#226 Apr 11, 2008 4:19 AM

Hero58

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Ya im not as good as writing storys as you are Shade ^^; your story is just blowing me away every single chapter

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Why thank you.................................

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I finally joined this group and I'd like to say your work is very unique and completely wonderful by my standards. Though you do have a slight problem with spelling the word uncomfortable. LOL . Other than very minor grammar errors (which is to be expected in a forum anyway) this story is wonderful and I look forward to future works.

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Sweet, i know, i have a problem with that word... its evil....

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Yeah I was never a grammar aficionado and I always hated the class and now I'm giving advice on it and now I hate my English class... hmm. Next time I go to her class I'm going to say everything in Spanish. :devil:

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lol, she will cry.................

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That's what I was going for. *thumbs up* yeah!!!

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lol, go crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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hey Shade105, i've been reading your fanfic and its really really good. you're a wonderful storyteller! i cant wait to see more. keep up the good work.

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Yeah, i already finished a ch, ill put it in ASAP...

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Caught up and rea your recent chapters and only one word can describe your work. (Well, maybe more than one word. XD )

........Brilliant! ^^

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Thanks, thanks a lot

hey, here is the next chapter, i got it done, read and enjoy

Chapter 23- Legends of Love:

Spyro and the group had something to eat and then went off to look around in the crowded market, for Cynder, It was a lot more fun when it was with her lover Spyro. They went all over, seeing shops that sold many things varying from swords and shields, to roses, a wonder of items. Eventually they reached a beautiful area in the town a block away from the market. The area, was a large open space surrounded by buildings, in the center, stood a fountain showing a heart, it let water out from the top, and wept downwards towards the base. The crowd around, was composed of many young couples, also enjoying the harmony of the area. Spyro and Cynder gasped softly by the beauty of the place. “Wow,” said Cynder “I wonder what this place is called?’
A lonely, handsome looking dragon who was standing near them overheard what she asked and responded “Well, this place is called lover’s fountain,”
Spyro, Sparx, Cynder, and Ember received the response by surprise and turned to face him slightly shocked. “Legend says,” he continued “That this fountain was made originally as just a statue by two lovers, but then the man had to go to war. He died there, and the moment the steel struck his heart, the statue opened a hole from the top and began pouring water. The mans lover saw this happen and figured out what it meant. She then left this place, to find her love’s body, to die at his side in peace. After that no one heard of her. It’s been said, that if she finds her lover’s body, the fountain would go dry and would stop weeping. A great symbol of love!”
“Wow, what a romantic legend,” said Ember
“Yeah,” said Cynder “Thanks for that info,”
“No Problem,” said the dragon “This is one of our town’s most recognized areas. All outside’s have the right to learn. It’s also one of the only places in this town that did not get destroyed in the war,”
“I see,” said Spyro
“Have a good day, adventurous lovers” he said
“You too,” said Cynder as he left waving back.

Spyro, Cynder, and they went to the side of the fountain to look at it. The dragon was right about it’s beauty, the heart, actually looked as if it was really in pain. Cynder’s eyes the wondered off to the sides of it, she looked at more couples, like her. Cynder’s eyes then took a halt instantly focusing on something. The object, a very small, large headed dragon (Large headed at least for it’s size” it’s skin, looked extremely soft and fragile. This dragon was being held by a larger she-dragon, it was a mother and her child. Cynder had never seen a baby in her life; it made her unable to take her eyes from it. It was extremely cute to her, made her hormones crazy. “Aww… is that a baby?” she asked
The rest of the group then put their attention to it. “Yeah, it is,” said Ember…
“Wow, its cute,” said Spyro feeling what Cynder felt
Cynder then turned to Spyro and kissed him “Maybe soon we can have one too.” Said Cynder giggling.
Cynder kissed him again and walked away from him in a girly manner, going to the other side of the fountain. When Spyro heard this, his eyes widened and he blushed deeply. He turned in shock to Sparx and Ember and both where laughing at what Cynder had said.

Well i hope you enjoyed, please.... please comment...

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Awww, that's a cute chapter. and a great legend.

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pretty great shade! ya know, im sorta (bad at writing) stories, im more good at RP'ing....heh..but still i like!

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sweet, thanks guys......

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XD LOL Cynder! XD AWESOMENESS!! ^^

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Wonderful again shade!
hehe. getting serious isint she?

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lol, thats for me to know and for you to find out.............

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oh definitely. i will be right here when you decide to.

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Magnifico chapter once again too bad cynder doesnt know about what the chronicler told spyro XD

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Yeah i know.... lol

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True...sometimes you must protect the ones you love from the truth

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yup, very good... im done with my next ch, ill typew it up soon....

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awesome! you really should be proud of yourself Shade, this is awsome.