#276 May 10, 2008 5:20 PM

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Re: Spyro: Days of light

Well, you are heck close.... Ill pm you whay i have in mind....

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cool chapter. Maybe people should Not say what they think the rest will be as this may spoil it for some people

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Yes I've already agreed to only PM shade about it from now on so no more spoiling from sorry.

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yeah, just keep watching...................

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Hey guys, here's the next Chapter, i hope you all enjoy....

Chapter 27- Dawn of the day:

The sun came up slowly this say, the final day before the trip. As it slowly reached the window in their room, the room lit up, it was a beautiful clear day open for anything. As soon as a powerful ray of the sun touched Spyro’s sensitive eyelids he was awakened. He opened his eyes and begins to look around, what he saw was very peaceful. Sparx, his humorous brother, rested tranquil, and Cynder, his love, had an arm around him, and rested holding his chest.

Spyro began to move himself to stand; he knew the day had to start. As he tugged and shifted softly Cynder began to awake. Cynder held Spyro closely, as if wishing to keep him forever, but as soon as he began to move she felt it.  At First Cynder, sub-continently, held Spyro by digging her claws into him and puling him down, something deep in her feared that he was leaving now, instead of tomorrow. She held him tightly, but then Spyro persisted and began to escape her grip. This immediately caused Cynder caused Cynder to fully awake. She jutted up, Using one arm to support her and one to hold Spyro, she looked frightened as if she was going to lose something. Spyro shifted to face her, they looked into each other’s eyes for a while, and then Cynder began to cry. She really had no reason but did. Spyro then held her head t his side. Her soft tears dripped down across Spyro’s neck. “What’s wrong?” asked Spyro
“I don’t want you to leave,” said Cynder in between sobers.
Spyro began to rub his head to her neck, passionately caressing her. “It won’t be that long Cyn,” said Spyro
“Promise it,” said Cynder looking for reassurance.
“I do,” responded Spyro

Eventually Sparx awoke and they all arose from their sleeping spot “Good morning world and all who inhabit it,” said Sparx after a long yawn.
Cynder had recovered from her little incident and felt better “Well, lets get o training,” said Cynder hesitantly
Just before they began to head out, Ignitus came in. He looked a little brighter then the night before, he had a warming smile. He looked at Spyro and Cynder, who where together and said “Good morning,”
“Morning,” responded Spyro who was still slightly disappointed at him. They stood quiet for a bit, they were still yawny and tired, but then Ignitus spoke, he said “Listen, since tomorrow is going to be our trip day, I want to do you a favor. Today, you get the whole day off to do whatever you two wish,”
Ignitus truly felt sorry for being hostile with Spyro the night before, but he was to proud to admit it (He hated admitting, he was proud). So this was his way to say he war sorry. Spyro and Cynder looked at each other and smiled. They knew that this way they could do something better, and felt great now that they could spend more time together. “Thanks Ignitus,” said Spyro

Throughout all of the breakfast Spyro remained silent, inside his head he thought of what they could to on this day, when it finally hit him. This day, Cynder and Spyro, could leave the temple, and travel back to see his adopted parents. They were the ones that gave Spyro his first little shove to this place, to his life. For five years has he not had contact with them, so he figured to himself it’s about time to pay a visit, present them to Cynder and such. After they had visited and remained there for a while, they would leave that place, and travel to Island Lake. This lake was the deposit spot of the river that traveled near the dragonfly village; actually, it was only a small flight’s travel away from the village. This like to Spyro was important because this is where he used to go to in his youth, with Sparx of course. One of the most beautiful spots Spyro could think of. The sunset there was extravagant. So they wound stay there, watching the sunset.

It was after breakfast when Spyro had it all solved out. Once they got off the table and walked out into the garden Cynder asked “Well Spyro, what should we do today? Let’s make it a great day,”
Spyro Smiled at Cynder and kissed her, Spyro wanted to keep the whole idea a secret, so he remained silent “Well,” said Cynder
“I think I have an idea,” said Spyro chuckling
“Woopie!” said Sparx sarcasticly “A surprise for all of us!”
“Trust he, I know you both will like it,” responded Spyro to Sparx comment.
“Where is it?” asked Cynder
“Well it’s a secret,” responded Spyro
“Ahh… well, lets go!” said Cynder excitingly
Spyro nodded, then he began to take flight, followed by Sparx and Cynder, he then began to head towards the village.

well i hope you liked it, plz comment

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awwww, well I'm sure Sparx is going to figure it out and blab it out to Cynder. XD

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lol.... probably.....

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Hey guys, heres another ch, i hope you enjoy....

