The Legend of Spyro: Getting over her

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 03, 2009 10:39 AM

Alright people here is a story I just felt like doing and it is my longest so far

NOTE: This is a one-short... there will onley be this and nothing more.

And thanks to my correacter Genobee8492 fom DA for corracting this story ^^

Now enjoy ^^
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Getting over her

Spyro sat in front of a gravestone where there stood ‘Here rests Cynder’
She died of a deadly disease that attacked the heart directly and she died after a single week.
“Why? Why you Cynder? It should have been me and not you.” cried Spyro over his dead love.
A year passed as he cried near her gravestone.

But one night Spyro dreamed a different dream.
He was on a meadow, he looked around and it now looked more like a flower meadow.
“Spyro!” shouted a voice he has heard before far behind him.
He turned around and saw that it was…
“Cynder!!?” Spyro’s eyes was filled with tears and he ran towards her and so did she and it ended with them hugging tightly around each other while they cried.
“I have missed you so much.” Said Spyro and hugged tighter and didn’t want her to leave him ever again.
“Spyro…I have summoned you here for a reason…there is something we shall talk about.” said Cynder with a serious tone.
“What is it?” he asked still crying a little.
“You have to find a new mate.” She said.
“W-Why?” he asked confused.
“A dragon doesn’t really leave the world you know…I have seen how sad you are…and I think it is time for you to move on, live your life happily and not as sad as you are now…remember I will always be in your heart and watch over you.” She said and it all blacked out for Spyro.

“Cynder!!!?” said Spyro and was awake now, he was still next to her grave.
“A-A dream?...or…did she really talk to me? Shall I really find a new…mate?” he said to himself and thought about it.
“If that is what she wished I do…then I will give it a try.” He said and remembered the last words she said ‘remember I will always be in your heart and watch over you’ he held his paw to his heart and smiled.
“Looks like I have my own guardian now…and I couldn’t get a better one than you Cynder.” He said and lied down and fell asleep.

The next day Spyro took a walk in the forest.
He was still thinking about what Cynder had told him last night and wanted to make her happy if he could find him a new mate.

After he had walked for hours he then heard a scream of help.
He came to the place and saw a dragoness was being attacked by some grupblings.
Spyro jumped between them.
“It isn’t nice to hurt a woman.” He said and breathed a large flame at them and they ran off.
He turned around and looked at the dragoness.
She was a black dragoness with pretty red marks on both her sides of her body and she also had a red belly. Her horns were white and her eyes…Spyro walked closer and looked into her eyes, they was green as…
“Cynder…” sighed Spyro and kept looking at her eyes.
“T-Thanks for the help…but I’m not this…Cynder.” She said and looked weird at him.
Spyro noticed what he was doing and stepped back and blushed.
“S-Sorry…”
“It’s okay…I’m glad that you was near to save me…can I ask who this Cynder is?” she asked curiously.
“She is…my dead mate…” he sighed and the memories of her came back to him and a tear rolled down his cheek.
“Oh, sorry…I didn’t know about it…I’m sorry.” She said and tried to comfort him with her black wing with red wing membrane. Spyro liked the contact of her wing it felt…safe.
“Thank you…it’s okay…she died about a year ago.” He said.
“Oh that wasn’t so long…I guess you loved each other?” she asked curiously
Spyro smiled. “Yeah we did…I had saved, helped, and fought by her side…what great memories.” He said.
“Wow…hey I don’t know your name.” she suddenly said.
“It’s Spyro…and yours?” he asked.
“I’m Lora…when it came to your mate…can I ask how she died…you don’t have to answer if it is too hard for you.” She said and still comforted him now also with one of her paws stroking his back. Spyro liked the contact of her soft paws…it was like he had felt it before…like when Cynder comforted him.
“I’m fine thanks…she died of an unknown deadly disease…she lied in her bed and she couldn’t almost talk, we couldn’t even kiss because it could spread that way to me.” He said with a sigh and the picture of Cynder when sick came though his mind and he started to cry.
Lora stroked his head and hugged him into her.
“I’m sorry…I shouldn’t have asked that.”
“I-I-It’s o-okay…” sniffled Spyro and after a short time calmed down.
“It’s really sad about your mate…you have go through a hard time.” She said sadly.
“It’s aright…last night did she talked to me in my dreams.”
“Oh what did she say?” she asked curiously.
“She said that her spirit had followed me and seen how sad I have been and then she told me to find a new mate so I could be happy again.” He said and smiled while looking to the sky.
Lora blushed a little. `He did help me…and he looks cute…I can at least give him a change and maybe will we like each other´ she thought and hugged his arm. Spyro looked at her as she squeezed his arm.
“I-If you want then could…we date and maybe find out that we like each other… you did save me so that it the least of what I can do for you.” She said and blushed more of embarrassment.
Spyro looked surprised at her but thought that the idea didn’t sound bad at all…he could at least try with this dragoness and see if it could work out.
“Sure I would like that.” He said with a smile.
“Let’s meet again at the dragon temple then.” Said Spyro and walked back but still looked dreamily at her.
`She is… beautiful…thanks Cynder that you showed me the way to her´ he said and again held his paw on his heart.

