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#376 Jul 14, 2008 1:11 AM
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oh no! your right! lol......................................
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#377 Jul 14, 2008 1:48 AM
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Can't wait till the next chapter! 8DDD
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#378 Jul 14, 2008 3:12 AM
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Great chapter! i love how your making the story so far
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#379 Jul 14, 2008 5:03 AM
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thanks thanks..............................
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#380 Jul 15, 2008 5:43 AM
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*random question* I was just wondering how long you where going to make this story because by the looks it there are still many possibilities that could be included in the story, just wondering..... oh yeah do you plan on writing other fanfics on Spyro and Cynder after this one?
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#381 Jul 15, 2008 6:42 PM
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nice. huh, hope the other guardians don't figure out what happened with Spyro and Cyn while he and Iggy are away. XD
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#382 Jul 15, 2008 7:59 PM
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yeah, that would be an oopsy.... to the question: yes, i still have alot to add to this story.... i dont know if im planning to make more Spyro fanfics after this one... cause i dont think that ahead.... heh.... but all i know is that this one still has alot to go....
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#383 Jul 15, 2008 11:36 PM
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Re: Spyro: Days of light
I don't care if it's a freaking 100 pages, I'm reading the whole dang thing. 'Cause I like reading long stories and books. (Harry Potter) :-|
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#384 Jul 15, 2008 11:39 PM
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im not complaining how long the story would be, i was just curious. anyways good work shade, keep it up.
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#385 Jul 16, 2008 7:17 PM
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thanks everyone, yeah, ill keep on working on it...
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#386 Jul 19, 2008 9:52 PM
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Love the story the whole thing is great you should be a author
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#387 Jul 19, 2008 10:49 PM
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hehe, ill think about that l8r..... but yeah, i do like to write.... but i now also love to draw.... maybe i should make a manga.......
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#388 Jul 22, 2008 10:44 PM
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ok, here is another chapter.... this and i think another one will be the last ones before i start a different style of putting up chapters, its not going to be much different and its still going to go in chronological order, im just getting ready to make chapters of ALL the charecters while they are split up.... dont freak anyone its still "days of light" but i will explain l8r when its there....
here you go....
Chapter 35- Trouble with Ignitus:
At first, the young couple remained quiet, with the shame of arriving late. Not until Ignitus spoke again was it that they responded “Well? Speak!†he said in a rough strict voice.
“Me and Cyn left yesterday to go to my step parents house, and we stayed there for the night,†said Spyro nervously “When we where going to leave, it was late, so my step parents offered us the permission to stay… y-y-you know how dangerous it is to fly at night,â€
Spyro’s tension increased after responding this way he knew clearly he was not exactly saying the thruth, but what scared him was not knowing is Ignitus knew he was lieing too. His signs of nervusness were so clear that even Ignitus cought them causing him to get suspicion “Is that so?†he said
They all remained silent for a long moment, feeling a soft, humid, cool breeze touch their skins, intill Spyro gave Ignitus a blunt ‘yeah’ to answer Ignitus’s question
“Well you my boy are late, I was schedualing to leave earlier then this, much earlier,†said Ignitus “and also, I never gave you two permission to stay that night to do… whatever you two did,â€
Ignitus did not really intend to mean “what ever†as anything, but Cynder took it differently. This made her panic a bit, and caused her to defend herself and Spyro “We did nothing last night!†she shouted with a defencive tone
The sudden out shout caused both Spyro and Ignitus to flinch slightly, and also look at Cynder with a questioning look.
After recognizing the horrible mistake she made Cynder dropped her head down, and remained quiet as Spyro and Ignitus continued to stare at her, this furthered Ignitus’s suspicion of Spyro and Cynder. Ignitus then turned back to Spyro, which forced the purple dragon to have to cover up for Cynder’s mistake “Yeah nothing,†said Spyro softly, even more cautious with his words “All we did was rest,â€
“I see…†said Ignitus with a coutious eye.
Ignitus wanted to continue “uncovering†the thuth about the night before and it’s mysteries, but he knew that in reality he was wasting time right now. They had to leave and the day was passing by. No more tomfoolery he thought. After a couple long breaths of the sweet, clean air, Ignitus said “We will talk about this later you two, right now we must think of leaving, Spyro..?â€
“Yes Sir?†responded Spyro
“We have to cover your identity up, as I said before, your identity must be top secret,†said Ignitus
“Okay,â€
Ignitus continued “So I put some clothes in your room that you can wear, Spyro, Cover up well, leave no purple visible, a mask is even in your room ready to be worn,â€
“Alright,†said Spyro “I’ll get ready,â€
Spyro then left, to get dressed, followed closely by Cynder.
i hope you liked it.... please comment!