Chapter 28- A kisses in the sky:

Spyro and Cynder flew in the air at a slow pace, they glided most of the time. Every once in a while both Spyro and Cynder would began to look at each other, they would stare at each other for long moments. They both felt something inside, they felt that their love for each other was deepening, and at a speedy rate, where would it lead them? They asked themselves. After a while of traveling, Sparx began to recognize this rout, this rout was taken by them long ago, when they were leaving home, though back in that time they went on foot, making it a laverinth that tested both their physical strength and will power, well at least Spyro’s
Once Sparx had a clear idea of where they were going, he grinned, happy to reveal Spyro’s secret to himself. “We gonna visit mom and pop?” asked Sparx, now revealing the secret to Cynder.
Once Spyro heard Sparx saying this he stopped wondering within his own mind to react “Aww… how did you find out?” asked Spyro.
“Well, I’m not stupid, I remember this rout. So I’m smart, and Cynder’s a hottie,”
“What did you say!?” responded Cynder in a hostile manner.
“Nothing!” said Sparx
Once Sparx backed away a little, Cynder said “Wow Spyro, meeting your parents? That sounds amazing!”
Spyro then softly smiled and said “Yeah, I thought it was about time to give them a visit, they were the ones that gave me my first little shove to the life I live now. If it wasn’t for them, I wouldn’t have ever met you,”
“Don’t forget the crazy fire that came out of your mouth,” said Sparx coming back into the conversation.
“What?” asked Spyro not understanding him.
“You know, the fire, it gave you first explosive… aww never mind… no one gets me,” said Sparx crossing his arms.
Cynder then ignored Sparx, and then began to perform a stunt, she began to line herself up behind Spyro, and then with a flip, being belly side up, sped up, flying under Spyro. As soon as she was face to face with him, she gave him a peck in the lips, she then flipped again and ended up at his side “Maybe some things were destiny Spyro,” said Cynder
Spyro, baffled by Cynder’s performance, looked at Cynder, blushing deeply and she giggled.

there... I hope you enjoyed.... please comment

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Well that was fast in the on coming. You're definitely putting more thought into your chapters. That maneuver cynder made kinda came out of nowhere but it at least made for a good ending to a chapter. I've noticed how you've slowed down the story to give the chapters more meaning and thus people will more easily distinguish which chapter is which. Keep it up.

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thank you dude, yeah, im working on it...

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Wow! i missed two whole chapters! Hey nice Work Shade, Awesome. YEs they are getting more descriptive. (yay im 15 today)

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awwwwww, thats cute.

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thanks peeps... im glad you like them....

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Hey guys, got the next CH done, enjoy

Chapter 29- Reunion of Parents:

For the last half an hour of the trip, Spyreo and Cynder acted like no other. Through this time of the flight, Spyro and Cynder both navigated in circles around each other, doing them gracefully and with great care. As they did these “aerials of courtship” they would look at each other laughing softly, they felt the this craftfull dance in the sky was not intentional, they felt it as a natural reaction. Sparx, seeing this for a while now, gave a confused look at them “ehm… what are you two doing?” he asked
“Just… nothing but being playful,” responded Spyro chuckling
This response caused Sparx to slap his forehead and shake his head “You two are way to crazy,” he said
“Yeah,” responded Cynder “we are,”
“At least I get to enjoy the freak show,” said Sparx

After a while passed, at last, after the long trip, they finally arrived. They had traveled for a long time, but did not feel exhausted; instead, they felt energized, ready for more. As they approached the village, they decided to take the main entrance, coming in from the sky (especially due to the large size of Spyro and Cynder) might have cause a panic attack in the entire village, so it was just wiser to come in “properly”. As the walked in, both Sparx and Spyro began to recognize everything, a stone, that Sparx always hid in as they played hide-and-go-seek, a large uplifted root, which once trapped Spyro in between it and the ground as he chased Sparx, and “Mr. Itchy”, a large mushroom, which once, after Spyro landed on it, gave him a nasty rash in the backside, all of these great memories of childhood. On the other hand, Cynder, highly curious, looked all around, this world to her was quite mysterious, a world of “small” wonders. She chuckled to herself once asking herself how Spyro, thinking of his size now, could have lived here. Even with the little memories she had of her childhood, she knew where she lived was huge. Maybe this to him was just right back then.