Time went and the two dragons dated more than one time.
They knew that they had feelings for each other and one night when they was outside and watched the stars while they hugged each other tightly.
“I have never told you this but…you remind me of Cynder.” He said with a smile.
“Is that a bad or good thing?” she asked, it could be bad that he remembered her death each time they saw each other or good that he then can remember how much he loved his old mate.
“It’s a good thing…I love you Lora.” Said Spyro and looked dreamily into her emerald green eyes. She blushed to the three words he said ‘I love you’.
“Y-Y-You love me!?” she asked but then he kissed her in a deep passionate kiss. Her eyes widened but quickly closed and kissed back while stroking his back and his head. She then broke the kiss and looked into his eyes.
“I love you too Spyro…C-Can I really be your mate?” she asked while she blushed deeply red.
Spyro smiled and stroked her cheek softly with his paw.
“I would love for you to be my mate.” He said and kissed her again and then lied down and watched
“Thank you for everything Cynder…” said Spyro to himself and know that right now was she watching them and smiled to see him happy.

After some months Lora became gravid with Spyro, when the egg hatched out came a black female dragon with a red belly and white horns and spikes down her neck, she had emerald green eyes like her mother. The odd thing was that she had blades on her wings and a tail blade that her parents didn’t have.
Spyro thought for a moment and then it hit him.
“We should name her Cynder…she looks just like her.” He said to his new mate.
“Do you think…that she has been reborn?” asked Lora and looked at the beautiful hatchling.
“Maybe…now I never will forget her.” He smiled and kissed his mate on the cheek and they lived happily.
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NOTE: Lora belongs to ME!

Now remember to comment ^^

Spyro&Cynder4ever · Jun 03, 2009 3:40 PM

That was a really good story, despite the fact that I will always want Cynder to be with Spyro... You took Cynder's death and turned it into something that bloomed well. my only criticism is the fact that I think that Spyro should be with Cynder and only Cynder, but that's just my personal belief. um this story it well written, and I appreciate the fact that Cynder did play a good role in this... I don't have much else to say except, keep up the good work.

Aceedwin · Jun 03, 2009 3:59 PM

Temptation to post critically rising...

Tell you what, I'll post what I liked.

The concept was good, messing with the relationship was a good idea, and killing Cynder so she became an almost spirit character. The introduction was good, it explained a lot, but not in too much detail, always a bonus.

But since I know you're against full on criticism I'll spare you the rest.

Spyro&Cynder4ever · Jun 03, 2009 4:26 PM

You do have a point Aceedwin.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 03, 2009 6:37 PM

Just tell me what you want to tell Aceedwin...
I said that people could comment what I could do better so COME WITH IT! XD
I promise I will not be mad when I actually ask for it ^^

Oh and thanks my WATCHes on DA love this story too ^^

Spyro&Cynder4ever · Jun 03, 2009 6:47 PM

It was a really good story and that's that. not much else to tell.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 03, 2009 8:28 PM

That's okay ^^ when I ask for it then will I like to have it...
It sounds logily right?

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 03, 2009 9:34 PM

Ups ^^" I didn't see your first comment Spyro&Cynder4ever...
I KNOW and hoped for that someone would say that Spyro and Cynder should be together... but you are atually the only one there have done it here and on DA XD (To my big surprise)

Then let me ask this question:
Should we then just let one of them be dead or should they find a new mate and move on, on there lives?

