of the Great 7.
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#49 Jan 07, 2008 3:14 AM
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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story
"Grom... Grom!" a voice called behind Grom. He was sharpning his longsword on a smooth rock he had found in a brook.
Fingering his throwing knife he slowly turned around to see who was calling his name.
"Grom, where have you been? I've been calling and calling for hours. Look, the sun has nearly gone down!" It was Grom's mother, or at least his foster mother.
" Mom, I've been here for hours, you need to learn how to raise your voice."
The instant Grom said that, he wished he hadn't. All the way back to his tent was accompaned by the screaching of an nagging foster mother. When he was finally free of her Grom thought his ears were bleeding.
Grom was woken in the night by the sounds of running feet and screams.
Instictivly he grabbed his sword and his few daggers. Not thinking about anything but the screams.
As he exited the tent a scream of utter horror came to him. Burning tents, running and screaming peopl, little children trampled. And off in the distance the glitter of axes and swords.
"What the hell is happing?!?!?!" Wondered Grom as he grabbed a passing woman.
"What is going on lady? Why is everyone running around like chickens with their head chopped off?"
"Because," ansered the lady with fear in her eyes,"they've come..."
Grom knew who "they" were very well. It was something they had feared happing for over 3 years, ever since wind of that damed dragon egg had come to their tribe.
As if to substanseate the lady's claim, a white banner with a sigle, green scale came into view. The lizards had come, not just a tine raiding party, a whole tribe or two.
"This sucks...." thought Grom as his grip on the lady's arm losened and she ran off screaming.[/code]
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#50 Jan 07, 2008 3:23 AM
- sleva10
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"Clawtooth35"ooc: Errr... Cepxis is a faun.
OOC: Sorry I forgot. Got avit mixed up by your sifnature :-P
I knew one of you was a faun, and I just couldn't get the two otheres to fit XD. I should've re checked your post shouldn't I. :-|
Now it's time to be alittle *bleep*y. O:)
@ Deathseeker: Try to write abit longer story parts. If thats hard, try to fill in spaces by adding thoughts and movements of your character. Describing the surrounding area is quite a good way to bring up the tension too.
@ Pyros: Good introduction. Making the world seen to your characters eyes is a good way to connect the stories.
@ Clawtooth35: Very good stories, have you done this before?
@ Brom The wise: Good introduction. keep it up
@ Everyone else: Those who haven't introduced them selves yet can do so at any times. Even though the PC story has starred it's very open so people can join at all times. No mary sues. <- Google it!
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I will post my story more rarly now, as I will only see if things is going the right way.
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Koni was sitting in a rotten tree not far from the closest castle. The fog had begun to lighten and the moon light changed the mood in the swamps. Shining blue waves of energy flowed through the woods. There was almost no wind, only a green fog laying thick over the acid water.
"What a sight! What a sight indeed"
Koni unfolded her Golden umbrella and jumped down from the tree.
"Shan't I bring alitle grace to the party..."
As the moon waves colored the dark misty swamps with its crystal hands a comforting heat covered the area.
Koni raised her umbrella to the air and started her famous dance. She shone as the sun itself among the moon waves. Her dance brought a bewitched beauty over the swamps. She was throwing a spell over the area. A curse.
"Those petty Artisans will pass me here tomorrow"
She spun around emiting a wave of fire which covered around her. She stepped forward starting to manipulate the fires. She twisted and stretched them with her dance. Koni was surrounded by a blazinf tornado, a tornado that had the light of a thousand stars in the dark swamps.
"Play of the day..."
As Koni thrusted her umbrella across the tree the flames went like a burning arrow straight across it. .The fires consumed the tree and created a pentagon star in the air.
"... I love this game!"
As Koni jumped up and glided across the misty swamps, the moon waves hid the trace of fire behind her. And as Koni slowly disappeared into the mist you could see that the branches of the tree silently began to move. Koni had thrown a manipulate curse, a curse to keep her enemies away from her goal.
But Koni did not know, that her enemies from the Dragon Realms was not the only foes hiding amongst the mist. Her dance had cought unwanted attention.
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