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#389 Jul 22, 2008 11:19 PM
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This is gold. I love it. So, Ignitus has an idea what's going on between Spyro and Cynder. Uh-oh. Can't wait for more.
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#390 Jul 22, 2008 11:22 PM
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Oh no....this is bad for Spyro and Cynder....and yes go with the manga idea it sounds GREAT!!!
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#391 Jul 22, 2008 11:34 PM
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Watch out Spyro! Ignitus sees what you did there! XDDD
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#392 Jul 23, 2008 3:43 AM
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XD haha.... thats funny, yes, Spyro is in a tight stuation right now... he's gotta keep an eye out.... next CH is going to be fun.... so stay tuned, same time, same channel!
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#393 Jul 23, 2008 11:11 PM
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WOW, that must have been a really awkward moment for spyro and cynder, even for Ignitus. nice chapter, update soon
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#394 Jul 24, 2008 1:14 AM
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Ill try, thanks all of you for pushing me forward...
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#395 Jul 25, 2008 8:57 PM
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Oh my hersheys......I am SO sorry Shade for not reading! But I caught up and everything and all I have to say is that you are doing an utterly mazing fantastic job at your fan fiction! ^_^ Please continue!
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#396 Jul 25, 2008 9:29 PM
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thanks thanks...... ill work more on it asap....
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Awesome chapter! I cant wait for the next one
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#399 Jul 28, 2008 8:43 PM
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haha... ill get working on the next one some time...
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#400 Jul 31, 2008 11:15 PM
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hey guys here is CH 36, read and enjoy!
Chapter 36- One Sky:
As they got to the room and opened the door the looked in, the room was as untouched as when they left it the day before, except for a pile of orderly placed clothing in the middle of the room. The clothing were a mixure of clean green leathers, and some types of iron mails, a iron mask, painted in the color green laid on top of everything as well. Spyro entered with Cynder as he said “Well… This is what I wear,â€
They came in and he picked up the suit, feeling the softness of the itenms, while Cynder also studied it with her eyes. “Well, I guess he picked green for you,†said Cynder studying the leather further more.
“Yeah,†said Spyro in a calm tone “But that doesn’t bother me, I like green,â€
“And Why’s that?†asked Cynder
“Cause it’s the color of your eyes,†responded Spyro
“Some how…†said Cynder “I knew you were going to say that,â€
“and what, you don’t like the attention?†ask Spyro in a teasing tone
“No…†said Cynder “I do like the attention… and I wanna keep it, Spyro… I don’t want you to go… If you don’t have to please don’t,â€
By the the rine Cynder was finished with the phrase, her voice was starting to crack, and her eyes began to fill with tears. Spyro hugged her tight at that moment, he did not understand why she was getting so emotional about this even, it was only a week long. Holding her still he asked “Cynder, what’s wrong? Why don’t you want me to leave so bad?â€
At this question Cynder could not hold it anymore and with a sorrowful yelp she began to cry. Spyro held her for a while until she responded, she needed the comfort of Spyro. “For the past couple days,†she started “I have had horrible dreams of you dieing while out there. The dreams, they look so real that I feel that I could touch your blood… They are horrible!â€
Spyro shivered at hearing this, ‘could it be another prophesy?’ he asked himself. Cynder cried harder after saying this, causing Spyro to have to hug Cynder tighter “Don’t worry my love,†said Spyro “ I will keep myself safe, I will come back with life to you, to continue this relationship we have... I will not be here, but if you get lonely, go outside and look at the sky…â€
Cynder curious and not understanding asked “Why?â€
“Well…†said Spyro “We might be in different realms… But all the realms share the same sky, one sky, remember that,â€
“Okay,†said Cynder “ I love you…â€
“I love you too,†said Spyro
Spyro gave Cynder a long kiss, and continued to hug her for a while.
Spyro then dressed , and went to a water mirror to look at himself, “No purple,†he said to himself silently. Spyro the looked even harder at himself, he felt funny, but there was no time for studying himself so he walked off to Ignitus. “Lets go…†said Spyro
Ignitus nodded softly and started to walk off, but Spyro remained there, starring eye to eye with Cynder. He started to turn to leave when Cynder ran to him and snuggled closely to him. She then gave him a kiss and said “Take care, may the ancestors look after you,â€
“And you too,†responded Spyro
He the fully turned, and started to walk away, Cynder saw, as he left for this trip, praying for his well-being. “Good luck,†she said to herself softly.
there you go, plz comment!
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