#251 Apr 25, 2008 12:19 AM

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Thanks thanks a lot....

Hey, here is Chapter 24.... i hope you like it....

Chapter 24- Returning Home:

By the time it was late evening, Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx had finally dropped Ember off at the sanctuary and where heading back towards their sacred home, the temple. “Takes care,” said Ember as they left her next to a sanctuary monk.
“You too,” said Spyro
They then left the town and began heading back the way they came from. As they left the town boundaries and entered the long lonely plane, Cynder began to recognize how excitingly exhausted she was. The day had been a cluster of joy, in this day, she was actually so busy having fun her daily thoughts of horror had banished. Her head was clear of those haunting dark images. She was so happy she wished to let it all out by shouting and jumping around, but her tired body prevented her from it.

After an hour of silent walking, Cynder decided to check out how the guys where going. They had been quiet for an entire hour which was extremely unlikely to happen and made Cynder wonder, “They should have at least threat each other for no reason by now,” Thought Cynder to herself jokingly, making her chuckle. Cynder first turned her head to the right to see Sparx. The little “gnat” as Cynder called him was behind her, flying calmly with an emotionless expression on his face. Cynder look deeper into his expression and noticed a look of satisfaction deep inside. Somewhere in his cold heart lumbered a satisfied creature. Sparx sonly noticed Cynder looking at him deeply and took it as hostile. Sparx’s eyes made connection with Cynder’s and he asked “What, are you hungry?”
Instinctively Cynder gave a glare to Sparx but could not figure out which way Sparx was attempting to insult her. Was he attempting to call her fat? Or was he still trying to roll on with the whole “On no she wants to eat me!” idea?

After challenging Sparx with her glare for a while she turned her attention to Spyro. Spyro was even more behind her then Sparx. Spyro trotted happily with a smile, his mind wondering about the world around. His enthusiastic expression let out a resonating light, something Cynder loved but envied about Spyro. “ He could face hell with a smile,” Cynder would think. Spyro walked forward when his foot went into a puddle triggering a thought. Out of nowhere Spyro said “Oh!”
Immediately the outburst of Spyro caused the entire group to stop, Cynder, who was still looking at him, though Spyro had hurt himself and with a worried tone asked “Spyro? Are you ok?”
Spyro, who was pretty sure he was not injured, said “Yeah I’m ok, it’s something else I wanted to show you,”
“Really?” said Cynder getting her attention caught “and what is that?”
“Well, just watch,” said Spyro
Once Spyro made sure he had full attention of Cynder, as well as Sparx by coincidence, Spyro began floating water from the puddle to the air. Cynder immediately gasped but Sparx yawned. “Not this again,” said Sparx
“Wow!” said Cynder “How did you do that!?!”
“It’s something Cyril was teaching me today,” responded Spyro.
Cynder continued an austonished look as the water floated, causing Sparx to get extremely annoyed. To sarcastically follow along with Cynder he said “Wow Spyro! That’s so kool!” he paused for a second and then said “Spyro, Spyro it turned me on…”
Now both Spyro and Cynder got angered by Sparx’s remark. For revenge Spyo grabed the water he had in control and squirted it at him. Sparx got hit as if a rock had struck him. He fell to the ground. Spyro and Cynder enjoyed the vengeance and chuckled softly.

well i hope you liked it.... please comment and thanks once again...

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ROFL!!! very good chapter shade sparx finally got what he deserved

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sure did, that was funny.....

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wow. pretty cool shade. strange comment from sparx...

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great,amazing,fantastic,exsillarating,exciting,joyfully and funny
chapter
i think that was the greatest chapter yet
great work mate

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thank you thank you...................

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lol! XD Sparx can be so stupid sometimes.

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Ya can hardly wait for the next chapter keep it up

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yeah im gonna work on it, this one was fun...

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ya i bet it was writing storys is always fun...

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sure is man, my next CH is almorst doen...

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i find that writing stories allows people to express themselves. Its easier if you already know kinda whats gonna happen. But if your like me you make most f it up as you are writing it. lol.

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lol... well the CH is done, all i need is to type it up......

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hey guys, im done with CH 25, here it is, read and enjoy......

Chapter 25- Leaving soon:

It was the early night when Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx finally arrived at the temple. When they entered the garden the insects chirped their peaceful melody calmly. Silently Sparx said “How primitive,”
As they walked through the garden, the flowers around gave the area around a soft silver color, under the light of the moon. They moved forward, now smelling the soft fragrance of dew, getting ready to land on the plants early in the mourning. They looked forward to see two powerfully light torches at the sides of the entrance, bright above all. In the entrance stood a familiar friendly face, Ignitus, their master. As they approached closer to him they could now see him smiling, the torches on the sides strengthening his skin’s texture. As they reached the soft grip of the light, Cynder began to feel rested. They had been traveling in the dark and this made Cynder uncomfortable. The mysterious nature of darkness taunted Cynder commonly. Darkness to Cynder did not represent evil, but uncertainty, which to her was worse.