Aceedwin · Jun 04, 2009 6:19 AM

*cracks knuckles* You asked for it, remember that.

Your language was mediocre at best, with no real writing talent, the way you introduced Lora was too simple and not touched on enough. And I'm sorry, but the hatchling with the blades? Spare me...

Hee hee hee... Feel free to take your revenge on my fan fic.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 04, 2009 2:50 PM

First what means "mediocre" ^^"
Okay I didn't expect that you will say that...
And I'm not the revenge kind of guy...

And wtf is there wrong with the hatchling?
Okay even that I promised that I wnot would be angry then do you *bleep*s me off...

Aceedwin · Jun 04, 2009 3:39 PM

The idea of the hatchling being like Cynder, completely ignoring genetics, that sort of thing. It's all a bit cheesy...

Mediocre = Decent

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 04, 2009 3:57 PM

Yeah it is a bit rushly written but who cares? (except like a idiot like you)

If I somehow could block you then would I...
will you please NOT comment anymore on my stories if you have to be a jerk like that...

Aceedwin · Jun 04, 2009 4:03 PM

Heh, remember, I gave you a chance, you told me to say everything. You have absolutely no right to get angry like that. If you didn't want to see a critical opinion, you shouldn't have told me to say it. It's my opinion, I have a right to express it when given permission. Don't try to get the moral high ground on this one.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 04, 2009 4:16 PM

I ment what I could have done BETTER and not what you didn't like about it...
And yeah it was stupied of my to ask you and I talked about it with my friends becuase you really hurt me with those words... I'm actually proud of this story... but one of my friends know about you and he also thinks you are a idiort so please leave us poor writters alone >.<

Aceedwin · Jun 04, 2009 4:21 PM

Birds of a feather flock together. Seems the medievil people had a little bit of intelligence.

I said what I didn't like, I probably could have put what you could have improved, but it was a one-off, so I didn't see the point.

Oh and to your friend. "Your friend isn't a good writer. Would you rather I cut down his hopes now, or an entire crowd does it when he believes himself to be some kind of god."

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 04, 2009 4:26 PM

It is called 'friends' but maybe are you unfamilier with that...

So I could do that better to my next story or my fanfic...

So? some of us like to write becuase we thinks it is fun...
And it is funny to get comments like those you give us?
NO IT'S NOT so get off your jerk >.<

Aceedwin · Jun 04, 2009 4:35 PM

Three linked arguments at once? Hmmm...

It's an expression. Know you're trying to label me as a loser, you really aren't good at arguing are you?

Hmm, my advice tends to be based on doing the same story, but the main piece of advice I'd give is be more descriptive. You make your stories so short because you fail to use more advanced language. The sign of a truly talented writer? Using different words for the same thing.

And some of us comment because writing better stories is more than fun. Write a good story and you get a sense of achievement. Write a borish, dull one and it's just there, evidence of your lack of talent, after the fun has gone...

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 04, 2009 4:42 PM

Okay I'm getting enogh now... just leave me lone and don't come back and comment on my stories.

And yeah I have a problem with English... it is a hard language to learn perfectly.

Then why the f*** do you read my stories?
Go then and read some stories some pros have written instead of bugging me all the time.

Oh and one last thing.. about that with the hatchling do one of my other friends have something good to say:
"heres how i reason the hatchling COULD have blades.... genes are expressed using dominant and ressecive alles. so even if neither have blades but the only end black dragons can have is Blades (B= dominant) or none (b= reccesive) then Spyro and Lora in other words must be Bb, bb ( spyro has recessive but shows dominat trait while being a carrier for recessive and Lora has reccesive trait) So that mean the baby has to be Bb meaning that if it was born a purple dragon it would get a tail spade or a black dragon it would get tail blade. the guy who commented that bassicly contradicted himself."

Aceedwin · Jun 04, 2009 4:59 PM

So it is halfway intelligent, but I can meet you on that field. I know about genes too.

For a start, I was only saying it was cheesy. Now, let's continue from your point of view. For a start, the Spyro world doesn't really have genetics, otherwise the purple egg wouldn't suddenly pop up every ten generations.

Secondly, let us assume what you said is true and Spyro is Bb. For a start, that requires at least one of his parents to be Bb, or more. This is a 25% chance as we can see. The chances are stacked against Spyro's Bb alleles.

