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#1 Jan 11, 2009 9:56 PM
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"Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
Here is a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
It is so sad and I must admit I cried a little when I write this
And thanks to my correcter Genobee8492 fom DA for correction of this story ^^
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“*Cough cough*” the purple dragon had gotten a severe illness and he wouldn’t survive it.
The black dragoness cried, she would have been with him her whole life, why should he get sick.
“*Cough* Cynder…” said the purple dragon weakly.
“Yes Spyro?” the black dragoness took one of her loves paws and held it tight, she knew that he would die soon so she would do anything that he would have asked her to do.
“*Cough* You should have *cough* have something so you can remember me. *cough cough*” he tried to say to his love.
“*sniff* what is it Spyro?” the black dragoness could not take it any longer.
“A child. *cough*”
The black dragoness squeezed his paw.
“What do you mean?”
“*Cough* A child *cough* when you see our child you shall*cough* always be able to think about me.” Said the purple dragon as he looked into his loves beautiful emerald-green eyes.
The black dragoness thought about it and answered:
“Okay Spyro if that is your will, I will have your child.”
She wanted to have a child with him but he should be with her and the child and not die.
They did it that night and the next morning she found her love dead, he died with a happy smile on his face.
They buried him outside the temple and put a statue of him on his grave where they stood:
“Here rests Spyro the purple dragon, the hero of us all.”
The black dragoness stood in front of his grave and cried.
“*sniff* Spyro I’ll never forget you.”
-A few years later-
A young dragon runs to the black dragoness.
“Look mom isn’t these the most beautiful flowers you have ever seen?”
The young purple dragoness showed her some flowers she has found.
“Yes they are beautiful.” The black dragoness looked over her lovely daughter, she looked like her father.
“Mom?” the young purple dragoness looked at her mom with the most beautiful purple eyes.
“What is it darling?”
“Who was my father?” asked the young purple dragoness.
The black dragoness hadn’t told her about her father’s death, because she hadn’t gotten over his death yet, she then began to cry.
The young purple dragoness looked worried about her mother and asked:
“Did I say something wrong mom?”
The black dragoness wipe her tears off.
“*Sniff* No, no darling…it’s just…come with me.”
She couldn’t tell her so she decided to show her father´s grave.
When they came to the grave the young purple dragoness asked:
“What is it?”
The black dragoness wipe another tear off.
“This is were your father lies… *sniff*”
“So…he’s dead?” asked the purple dragoness sadly.
“*sniff* y-yes *sniff*”
The black dragoness got all her memories about her love back and she began to cry.
“You shouldn’t cry mom.” The young purple dragoness leaned on her mother.
The black dragoness took her paw and held her daughter, her reminder of her love.
“Spyro…*sniff*… I’ll never forget you.”
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#2 Jan 13, 2009 8:54 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
Very tender moments between Cynder and Spyro. So sad to see either of them die in any Spyro fanfic. Also, I like the moment you had between Cynder and her daughter.
However, its difficult for me to imagine Spyro succumbing to a disease. Maybe he was poisoned by the Dark Master or one of his cronies?
Anyhow, I bid you good luck on all of your stories. I've never been able to concurrently update more than two at a time, and anyone who can do more is really good in my book.
Also, be sure to give me a review of my fanfic so far, (if I haven't mentioned it before). Its rather long, but I'm sure you'll like it. Even if its just a sentence, I'll really appreciate it.
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#3 Jan 13, 2009 8:57 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
Thanks for the comment (The first).
Okay What is it called?
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#4 Jan 13, 2009 9:00 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
Legend of Spyro, The Heart of Convexity
Its only a few posts down on the fanfiction section. You can't miss it.
Maybe I should make myself signiature that points out the story then. It could give me a few more views and comments.
Thanks.
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#5 Jan 13, 2009 9:06 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
Sorry but I will not read it today, it is getting late and I'm not in the mood to reading so maybe another time. (^_^)
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#6 Feb 26, 2009 1:19 AM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
Okay, you might freak out on this reply. I prefer THIS story over a Cynder Death story. :-| Don't take it personally, I just... really... like... Cynder.
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#7 Feb 26, 2009 9:56 AM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
How can I freak out on THAT comment?
You said that you liked it because it wasn't Cynder there died...
So seriously... What the heck do you mean?
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#8 Feb 28, 2009 10:22 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
The answer; I have................. no clue :-| :s. Just don't yell at me..... LOL.
One day the unreal shall be real, the fallen shall rise, and the nightmares shall become a reality. Those who follow shall earn life eternal. Those who don't shall die. The rising of the Dark Lord shall be humanity's undoing. All hail the Dark Lord of the Sith.
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#9 Feb 28, 2009 10:29 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
???... ... ... *bleep* you are more wired then I am XD
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#10 Mar 01, 2009 8:37 AM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
I find it slightly strange that on the last day of his life, he decides to get Cynder pregnant, knowing full well he will not be able to support the family in any way. Tut tut Spyro...
It is often said that before you die your life passes before your eyes. It is in fact true. It's called living.
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#11 Mar 01, 2009 12:42 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
He wanted to give her something so she always could remember him...
So why not a child?...
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#12 Mar 24, 2009 2:41 AM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
I admit, this did make me cry a little ^_^
I just find the idea of Spyro dying very sad.
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#13 Mar 24, 2009 4:36 PM
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Re: "Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy
I cried a lot when I write this story...
But I liked how it tuned out...
And I like that you cryied... that means that it was a good sad story (^_^)
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