They approached Ignitus, and smiling he said “Well, took you guys a long while to return. I’m guessing you guys must have stayed a while to visit?”
Spyro knew this guess was 100% correct, and that he could not lie about it “Yeah, we did stay a while,” he said
A soft chilly wind blew pas them, making them all slightly shiver, They did not know how cold it was until they where next to the touch of fire’s heat. Ignitus did an investigative visual search at them, seeing of they where alright. Ignitus eventually spotted the new choker Cynder wore. It had a soft reflection with the touch of light. “Nice chocker,” said Ignitus in a complementary tone.
“Thank you,” responded Cynder
Another chill blew by then reminding Ignitus that he had to speak to Spyro, he looked at the crowd in general and said. “Well, lets go in. It is cold out and I must speak to Spyro… alone,”
The word “Alone” immediately took Cynder’s attention “What was it that made this secret?” she asked herself.
“Why alone?” asked Cynder curious.
“Because it’s important matters only for the purple dragon,” said Ignitus
Cynder took this partially as insultive. She had always been at Spyro’s  side, she saved the world aside him, so why now was it secret? In a flat tone Cynder said “Ok… I guess I’ll see foy after your ‘secret’ chat Spyro, later,”
Cynder kissed Spyro in the cheek and left. Spyro felt slightly embarrassed that it was in front of Ignitus but he did not show much expression.

After Cynder and Sparx where gone, Ignitus took Spyro to the vision room, where the water mirror lay. So they could talk inside. Inside, the temple was warmer then the outside, the room they where in had a grasping warmth. The room was also light by torch light. Spyro sat down on one side of the pool and Ignitus went to the other side so they could speak face to face. Once he did, he began “Spyro, we came here to tell you of something quite important,” he said
“What is it?” asked Spyro
“Well, what it is is a new mission me and you must go to,” responded Ignitus
Spyro gave Ignitus a questioning look, “Why did he say just him and me,” Spyro thought to himself.
Ignitus studied Spyro’s expression for a while, but then proceeded “Let me explain,” he said “In another realm, a neighboring one, the dragon community there began a whole new way to teach dragons the elements and arts. In this style of teaching there is no personal masters or apprentices, Instead, they will begin to teach in a general crowd, all practicing a curricular teaching. They call this a ‘Scholar’ system. It is easier to understand when it’s seen then to when it’s told,”
Spyro’s mind flickered, this “thing” Ignitus spoke of Spyro understood, but partially confused him “Why is this important?” asked Spyro naively.
At first, Ignitus gave Spyro a “What are you thinking?” look making Spyro feel ashamed, but then recognized that Spyro was still young and had a lot to learn. Ignitus chuckled a little then said “Oh Spyro my boy, you still have a lot to learn my apprentice,” he then explained “The reason this is so important is because this system is still very experimental, and new. It could have many flaws that the apprenticeship style may not. There are no one-on-one inspections for starters,”
Spyro then said “So what are we going to do?”
Ignitus then looked at the pool and said “Well the realm leaders there have asked us to go and to check if the system is ‘to standards’ if it is proper, we will be there for a couple days, investigating it all,”
Spyro nods, understanding it all. Ignitus the looks at Spyro and says “We leave the day after tomorrow, have a hearty rest this night and tomorrow,”
“Ok,” said Spyro “Should I tell Cynder the same thing you told me?”
Ignitus sighed, knowing this question would show up sooner of later, he then responded in a way that seemed that he had recited in his head all day “Spyro, she con not go,”
“What!? Why!?” asked Spyro demanding to know
Well Spyro,” said Ignitus “When I spoke to the leaders, they told me we had to stay on the low; they said that the safety of the purple dragon there could be in peril. You’re even going to have to go undercover wearing stuff that will cover your scales,”
“Why would I be in risk?” asked Spyro slightly calming down.
“You have fame son, both good and bad, and we can’t risk it,” responded Ignitus
‘This is not fair,” claimed Spyro “Cynder’s never been a burden, she was there with me when we defeated the Dark Master, she’s always helpful,”
“But,” said Ignitus getting bothered “It would make us a larger group thus gaining attention. Spyro I understand that she is important right now to you, but you can’t let her in0terrupt your 0training, If she does, I’0m going to tell you to stop your relationship with her,”
Having their love invaded by Ignitus would be Spyro’s worse nightmare, so he had to listen “Fine,” said Spyro in a sharp tone. “I’ll go, but I’ll tell her to say goodby,”
“Nothing wring with that,” said Ignitus, “Well then, the day after towmorrow,”
“Fine,” said Spyro, then he stormed off.

well there it is... please comment

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Man...I really hate Ignitus right now...that Jerk...man if wedger was even in this stroy of yours which would be odd and funny and shocking to me XD he would show Ignitus a thing or two about spyro and cynders relationship...LOL

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why did you put that in a spoiler? Anyway i would have posted earlier but i wasnt loggd on at school. not enough time that day. but yeah Great chapter Shade.