This village was very scattered, they lived in ranges of about 100 feet away from each other which in reality is not that much but size had to be considered. The first house entering the village was none other but this parents’. As they went through the small clearing, and closened to the house they began to notice a blue glow, similar to Sparx. It was their father, working on the small moss garden they had been growing. As the got nearer, their father rose his head to look at them approaching, ho took a look for a moment, and then ran into his house, only to bring out their mother. They looked at them from afar as they nearened, but once they where completely sure they knew who they were looking at they took off, directly at them. Spyro smiled, seeing them coming at full speed and said “Uh oh Sparx, mom alert,”
“heh,” responded Sparx chuckling
Now you could finally hear her “Sparx! Spyro!” shouted her mom.
As she came even closer, she began to tear up, but of pure joy. This was the greatest day for her, for they came back.
“Mom!” shouted both Sparx and Spyro almost at a sequential rhythm.
At last, she reached them. At that, she stopped about a yard away from the to look at their figures. To her, they both changed incredibly, especially Spyro, he looked larger and downright more manly, but his soft eyes and smile where still there. She then looked at Cynder, and smiled at her, she expected she was now Spyro’s pair, but that did not bother her. Without hesitation, she flew to hug them, first Spyro. She graved him by his enlarged mandible, and held him tight, looking at him once more, but then went to hug Sparx. As she did, she fully grabbed him by the body and began to turn him around in circles, laughing, and crying at the same time. She asked herself if she was in a dream, but no, she couldn’t be

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Re: Spyro: Days of light

cool. Your chapters are getting more condensed to a small period of time. more detailed

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yeah, im seeing if this can make it get a like feeling of like, that thier trying to soak all they can out of the day...

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lol, thanks power... thats a nice complement

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so anyway I'll print out your chapters and draw a single picture defining each hows that. Maybe 250- 1000 each. You choose the price range I don't care.

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ok, ill pay 750 for each k?????????????????????????????

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However much you wanna pay is fine by me. I really never use my gems anyway.

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ok, but thanks a mill anyways............

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Hey guys, next chapter is here, read and enjoy

Chapter 30- Drinking Bowl:

It took several long minutes of sulking the moment until someone finally reacted. “Uhh… that was kinda embarrassing,” said Sparx holding his arm with shame, he had been crying a little at that moment as well.
“I’m sorry,” said their mom
“Naw mom,” said Sparx sniffing, trying to hold his tears back “It’s cool, no need for apologies,”
The mom nodded softly to Sparx, and then gazed at everyone once more. “Wow guys, I never knew you two would come back, five years, I thought you two became so successful you forgot about us,”
“Yeah,” said the father reassuring his wife.
“We would never forget you two mom, dad,” said Sparx beginning to squeak up holding his tears even harder “Excuse me,: he said “I need a moment,”
Sparx then turned from the reunion and floated a bit away before breaking into tears, loud tears.  Spyro was in no better shape, even if they were not his true parents; they were as much or more to him. They took the challenge to care for something ten times their size, just from pure heart, without them, Spyro wouldn’t even be alive. Spyro, tearing said “It’s great to see you two here too,”
After hugging her husband and wiping her tears off, the mom was able to speak “Well, It’s wonderful to be having you all here, please wait out here while I get you all some cold water,”
She then left, going into the house, followed by her husband

While their mom was gone, Sparx returned to Spyro and Cynder “Wow,” said Cynder “That was a dramatic moment, especially for you Sparx,” she said in a teasing tone
“Shut up Doom-and-Gloom,” responded Sparx sharply
Mom finally returned, but dragging along a large cup-shaped leaf, about the size of a drink bowl for Spyro or Cynder, and it was full of water. Amazing was the strength of mothers, thought Cynder, that this woman could carry this thing. At last she arrived with it and with a couple deep breaths said “Drink in,”

After leaving again and coming back with water for herself, her husband, and Sparx, she began to talk “I never got your name honey, what is it,” Mom asked Cynder
“Mom,” said Spyro “This is Cynder, we are seeing each other,”
“Hello,” said Cynder

“Oh Cynder, nice name. Anyways, this leaf you’re drinking on, this use to be Spyro’s bathing leaf,” she said
“Oh, I see…” said Cynder interested
“Yeah, you see, before he was very small and could fit, heh, I remember when he use to have ‘accidents’ on it, but it’s clean,” said the mom
As soon as Cynder and Spyro heard this, she cracked up and Spyro turned bright red, he put his head down and said “mom…”
“It’s ok, no one’s hurt it’s the past, and anyways, she has the right to know if she’s going to give me grandchildren, I mean you’re big now, I bet you hold her tight while you two mate,” she said
As she finished saying this, Cynder also blushed and looked down embarrassed, leaving only Sparx to laugh.

well i hope you liked it, plz comment!

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pffffffff ahahaha!!!! god that last remark was funny! i mean what kinda mother says that to her son? ROFL

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One that has a son like sparx!!! lol