#2676 Jun 13, 2008 10:01 PM

LordRattler

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Re: Star Fox/Spyro RPG

Rhapsody:Oh crud thats even worse!!Flare please don't do this please!!!

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Flare: Uugg....

Firestar: Noooo...... *cries* I wished Kova was here!

Kyle: *thinks* 'how does he know him?'

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*at lordrattlers lair*

Dulio:OH CMON NOWS THE PERFECT TIME TO ATTACK RATTLER!!!

LordRattler:For the last time NO!We will siege the temple in 3 days...

Dulio:But this is a good time to attack!!Uggh!!

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Rhapsody:Please Flare don't do this to yourself..

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Flare: *coughs* ......

Firestar: Oh what can we do!?

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Rhapsody:Cynder what can save Flare tell us please!!!

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Cynder: I... I don't know...

Flare: ............Guys?

Firestar: *cries* F-Flare?

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OOC: I think we should wait for Shade.

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Re: Star Fox/Spyro RPG

(Yeah lets stop for now.)

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OOC: Very well then we shall wait...last post i guess then

Wedger: *hugs Rhapsody while also stroking her head then looks at all of them* there is one thing...at my city which was where i was adopted by human that turned me into a human and now since im dragon for real this time we have a jewel called...lifes jewel it can save him but its physiclly impossible to get to its heavily guarded by Nuva and his men...

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Flare: ........Guys?

(My last post too here.

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OOC: thanks, but i gotta go soon..... so keep up the good work...

Spyro: Yes Flare??? you ok???
*Fresa walks out to the group and looks at them*
Fresa: I heard crying, is everyone ok???

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OOC: *sighs* You never seem to stay on very long.

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Flare: ...... Im going to pass away soon....

Firestar: No don't! Flare please no!

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Rhapsody:Flare please no....

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Flare: Rhaps.......... I always loved you...  A whole lot.

Firestar: Oh no. Please! Let Kova be here to save him!

Kyle: *walks off to get Kova whispering* He may be far.... But its my choice.

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Wedger: *stops hugging Rhaps* Flare dont die hang in there man...hang in there! please...

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Rhapsody:Yeah please don't die...We would be very sad...

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OOC: It has come to my attention that this RPG is spiraling out of control. Now, I'm not going to flame the people who are making 10 and more pages and not having ANY consideration for other people who live in different time zones or jobs or lives outside of this site (Amazing isn't it?) But stop it. If a person hasn't been on for a while, just stop, and do something else while you wait for them to come back. It shows courtesy, something that you'll need for the outside world.

And also, for a good story, you actually need to RESOLVE one climax before adding another. And back to back climaxes are annoying and, well, to put it bluntly, n00bish. It shows little creativity when you have to continually add in a new villain or character to keep a story going. Take a break (hey you could think of the plot while someone else isn't on. OMG multi-tasking!) go somewhere else, watch tv. Keeping the story interesting doesn't necessarily mean to put the characters in a never ending battle. This is one of the reasons why I left. I'd take a break one day and there's been three battles and someone died and etc etc etc.

So for the sake of RP'ing, stop RP'ing like a n00b, and start RP'ing like someone who knows what they're doing.

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OOC: yay! go CR!!!!

Spyro: Listen to them please...
Fresa: Your gonna kill yourself... *Smiles* Why would a cute boy like you do that?

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(Im not a noob. I've done this a lot before on other forums. -_-)

Flare: *looks away* Im not killing myself now.... Im just dying.........

Kyle: *at least a few miles from the temple.* I can't let Flare die like this. I just have to get him back.

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OOC: dont worry, it was just today we went out of controll and uber post clashed to the max.....
Fresa: hmm.... well I know some healing spells, and i think i could help you.... *Fresa walks to him, and begins to look at him* what do you feel?
Spyro: *surprisecd by her attitude* wow... hey Cyn.... hows the kids?

OOC: I have plan, let me PM you MS300

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Cynder: The kids are doing good.

Flare: ...........Why?............. Why do you want to save ME.......?

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OOC: again, I wasn't DIRECTLY calling anyone a n00b. I don't even know half the people in this now. I'm just saying that there are a few people who are acting like n00bs.

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Wedger: She problly wants to save you because your a very close friend to all of us *yawns a little almost falling asleep but wakes up but when he was falling asleep he knows whats going to happen in 3 days due to his vision powers* Rhapsody...i have to go to my old home...the one thats crawling with Nuva's men and Nuva himself

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Flare: ...... Just leave me alone....