Finally, tail blades are a beneficial mutation, meaning that within roughly fifty generations, tail spades would be wiped out. And from the rough amount of time guardian dragons have been around it seems fair to say that the allele would most likely dominate.

Well, that's enough from me. You obviously don't want my points, so I won't post any more comments. What I don't quite get is why you didn't do that in the first place. I mean, you had a choice and you allowed this.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 04, 2009 5:02 PM

Fine... but first was it my friend and not me there said all that...

Anyway we all don't care about facts so let's now jsut read the *bleep* story!

beautygirl05 · Jun 20, 2009 1:54 AM

DragonOfDrakness1992 wrote:

Yeah it is a bit rushly written but who cares? (except like a idiot like you)
If I somehow could block you then would I...
will you please NOT comment anymore on my stories if you have to be a jerk like that...

You know, seriously ...he's right..the way you say stuff about Spyro and other people's stories is really starting to *bleep* me off you *beep*.

beautygirl05 · Jun 20, 2009 1:56 AM

Aceedwin wrote:

Heh, remember, I gave you a chance, you told me to say everything. You have absolutely no right to get angry like that. If you didn't want to see a critical opinion, you shouldn't have told me to say it. It's my opinion, I have a right to express it when given permission. Don't try to get the moral high ground on this one.

It's not like you could of done better. I bet yours would be horrible...

beautygirl05 · Jun 20, 2009 2:01 AM

Aceedwin wrote:

Three linked arguments at once? Hmmm...
It's an expression. Know you're trying to label me as a *Bleep*, you really aren't good at arguing are you?
Hmm, my advice tends to be based on doing the same story, but the main piece of advice I'd give is be more descriptive. You make your stories so short because you fail to use more advanced language. The sign of a truly talented writer? Using different words for the same thing.
And some of us comment because writing better stories is more than fun. Write a good story and you get a sense of achievement. Write a borish, dull one and it's just there, evidence of your lack of talent, after the fun has gone...

You know he's just expressing his feelings and just writering for fun..he's not trying to be like an avanced writer of something...

Aceedwin · Jun 20, 2009 8:02 AM

Now see, I was gonna leave this thread alone. But now I've been challenged! I can't back down from that!

Post 1: Ah, it's insulting me! How cute. I'm a critical person. It's not like I've told everyone their stories are rubbish, I liked Nightwing's one. But draggydrakness keeps asking for comments. I give them to him, but I just don't like giving SUGAR-COATTED LIES! (sorry, force of habit)

Post 2- Why don't you read it and find out.

Post 3- But why shouldn't he learn to become one? It'll make his stories better, more enjoyable, and he'll gain a skill, and a sense of achievement. Everybody wins.

Also, use one post for everything. It looks silly doing one for each point.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jun 20, 2009 11:34 AM

Now see, I was gonna leave this thread alone. But now I've been challenged! I can't back down from that!
Post 1: Ah, it's insulting me! How cute. I'm a critical person. It's not like I've told everyone their stories are rubbish, I liked Nightwing's one. But draggydrakness keeps asking for comments. I give them to him, but I just don't like giving SUGAR-COATTED LIES! (sorry, force of habit)
Post 2- Why don't you read it and find out.
Post 3- But why shouldn't he learn to become one? It'll make his stories better, more enjoyable, and he'll gain a skill, and a sense of achievement. Everybody wins.
Also, use one post for everything. It looks silly doing one for each point.

1) Your right that I ask for comments... but not what oter don't like about my stories but what I could have done better... you came up with what you didn't like and that wasn't what I ment... but if you dobn't want to come with the 'SUGAR-COATTED LIES' then just keep your mouth colsed and leave us alone.

3) That make sence but I don't care... my silly reason is that I don't like changes... cheangees really freak me out even that it just is something like my mother moves something around then can I freak out about that...
Besides I only write for fun... I shall not use my writting skills to something in my furture... so why be better?
And people like my stuff on DA and I have made great friends though my stories... that is maybe my reason to keep writting... to find more friends... on this webside have I made really good friends with two persons (one is beautygirl05) so in all I don't care about the way I write... I only hate to hear what people don't like about my stories... that really *bleep* me off...

Okay this comment get really long so I will keep quiet for now ^^"

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