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#1 Feb 23, 2007 11:06 PM
- Super Trunks
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My Comicbooks
I have been writing and drawing my own comicbooks for 4 years now, and I want to do it for a proffession when I get out of school.
I've posted most of the issues I've already finished, enjoy!
Issue #1:This is the first Issue I ever made, it tells the story of a young scientists named Fred Johnson who while studying a recently discovered meteor rock is zapped by a huge dose of radiation that gives him unique and strange powers. He decides to use these powers for good and becomes the greatest hero of all time, Captain Justice. It also tells of another scientists named Dr. Brainus who accidently spills a toxic chemical on top of his head, it enlarges his brain and gives him telepathic abilitys along with super strength. This scientists decides to use his powers to try to rule the world, he becomes arch nemesis to CJ(Captian Justice) his name is Commander Evil.
Issue #2:In this issue CJ meets his most powerful adversarie yet. Commander Evil breaks into a Museum and steals a piece of the meteor rock that gave CJ his powers. He then teleports to his lab and uses this meteor rock to awaken and give life to his most evil creation yet........Anti-Justice, a complete robotic copy of CJ, he posses all of CJ's powers and is a great deal stronger than our hero. On a routine flight to check up on the city, CJ finds parts of it in rumble. After a short introduction Commander Evil leaves and a vicious beating by Anti-Justice begins, after being brought to the brink of death by Anti, CJ is knocked unconcious. A few hours later CJ awakens to find himself chained up and in Commander Evil's lair. There Commander Evil reveals that he has destroyed all of the radioactive DNA in CJ's system, CJ no longer has his powers! Soon after Commander Evil leaves a fellow Superhero rescues CJ named Mr. Stretcho. CJ and MS(Mr. Stretcho) make a plan, while CJ goes to find the radioactive meteor rock that gave him his powers, MS will go and try to stop Commander Evil's plan to take over the city. When CJ gets to the lab where he got his powers it is in rubble, it turns out CM(Commander Evil) and his men had already been there searching for the meteor rock in the hopes of making Anti stronger. CJ eventually finds the meteor rock but for some reason it appears to not be radioactive anymore and just touching it as he did before doesn't give CJ his powers back. But just then Anti arrives and starts to put a vicious beating on CJ, just when Anti is about to shoot the final blast and put an end to our hero, CJ throughs the meteor rock at the blast blocking it and destroying the meteor rock. Anti thinks that CJ just destroyed the last chance of ever getting his powers back, but CJ reveals that he threw the rock into the blast on purpose so that the last bit of radiation inside the rock would flood the room. Now with his powers back and stronger than ever CJ turns the tables on Anti, and in a final beam struggle between the two, CJ over comes Anti and blows his head to pieces. After Anti's defeat CJ joins MS and together they stop CM's plans and save the city once again.
Issue #3:This issue just tells how a pety thief is taken over by an alien parasite and becomes one of the most powerful villians ever. In the end CJ throughs him in a lake and eletricutes him. He is taken to jail and CJ once again saves the day.
This is a four part triligy.
Issue #4: This is the first of a four part triligy. In the begining of this issue Commander Evil breaks Transformo(The villian from Issue #3) out of jail. They team up so that they can defeat Captain Justice, but Commander Evil has a much darker plan up his sleve. CM(Commander Evil) takes Transformo to the rubble of a destroyed science building, there he asked for a sample of the Symbiote that inhabits Transformo's body and gives him his powers, he agrees. Meanwhile, a man decides to go for a swim in what turns out to be the lake where CJ(Captian Justice) and Transformo had their epic battle. During their battle a piece of Transformo's symbiote was blown off into the lake. Suddenly the lake starts turning a strange color and the man is swallowed up by it. He emerges and he has become a whole new person for he has now been taken over by a piece of the symbiote, he has become Proffessor H2O! Elsewhere at the destroyed science building CM finds what he was looking for.........the remains of Anti-Justice! With the sample Transformo gave him he rebuilds Anti and with Transformo's symbiote fused with his systems he now has Transformo's regeneration ability. Then a mysterious stranger asked to join CM, Anti, and Transformo....its Proffesor H2O! The four most powerful villians to ever lived have joined up with one goal in mind, the destruction of Captain Justice! The next day the White House in D.C. is attacked and the president is killed, CM and his new found partners have taken over the White House! Just then CJ arrives to stop them. But he is suprised to see Anti and Transformo. CM commands Anti to take care of CJ while him and the others commince thier plan to take over the world. CJ and Anti begin their epic battle but CJ is overwelmed by Anti's newfound power. Just then CJ fires one last blast blowing Anti's arm off. Thinking he has the battle won CJ is about the fire one last blast to finnaly finish Anti once and for all, but just then Anti's arm begins to regenerate. Anti then fires a powerful blast at the astonished CJ, blowing his arm off! The now collapsing CJ is then pierced by one last blast through the chest by Anti........Captain Justice is DEAD!!!!
