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#1 Apr 05, 2009 8:12 AM
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Cynder is Drunk
I was inspired by this picture -> http://jonas-sloth.deviantart.com/art/C … -109059041
to write this story... XD
And it tells that... DON'T DRINK KIDS!!! (O.o)
Please comment!
And thanks to my correcter Genobee8492 fom DA for correction of this story ^^
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A few years after Malefor’s defeat the two dragons now lived in peace in the temple.
They had started to train new dragons that could be helpful if a new evil showed up.
The purple dragon and the black dragoness took some boxes inside the temple.
“Who was it that gave us these boxes?” asked the black dragoness.
“From the human realm, it is a kind of a drink that they drink a lot of…I think it is called beer.” answered the purple dragon.
“Humans are some odd people…they walk around in ‘clothes’, pants and blouses.” laughed the black dragoness.
“Yeah they are…Cynder I’ll be back in a second, I will get the last box.” said the purple dragon and left the room.
By accident the black dragoness opened one of the boxes.
Inside the boxes there were many small bottles with a golden-brown liquid.
The black dragoness was curious and took one of the bottles and tasted the liquid.
After she took a drink she felt a strange but good feeling in her stomach.
“Wow this actually tastes good.” She said and continued to drink.
After some time the purple dragon was back with the last box, he was surprised over what he saw when he entered the room.
There lied nine empty bottles and the black dragoness was drinking the tenth bottle.
“Cynder! What are you doing?” he asked.
The black dragoness looked at him with a drunken face.
“*hik* Hey Spyros *hik* all three.”
He looked confused at her.
“What do you mean with ‘all three’?” he asked.
“*hik* You, you, and you *burp*” she said and pointed beside the purple dragon.
“Cynder…are you drunk?” asked the purple dragon.
“NO!” she said and tried to walk towards him but instead walked in circles.
“Why *hik* do you think that? *hik*” she asked while she laughed.
“Cynder you are really drunk.” the purple dragon sighed.
“No *hik* I’m not.” she tried to slap him but misses and falls into the purple dragon’s arms.
“Cynder what if the young students saw you now, what would they think?” said the purple dragon.
“Spyro…*hik* I want our kids *burp* should drink.” said the drunken dragoness.
“Oh boy.” said the purple dragon with a deep sigh.
“No *hik* I want a girl *hik*” she said and tried to look serious but ended up laughing.
“I want that too Cynder.” said the purple dragon with a wry smile.
“Spyro *burp* Why don’t you have any pants on? *hik* Why don’t I have any pants on!?” she asked surprised.
The purple dragon came with a even deeper sigh.
“You are a dragon Cynder…you don’t need pants, only humans need them.” said the purple dragon.
“But then *hik* will I be a *hik* human!” said the black dragoness and tried to sound serious.
“Do you really want that?” asked the purple dragon.
There went some time before she answered:
“NO!”
“I want *hik* another drink *hik*” she said and tried to walk straight to the box with the beer.
“Cynder you shouldn’t drink anymore.” Said the purple dragon worried.
“*hik* Come on Spyro *hik* it tastes good.” said the drunken dragoness and took another bottle.
The purple dragon took the bottle from her, she looked at him with an annoyed face.
“Ohh *hik* Spyro give it *hik* to me.”
“No you’re too drunk.”
“No I’m *hik* not.” She said with a laugh.
“Yeah you are.” He said.
“OKAY! *hik* now give it to me.” She said and looked deeply in his eyes with her cute doggy eyes.
“Alright but this is the last one.” He said and gave her the bottle.
“Yay!” she said and drank it all in some few seconds and then fainted.
“Cynder! Are you alright?”
She now sleep in a deep sleep.
“*sigh* Cynder…” he said and took her to their bed.
We must hide that stuff away so this doesn’t happen again.” He said and walked out of the room so she could get some sleep.
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#2 Apr 08, 2009 8:11 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Lol Classic Funny Story, Wd.
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#3 Apr 08, 2009 8:15 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Thanks *first comment (-_-) at last*
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#4 Apr 08, 2009 8:18 PM
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Haha, i kinda figured you'd say something like that Wow, It's strange there are no comments.
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#5 Apr 08, 2009 8:23 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Yeah I have actually thought that many would come with comments like "LOL!!!!!!!!!" but nope... no comments...
I will not post anything more on this webside... I don't get any comments so why post it here
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#6 Apr 08, 2009 8:28 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Sorry, you do deserve alot more effort for this story.
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#7 Apr 08, 2009 8:38 PM
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Thanks a lot
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#8 Apr 08, 2009 8:46 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
It's always a pleasure You going to carry on with this?
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#9 Apr 08, 2009 8:49 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
You mean continue with this story?
No...
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#10 Apr 08, 2009 9:02 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Alright...Well Done...Goodbye..
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#11 Apr 08, 2009 9:06 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Are you disappointed?
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
No.. I just thought it was a really funny story and wondering if you would carry on... Clearly you aren't so good luck with other stories you do in the future..
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#13 Apr 08, 2009 9:50 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Thanks... but I will work on my long fanfic insted...
I'm working on chapter 20...
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#14 May 13, 2009 11:47 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
WOW!!! That was good. Where do you come up with all this? You have some REALLY good stories!
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"You left me with nothing to fight for"
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#15 May 14, 2009 4:00 AM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Ok... I just thought of this. maybe, at the end of your story, you could put something like this...
Spyro: Cynder? did you go to the human realm?
Cynder: Yes.
Spyro: (sigh) What did you find this time?
Cynder: Um, I found this little rolled up paper with black stuff inside.
Spyro: Black stuff?
Cynder: Yeah! (short silence. Cynder gets an idea) Um, Spyro? Can I borrow some of your fire?
(Dramatic music)...
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#16 May 14, 2009 9:15 AM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Lol XD funny idea
But I'm working on my new fanfic "Rivals" instead...
But thanks for the idea ^o^
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#17 May 21, 2009 9:18 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Please leave this topic for comments on the short story. Normal writing ideas can be sent to the author via PM if they have to be. This is just to save space on the forum.
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#18 May 22, 2009 5:05 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Well DragonOfDrakness1992 you shouldn't feel disappointed if no one comments You should be happy that people read your story, you do make good stories you have a talent in witing, well anyways just look at the people that view you story if there are a lot of people that view you story means that were intrested when they read the title of the story. Just be happy with your work. Okay?
well anyway like I said in my post it was a good story hope you write new stories.
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#19 May 22, 2009 8:04 PM
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Re: Cynder is Drunk
Yeah your right I shouldn't feel that bad about it
And you have a good point... as I can see so is there over 1000 there have seen two of my fanfics ^^ so that's great!
I have many stories that I don't post here on this website...
Here are all my short stories (One-shorts) http://dragonofdarkness1992.deviantart. … rt-Stories
If you have a DA acc. then please leave a comment ^^
Btw to Spyro&Cynder4ever you said "WOW!!! That was good. Where do you come up with all this? You have some REALLY good stories!"
And I will answer with: I have just a wired mind ^^ and then did I get inspiration from a picture there are on top of the topic
And thanks for telling me that you like my stories ^o^
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#21 May 23, 2009 7:10 PM
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Yes. I saw that. I also wanted to say, again, Very good story. it was your storied that inspired me to write "Spyro's Date". so thank you.
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#22 May 23, 2009 10:13 PM
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Oh really? O_O thank you very much ^^
And I'm glad that you like this story ^o^
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#23 May 23, 2009 11:29 PM
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You're welcome. I'm glad you wrote those stories.
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