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#401 Jul 31, 2008 11:24 PM
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Re: Spyro: Days of light
awww, so sweet. and I wonder if Ignitus will mention anything on the way there........
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#402 Jul 31, 2008 11:25 PM
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hehe... yeah, well thats for future references... like next CH references...
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#403 Aug 01, 2008 12:54 AM
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This is a great ff! I enjoy every chapter. Are you going to bring Flame into it, too?
Chillin' like a dragon
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#404 Aug 01, 2008 6:40 AM
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bwaa! I missed some! hang on ill read it
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#405 Aug 01, 2008 7:01 AM
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Nice chapter. They have all been awesome.
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#406 Aug 01, 2008 1:47 PM
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thanks... i dont know about bringing flame, but what is true is im bringing in 2 more chars.... sorta fan made tho... they are Blaze the Dragon's
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#407 Aug 01, 2008 3:21 PM
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I think the Chronicler is messing with them... <_<
Spyro: For god's sake, Cynder, we spent all of DotD together, can't you take ONE WEEK away?
And by the way, where the hell is Hunter of Avalar?
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#408 Aug 02, 2008 10:25 PM
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XD haha thats funny.............................
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#409 Aug 09, 2008 3:54 PM
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Seriously, where's Hunter? And for that matter, where's the next chapter?
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#410 Aug 10, 2008 6:11 AM
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Ditto! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
This world...Is rotten. People are evil, they kill and murder for no reason. I will be the one to cleanse this world of evil. I am Kira.
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#411 Aug 10, 2008 5:40 PM
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#412 Aug 10, 2008 5:49 PM
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Awww! Did I mention how cute Wall-E and EVE are together?! ^w^
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#413 Aug 10, 2008 10:46 PM
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heh... thanks... i tried hard for that....
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#414 Aug 10, 2008 11:14 PM
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and so the fanfic gets longer by the day and i still enjoy reading it over and over again.
i know i should give some real comments about your fanfic but tell the truth i am not that good in english to check upon spellings and what comes to the story itself i cant find nothing really wrong in it. only shortness of the chapters gives a minor setback but then again it is morelikely it is just me as i am more used to read long stories and books.
and tell the truth wall-e was really interesting. that was standalone or youre planning make more?
i hate to bring this up like this but i have to ask anyway, lack of comments you see: have you peered on my piece of fanfic yet and what you think about it?
There is a reason why we are born with brains in our heads, not rocks
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#415 Aug 11, 2008 5:56 AM
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I belive i started it.... it is very good right now.... i will see it over again tho.. to check it out... and see more specificly what i can say...
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#416 Aug 13, 2008 6:35 PM
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#417 Aug 13, 2008 7:22 PM
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lol, I love it. Now Cynder is going to be worried that she's pregnant, right? And probably worried how Spyro will react if she is.
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#418 Aug 13, 2008 8:13 PM
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Man.... you guess so close every time... but yeah, in the general...
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#419 Aug 13, 2008 8:59 PM
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Dragons are omnivores? o_O
Cynder: Ignitus, I think I'm pregnate...and Spyro's the father!
Ignitus: o_O
Dark Master: Actually, that was me.
All: o_O
Spyro: I totally didn't need to know that.
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#420 Aug 14, 2008 12:19 AM
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XD what the heck was that all about........
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#421 Aug 14, 2008 12:22 AM
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#422 Aug 14, 2008 7:26 AM
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And as the day's without internet passed by, cooldude's mental condition was slowly deteriorating. And one day, his father finnaly brought home a big fat check and got promoted in his company. Then cooldude got the internet back, kissing the screen as if he had never seen it in his life.
And this is why I never replied in a long time. But I am back! And must I say, this story has become very great.
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#423 Aug 14, 2008 2:07 PM
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thank you, thank you all....
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#424 Aug 15, 2008 2:40 AM
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Nice chapters, I would have replyed sooner but I just got back from a 12 day hike in Philmont, NM. I had to walked 132 miles in mountain terrains without a shower. Its good to be back home.
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#425 Aug 17, 2008 1:44 PM
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Re: Spyro: Days of light
thats good for you....
well, here is the next chapter... read and enjoy...
Chapter 38- Book of Spyro- Start of journey:
“How long until we reach the realm portal?†asked Spyro curiously.
“We will be there in about 10 minutes from now, the realm city I mean,†said Ignitus “Then we will have to go through both of the side’s of the portal’s security checks. But first we will stay in the city for a bit, to rest and eat,â€
Spyro and Ignitus had both been traveling for about 3 hours now and it was wearing them out, more Spyro the Ignitus for the fact that he had already been traveling before. This day for Spyro had truly been a day of travel. He then began to wonder how Cynder was doing, was she training? Was she resting? Was she bored? He wished for nothing more then good luck for his companion at this moment.
Finally arriving at the city, they walked through the city walls protecting it and Spyro gasped. This city was way bigger then the one they had left Ember in, the large buildings looked older, and tougher, but some had large cracks and holes in the walls, some were technically ruins. As the began to walk through the aged roads Ignitus began to explain “Spyro, this city is very important, remember that,â€
“Why so?†asked the young purple dragon
“Well, This marvelous city, was one of the only to have survived Malefor’s campaign for total conquer, time and again, did the enemy try to make this city into ashes, but they held them back, until you ended the war,†responded Ignitus
“I see…†said Spyro
“Not even the great Cynder succeeded in taking it, all she could leave of her print here was a couple of the damages on the buildings,†Ignitus said pointing at some of the war dents. “Not only did they save themselves, but the realm protected by them,â€
Hearing Ignitus say ‘the great Cynder’ made Spyro feel slightly insulted. Day and night he and Cynder fought hard to try to erase that past, but his own master saying this proved how hard it was to erase the past. He ten considered that the past was inerasable, and that the one, that promised him her love, and even surrendered her body to him, had this eternal mark, like blood you can’t wash off. Feeling kinda sorry for Cynder now, made him want to forget that idea, so he blocked it off.
They walked for a while inside the city until they reached an inn/diner. As they closened to the location, Spyro noticed a sign on top of the door saying ‘Joe’s Food n’ rest’, he chuckled to himself, now imagining the owner Joe as a big dragon fellow, slightly jolly but with a mad eye. They went into the place and immediately felt the mellow, gloomy environment the diner had. The room had a slight mist of smoke hanging near the roof, and many of the costumers inside did not look as in they were in a good mood, most were drinking. He and Ignitus decided to take a seat in the side of the room, and waited to get service. They were both starting to get conferrable in their seats, when a particular fellow walked into the place, this dragon, was very large and built larger the Ignitus in fact, and had a scar on his face, intimidating indeed. The fellow, walked through the door, and looked directly at Spyro and Ignitus with a grotes expression on his face. Stomping over to their table, he ceased and looked at both master and apprentice “You’re in my seat,†said the dragon in a very low tone to Spyro.
Spyro, instantly intimidated, looked back at the dragon with a fear and said “Oh! I’m sorry… We’ll move,â€
Spyro was about to move when Ignitus raised his paw and stopped Spyro “We are not moving anywhere,†said Ignitus “especially for someone as rude as you,â€
“Instantly, the large dragon grabbed Ignitus , raised a fist and said “What?!?â€
Ignitus and the dragon stood in the brink of battle for several long seconds until out of nowhere a large fireball flew and came straight at the larger dragon. The Dragon shoved Ignitus away and jumped himself out of the way, when everyone including Spyro and Ignitus turned to look at the origin of the fire, they noticed a fat dragon fitting Spyro’s specifications, standing there.
well i hope you liked it... please comment...
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