[B][U]Issue #5: 1 year later Commander Evil and his new henchmen have full control over the entire world! But in a small lake the lifeless corpse of our hero continues to decay. Just then the lake starts to turn into a strange color and a small droplet of the newly colored water goes into one of CJ's cuts from the battle with Anti. Then the impossible happens............CJ comes back to life! The lake in New York where the battle between Transformo and CJ took place had somehow over the course of a year flowed into the lake in D.C. where CJ met his untimely demise. Now with a small portion of the piece of Transformo's symbiote that had fused with the lake CJ now has the power to regenerate. After learning that CM had taken over the planet and that it had been one year CJ sets off so that he can save what's left of planet earth and finnaly put a end to Commander Evil's rule. On the way to CM's palace CJ is confronted by Transformo, suprised to see CJ alive Transformo attacks but CJ disbatches of him easily. For it seems along with the new power of regeneration CJ's powers have increased 10 fold. Also along the way he finds and disbatches of Proffessor H2O. Finnaly he reaches his destination and is confronted by the very man who killed him.........Anti-Justice! They engage in what turns out to be an intense battle but Anti is soon overwhelmed with CJ's new found power, in despiration Anti does th unthinkable.....he rips his arms off. Once he does he shoots a huge string of wires at the uncouncious Proffessor H2O and Transformo. Then CJ's worst fears are realized Anti absorbs Transformo and H2O to form the most powerful villian ever created.........Anti-Hydructor is born!!!
Issue #6: After absorbing Transformo nd Proffesssor H2O Anti has transformed into the ultimate killing machine.....Anti-Hydructor. CJ and Anti-Hydructor get into a ferocious battle, but CJ is highly out matched by the overwelming power of this new enemy. Eventually Anti-Hydructor knocks out CJ and absorbs him! Anti then gains all of CJ's powers aswell. But then suddenly Anti-Hydructor begins shakeing.............BOOM!!!! He is blown to pieces and CJ falls to the ground. CJ had defeated the nearly invincible Anti-Hydructor by blowing him up from the inside. Suddenly CJ is hit by a small blast, CJ turns around and its none other than Commander Evil. The two biggest arch rivals of all time are about to battle it out to determine the fate of planet earth. Captain Justice Vs. Commander Evil!
Issue #7: This is the last part of the four part Return triligy. The biggest battle of all time Captain Justice Vs. Commander Evil has begun. The epic clash is a long one, CM and CJ are completely evenly matched. Near the end of the battle CJ and CM engage in an epic beam struggle but in the end CJ over powers CM and blows off his arm. CJ gives him a chance to go peacefully but CM isn't quite up for a bargain and with one last desperate blast CM hopes to finish CJ once and for all but CJ easily overpowers the blast an it is shot back at CM, blowing half of his head off and burying him in rubble, ending their epic clash. But as soon as CJ leaves the battle field, the rubble starts to collapse and............the hand of Commander Evil pops out!!!!
This 6 part triligy is by far my best yet.
Issue #8: Barely alive after his intense battle with Captain Justice, Commander Evil uses what little strength he has left to teleport back to his lab. Meanwhile, a strange new villian has appeared and has started to attack and destroy city after city. Elsewhere in a parrellel universe a galactic tyrant has sent his troops to an uninhabited planet where they hope to find an ancient device of epic proportions. Back in our galaxy CJ(Captain Justice) has arrived to stop this rampaging new villian who reveals himself as The Teleporter. Back in the parellel universe the tyrant's (who goes by the name Roka) men have found the device they were searching for. This device is called an Arkeshian Gateway and there is one in each parellel universe, Roka who has already conquered his universe hopes to use this gateway to go to another universe and conquer that as well. Once Zorotu(Roka's #1) had attached a device to the gateway so that Roka could send his entire fleet through to the other universe he was called back to Roka's mother ship. Leaving two of his men to guard the gateway, Zorotu transported aboard. Suddenly the two soldiers Zorotu had left in charge were shot by a raygun and killed, and a man named Blaze Chaser(Roka's arch nemesis) stepped out of the shadows, preppared to stop Roka at all cost. Meanwhile Commander Evil emerged from a reguevination capsule and now inplanted with robotic implants to replace his missing limbs, he set out to get his revenge on CJ. Elsewhere CJ and The Teleporter were having an epic battle when all of a sudden the sky turned black and a huge wormhole opened up in the sky. In Blaze's universe it appeared he was to late and without warning Roka had already activated the gateway and started to send his troops in. Left with no other options Blaze went throuh the now active gateway in hopes of stopping Roka on the other side. Back in our universe The Teleporter left suddenly exclaiming that he has to go warn someone named Kern about what was transpiring. CJ, who had paid no attention to The Teleporter taking his leave was amazed by what was going on. Thousands of ships leaded by a huge mother ship was coming through the womhole in the sky. Elsewhere the gateway in CJ's universe was active and Blaze stepped through, and without hesitation he flew off towards Roka's fleet. Elsewhere CJ was suddenly surrounded by an army of Roka's soldiers and out of no where Blaze jumped in and with a quick introduction, the two hero's started a long and costly battle to save the universe.
I'll add the other 5 Issues later!
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#2 Feb 24, 2007 1:17 AM
- dragonoftheflames
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Re: My Comicbooks
Where can I be able to read these or is it something your trying to show us? Anyway, these look interesting. Reminds me of captain underpants.
Ah Everythings back to normal.
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#3 Feb 24, 2007 1:52 AM
- Super Trunks
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Re: My Comicbooks
Where can I be able to read these or is it something your trying to show us? Anyway, these look interesting. Reminds me of captain underpants.
Well I can't scan every single page to each comicbook because all together it would be like 300 or so pages, thats why I posted a summary to each issue under the covers. But I'm glad you like them.
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