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lol when he said "we leave the day after tomorrow," My mind instantly went to the movie. XD

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The reason I put it in a spoiler is because I don't think Shade would like it if I tried to give away the rest of the story to everyone else, in other words "spoil" the next chapter. That would be like the annoying guy who talks in the movies and you just want him to shutup. That didn't seem to work so well because people actually looked in it.  Sorry if I ruined the next chapter Shade. I'll PM my theories on how your story will go from now on if that's okay. And awesome chapter hope you continue.

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Yeah, i dont mind if you predict.... Your close to right tho dude, ill tell you whats going to happen if you wish..... but only thoes who want...... thanks for the good comments

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Hey guys, im done with the next Ch, read and enjoy.....

Chapter 26- A day and two nights:

After Spyro stormed off he headed back to his room, where Sparx and Cynder were. Spyro felt quite disappointed right now, Ignitus had actually used his love with Cynder, not only use, threat. This bothered him deeply, but before he entered his room he decided to leave that thought behind. As Spyro entered, the first thing he noticed was that Cynder and Sparx were once again facing each other off. Thee where face to face, with aggressive faces on. “What are they fighting about this time?” Spyro thought to himself.
Spyro staid back at first, he wanted to see what they where arguing about, and him coming in would stop it, curiosity had him.

“Stop calling me that Sparx!” said Cynder in a very aggressive tone.
“What? Ms. Evil?” said Sparx “Well maybe you should stop being evil,”
“What have I ever done to you!?” shouted Cynder
“Well been evil! And hungry!” responded Sparx sharply.
“What? That doesn’t even make sense!” said Cynder “You need a life,”
“At least I’m not a freak!” said Sparx
Spyro got bored quickly; this was the same as always. A sign that they had gotten back, and everything was back to normal. Spyro quickly came in, quieting  bother Cynder and Sparx. Spyro then walked up to Cynder and kissed her in the lips. Cynder smiled and then said “Hey Spyro,”
“Hey Cyn,” responded Spyro
Sparx then gagged, acting as if he was going to be sick. Spyro and Cynder completely ignored him so he just decided to hit bed. After Sparx got in bed and quickly fell asleep Cynder asked “So, what was that thing Ignitus wanted to speak to you about?”
Spyro then explained all that Ignitus told him while Cynder listened, afterwards Cynder said “Well, another mission for us?”
Spyro then hesitated to respond, he felt bad about it, but he had to tell her. Spyro closened to Cynder and Said “Well Cyn, Ignitus… told me it was going to be only me and him,”
Immediately, everything crashed down on Cynder. After she had agreed to herself she was in love with Spyro she told herself she would never want to leave his side for anything. Cynder gave Spyro a questioning look and said “What? Why?”
“Ignitus said you would draw attention,” responded Spyro, feeling guilty.
“That’s stupid, and unfair!” protested Cynder.
Cynder began to anger, but Spyro hugged her, and kissed her once more. “I know it is. But I must do this Cyn, I will become a guardian some day with this,” he then thought about the trip “and besides, it will only be a week,”
Cynder looked at him, sadly, and said “The longest week in my life,”
“Don’t worry,” said Spyro “We still have tomorrow to be together anyways,”
“Then lets make it a great day,” said Cynder, Immediately afterwards giving Spyro a long, passionate kiss.

Spyro and Cynder sonly fell asleep, once again together. Cynder was deep asleep when Spyro was still awake. His mind realmed around, thinking of Cynder, how close she had gotten to him. He began wondering about the Chronicler’s prophesy, asking himself how soon it would come, when he fell asleep.

there it was..... I hope you enjoyed.... please comment and one more thing before i go... one word: Foreshadow......

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i must say i am really impressed by your work. other stories, even the good ones tends to die a way or annother yet you still have alot inspiration to continue this really good story

heck... you actually give to myself some inspiration to start writing my own story and therefore i must thank you... youre just that good...

as for the story so far it is fun and easy to read and it takes you along with as well.some chapters thougth tends to look like little short =/ well perhaps i just think that way b'cause i read larger books.

anyway keep up the good work.

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cool. chapter, though I forgot the Chroniclers prophecy, mind telling me again what it is?

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Well first, i want to say thanks for the great complement.... i really feel good when somthing like that is said....

And the chronclers prophesy is that somtime, Cynder would bear Spyro's children.....

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