A place where noone should go...

Madatek · Jun 20, 2013 7:58 PM

This is just the concept of a story i was thinking on...
i would like to share it with you people... (sorry for eventual language errors, but English is not my main language big_smile )

Spyro talks in first person, while telling a tale to Cynder (I know, there are characters of both Spyro Sagas, but there will be so many strange things in this story...), about a very dangerous AND terrifying moment he past...
All places are invented.
Ah, another thing.
When you see a line which starts with
- it mean Spyro interrupts or starts an internal monologue. If you see a line which starts with
--- it means that is not Spyro taking, but a detail for increase detail of narration (The music in background normally)
During the whole movie (i hope someone animates it big_smile ) this music plays:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=geFhtD-ZXoA
"Sun was going down. It was cold and windy and rainy I was at the Stripped Bones Forest. I don't (or, for say it in a better way, i didn't) know why it was called that way, but i will talk about it later. I only knew that dragon of my age should not enter there. Everyone (Thomas, Ignitus... everyone) told me to not go there. But when i asked why they continued with another argument. You know me, Cynder, you know that i am curious.."
Cynder: "You should know that curiosity may kill"
Spyro: "I was also a little reckless at that times... anyway, watching the forest from outside, i felt an instinctive fear...
I told myself:
It's just a freakin' forest. Come on, Spyro, it is just a bunch of trees!
Yeah.. dead trees, without a single leaf. But is not that -
[glow=red:9352575c66]At that time, i heard a horrible, horrible scream.... it was not from a Dragon, and I also thought it may be probably come from hell![/glow:9352575c66]
Anyway, I gathered my courage, took my breath, and went in there... Cynder are you sleeping?"
Cynder: "Heck no, i was just imagining the scene in my mind, manage to recreate image better with closed eyes... please continue.."
Spyro: "Well, i started walking in there, and my fear quickly passed.
Walking, walking.... i noticed that there were many bones downthere, but it didn't impress me. It could be a little animal died for nat...
-I saw a dragon skull...
...ural disease, hey, what the...
-The skull shown evident signals of a fight before death. That means, it has been attacked. At that time, two parts of myself started talking:
1) Ok, you now have the 90% percent of probabilities of chances of knowing the reason why this forest is also called "A place where noone should go..." The suspension marks are in the name. Yeah, i am serious!
2) But what really happened? I need to investigate.
Of course, i chosen the second option, because otherwise we would not be here right now..."

"It was night now. I continued go on. And again, and again, until...
I saw the most terrible thing a dragon, or just anyone, could see...
Two monsters, that seemed like giant spiders, were eating a dragon (She was a female dragon, green skin, and she was already dead.) I discovered who took the scream at the beginning of my adventure
I felt paralyzed. I mean, i already had fear before (courage is not to don't have fear, and is not ignoring it. It is just about to not to lose confidence in your abilities and skills. Fight a too powerful danger is not courage, is madness. Understood me?). That time was different, i felt my heart to accelerate, my breathe to go down, my stomach started i was sweating, and i am fairly sure i could become pink."

"Then, that two things begun staring at me. I closed my eyes and told myself:
-If you run you become a prey, if you run you become a prey, if you run you become a prey...
I was clearly terrified, but i thought that the best strategy (or the less bad one...) was standing and prepare to fight. But this idea died, when i realized that i was too weak to breathe fire, ice or electricity. And i didn't use water, since water was too precious on that time...
Also, remember the sensations of few seconds ago...
So, i started running. Or, at least, i tried to start running. In fact, i was only moving at half ot my normal speed, my legs just refused to move.
I felt something to push me down. I fell. When i raised my head, i saw that horrible spider, its teeth were grounding blood and venom.
It bited me. I didn't feel any pain, but i screamed, because i knoew i was pretty screwed. I just fell unconcious in few seconds.
I woke up for some seconds. I saw that a dragon was fighting near my body. It was an adult dragon, i could say an elder one. His skin was red, his horns and wings purple. It seemed familiar to me, but i didn't had time to analyze it, i fell unconciious again...
I woke up again. Someone was carrying me on his shoulders, he was Ignitus. That red dragon of before was falling down, he was dying. A little moan came out of my mouth. Then, all went white. Then the darkness.
I woke up in an hospital bed,i felt a really bitter taste, and i discovered i was badly injured. I started feeling pain only in that moment.
I saw Ignitus near me. I asked him what happened, and he answered me:
You are safe now. Don't worry about anything else..."
But i can't stop worrying, about that red dragon who was fighting near my body. I read on a paper that Red the dragon, the villain of the dark gems(i think you heard about him, Cynder), escaped from the bottle where me and the Professor imprisoned him.
Everything connected.
I don't know why, i started crying. He helped me, but why? I never felt so guilty until that time. So, i went to police, and told all the story to the chief of officers. At the end i told him:
"Nothing of what i told you have to be diffounded. Only that an attendible source knows that Red is dead, and he redempted himself in his last hours. I think he deserves a funeral."
There has been a funeral. There was only me. And i am the only one who, every 13 of February, goes on his grave, without a body inside, and takes him some flowers.
He changed, and he deserved to live more.
It was all my fault.
Curiosity actually killed, but it didn't kill me. But i think i deserved to die in that occasion... maybe..."
---Spyro can't hold tear, Cynder hugs him
Well, the end
What do you think about it?
I would be very glad if someone makes a good animation from this.
And reserve a little place in you heart for 13th February.
All for now,
Madatek

#1 Jun 20, 2013 7:58 PM

A place where noone should go...

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