Romeo and Juliet: Tale of Love

Malefor · Nov 27, 2008 1:06 AM

That's right, I'm making a new Fanfic. called: Romeo and Juliet: Tale of Love.
It's about 18 year old, Romeo, the slug( from Ripto's rage) and 18 year old, Juliet, the bird (from Ripto's rage.)

Story

When Romeo, a slug of Zepyr meets Juliet, a bird of Breeze Harbor, they immeadeatly fall in love, but while they're in love a War starts, Breeze Builder vs. Slug, Breeze Harbor vs. Zepyr, now their families are sworn enemies, and they cannot be together, the war moves on, until finaly Romeo and Juliet descide to sneak out to a hideaway, and get together.
Romeo and Juliet: Tale of Love is perfect for a Love story for couples or daters!

Chapter 1 A Normal time at Zepyr and Breeze Harbor

Romeo marched out of his home and to a lake, he fished for fish, and brung home 12 fish to his family.
"I'm home!" shouted Romeo as he entered his house.
"Welcome back, son!" said Romeo's dad to Romeo.
"Yes, welcome!" replied Romeo's mom.
"Romeo, I need you to get some herbs for the Tribe, they're on the far side of the Valley." said Romeo's dad.
"Okay dad!" Romeo said as he went outside.
"Be careful!" said Romeo's mom as she kissed him, along with a hug.
"I will, mom!" Romeo said as he began down the Valley in search for herbs.
It was late by the time Romeo found herbs, he saw a distent land, with ships ahead!

Meanwhile,
It was late at night, Juliet snuck out of her nest, and went out to to her Star watching spot, she sat down near where a distent land was.
"I have to find a Mate...." said Juliet.

Malefor · Nov 27, 2008 1:51 PM

More!

Chapter 2 Love of the night

Romeo was amazed of himself, he had never seen such a place!
"Maybe I'll just.... see what's on the other side." said Romeo.
Romeo slid closer to where the new world began, but he saw a Bird sitting down near by, it was Beauteful, with sparkling blue eyes, and wonderful colors!
Juliet looked over to find a Slug.
It was Hansom, with purple skin, and blue eyes.
Romeo and Juliet had found a crush!
"Escuse me, mam, but may I ask of you, what is on this side of thy World?" asked Romeo in a wonder.
"Oh you wouldn't like it, so what yonder your World?" asked Juliet in a wonder.
"Oh just grass, slugs, homes, anything like that." replied Romeo.
A bird came flying close to Juliet and landed.
"Juliet, what are you doing out here so late?!" asked the bird for it was her mom.
Romeo dashed to a bush before he could be seen.
"So her name is Juliet." thought Romeo.
Once the other Bird started to pull her away, Juliet waved at Romeo.
Soon, the 2 birds were gone, and Romeo went backhome with the Herbs.

Hope you like it, more chapters will come, but please coment!

Spyro_For_Life · Dec 03, 2008 10:24 PM

I think it's a good story. I remember the slug and the bird. Romeo and Juliet.
Romeo (To Spyro): (Recites that 'Yonder Window thing', and Spyro's clueless) That window up there dummy!
XD

Malefor · Dec 06, 2008 7:01 PM

Chapter 3 The sightence

Romeo reached home and slept.
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The Next day,

"And now, Sgt. Roger, you must search for more land to claim!" commanded Romeo's Dad to Sgt. Roger.
Sgt. Roger obeyed and went searching for more land to claim, he reached a path and followed it.
Sgt. Roger reached a place where another part of the world started.
Ahead were many, many, ships!
"That was quick!" said Sgt. Roger to himself.
Sgt. Roger saw a bird saying that they were having a big castle built for the Breeze Builders.
"So they are called the Breeze Builders......" exclaimed Sgt. Roger.
Sgt. Roger went back to Romeo's dad and told him the news:
"I proclaim war against the Breeze Builders for land! For now on, we will be battling for life until we have claimed their land! Zephr vs. Breeze Harbor!" shouted Romeo's father to the kingdom.
Romeo was shocked, for the land where he met the beauteful bird Juliet was Breeze Harbor, and Juliet was a Breeze Builder!
Juliet heard the news too and she snuck out late to find Romeo at where the lands met, and Romeo did the same thing for that was the only place they could see each other.
Finaly they found each other at a garden near by.

Spyro_For_Life · Dec 06, 2008 7:43 PM

Cool. smile I like how it's coming along so far.

Malefor · Jan 29, 2009 2:51 PM

Chapter 4 The Garden
"So, Romeo, I heard about the war, and I guess we will have to hide." said Juliet.
"Yeah........" replied Romeo, he had a bunch of flowers in his hands.
"Oh Romeo, I do!" replied Juliet.
The cold wind rustled across the sky, Romeo heard a rustle in a bush.
"What was that?" asked Romeo.
"Probly nothing....." replied Juliet.
A Breeze Builder and a Slug came out.
"You cannot be together, we are sworn enemies and will not tallorate! How could you Slugs let him get to my daughter!" shouted Juliet's mother.
Romeo's dad gave a horrid glance at Romeo.
Juliet's mother grabbed Juliet and dragged her away.
Romeo reachedout a hand to grab Juliet's, but Romeo's Dad got in the way.
"You shall nver be with her, young man!" shouted Romeo's father.
"But Dad........" began Romeo.
"But nothing!" shouted Romeo's dad.
Romeo's dad dragged Romeo all the way back home.
Romeo took one last glance at Juliet as she disappeared.
Romeo looked at where Julietand her mother was going, a high up tower in a castle with a mere glass window.

Spyro_For_Life · Feb 10, 2009 9:48 PM

O_O Oh noes. Why must parents get in the way of true love?

Malefor · Feb 13, 2009 1:08 AM

I Don't know!
Chapter 5 Yond'er the Window breaks

"Dad! I love her, why must you keep us away from each other?!" asked Romeo.
"You know we are enemies!!" yelled Romeo's dad.
Romeo did not answer, he just went outside.
"Where are you going?" asked Romeo's dad.
"To the Tower!" replied Romeo as he got on his horse and ran off.
Romeo reached the Tower.
Juliet was looking through the glass window, she was waiting for Romeo to come for her when she saw Romeo on his horse.
Romeo threw a rock at the Window and broke it.
He got off his horse.
Romeo was not sure how he would get Juliet down.
A Purple dragon alked up to him.
"What lies Yond'er the window breaks?" asked Romeo.
Spyro looked at him, a bit confused.
"That window up their, dummy!" said Romeo pointing at the Window.
Minutes later,
Spyro brought back Juliet.
"Oh Juliet, I'll never loose you again!" said Romeo to Juliet.
Spyro walked off.
Juliet's mother came up to Juliet and dragged her.
"You missy, shall never be with him!" hissed Juliet's mother.
Romeo looked at Juliet.
He hopped onto his horse and ran after Juliet.
Juliet's mother gave Juliet some sleeping medicine.

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