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Yeah, it's good. I'm sure that if a fight had started, Ignitus would win. He is the Fire Guardian, after all. Can't wait for more. You're a great writer.

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thank you thank you.....

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Alright, nice job! Just wondering, tho... Do you write this right off the bat, or do you plan it before-hand?

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Awesome chapters. I would have commented sooner but ive been busy.

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well more thanks... and second, well, when i write, i have a partial goal to reach, like i wanted Spyro to reach the town by the end of the chapter at least.... but alot is comming out of my head, sorta improv... but of course, i write it in paper before i put it down i typing.... why so?

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I was just wondering. Because I don't write anything down beforehand; rather, I have it all in my head. Though sometimes it gives me major writer's block

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well, sometimes thats the time, sometimes you have to be ready to do the improv game.... cause planning it all does not work well, instead, get a general goal, then try to reach it in a way.... dont plan it all

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Hmm... I'll try that. It seems to be working for you. Well, I'll await your next update!

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thank you.... its comming soon....

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Hey shade your improv plan actually works! I've already made a new story!

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thats great... thats really good im glad...

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its here its here.... the new Chapter... read and enjoy....

Chapter 39- Book of Spyro- Heat?:

At first, everyone remained completely silent, all shocked by the incident, until the fat dragon spoke “Jonny, didn’t your mother teach you how to treat people you don’t know?”
Ignitus’ attacker, Jonny, then stood up and looked at the big dragon, and said “But…”
Before Jonny could continue, the other dragon said. “And them being my costumers too! Where are your manners?”
Jonny, then looked down with shame and said “Sorry…”
“Sorry!?!” said the other dragon “To me? No… you have to say sorry to the ones you just acted like a barbarian on,”
At first, no one responded, and the dragon Jonny did a facial expression as if neglecting the order, until the fat dragon spoke again “Jonny… If you don’t, not only will I never allow you to come back here, but I’ll tell your mother too,”
With another winy expression on his face, Jonny picked Ignitus up from the ground and swiped his shoulders clean. “Uhh… Look, I’m sorry for getting all mad at you, It’s a bad tendency of mine… you can have the table,” said Jonny
“Apology accepted…” said Ignitus
Jonny then turned his attention to the fat dragon, which Spyro had now figured was the owned of the place. The fellow looked back at Jonny for a small while, studying his face, until he said “Get out of here… for today,”
“Yes sir,” said Jonny, and then walked out of the bar in a rush.

Quickly after, the ambience of the place returned to its normal self, with the laughs and drunken joys. As soon as the peace returned, the owner of the place decided to go give a visit to Spyro and Ignitus, he knew that action like that to new people could bring bad word about the bar. Reaching the table, and without hesitation, the owner put his paw on Spyro’s shoulder and said “Sorry about that mates, Jonny is always trouble,”
The paw on Spyro’s shoulder caused the purple dragon to stir and turn his attention to the lad owning the hand; Ignitus also put his attention on him. Once the owner felt he had attention he said “Name’s Fertomas, Fert for short, the owner of the place…”
Spyro, feeling safe knowing now that he was the owner said “I’m Spyro,”
“Ignitus,” said Ignitus
As soon as Ignitus presented himself, Fert began to step backwards, looking at him with a riddled look, sonly he said “Heat? It the really you Heat?!?”
At first Ignitus looked at Fert funny, not understanding, but quickly his memories began to spark back, chuckling softly, Ignitus said “Chug? It is me, Heat,”
At those words, Fert began to make a warm jolly laugh, and walked to hug Ignitus. They did, it was a strong friendly hug, like if they cared for each other greatly. “Heat! It’s great to see you” said Fert.
“Good to see you too Chug,” said Ignitus, in an uncommon happy tone.
Spyro looked t both of them, completely confused. What is going on?

well, i hope you enjoyed, please comment...

ps: Yay, almost my 40 ch aniversary.... XD

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Awesome chapter! I'll be sticking around for more! Though you won't see me.... (:)

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...? what? oh well, just enjoy them...

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yay.... chapter 40... im so happy!!! here it is... read and enjoy...

Chapter 40: Book of Spyro: Two Tales:

After this warm greeting from the dragon named Fert or “Chug”, he lead Spyro and Ignitus to a small separate room, the room, had only two tables to sit on, but a great bar, with the greatest variations of brews and brees. “This room is only for special guests,” said Fert “Like friends and politicians, and you fit both very well,” at this, Fert began to chuckle, pleasured by his own joke.
Spyro and Ignitus both sat at a table, while Fert went to the bar, there, he pulled out a fresh bagget bread, and a very exquisite piece of cheese. Putting them both of a plate, aside a knife made for the foods, he walked back to the tables and presented them to both dragons, Ignitus gave a soft nod gesture and Fert set the plate and sat himself down “It’s been a long time Chug,” said Ignitus warmly
“You can say that again, we’re both old now, we are not what we were,” said Fert
“That is very true, our generation has passed, now it’s my apprentices generation that must prosper,” responded Ignitus
“Agreed,” said Fert
Fert then turned his attention to Spyro, who had been respectfully quiet while the elders talked, something he had taught himself to do, but Fert was not so much into manners, giving a smirk Fert said “Well tell me boy, I’m guessing you must be wondering about our nick named, am I right?”
Spyro raised an eye ridge, wondering how this Fert character had pretty much read his mind, “Well… Yes,” responded Spyro
Fert was about to speak when Ignitus interrupted him by raising a paw “Are you sure we should tell him?” asked Ignitus
“Sure… I mean he does have a right to know” said Fert
“Very well,” said Ignitus
Retaking the impulse, Fert started “Well, before your master here left to train to become a guardians, which was at age 18. He was the king of our childhood street; he was the boss, the ruler. He always told everyone what to do, what to say, how to be,”
Fert took a small break to take a breath and to think how he was going to continue the tale. Spyro was instantly captured and amazed at the charismaticic beginning of the story. Then Fert continued “So he was boss to all kids, but the reason for his name was not this. The reason came from one day, when he was an adolescent much like you, what had happened that day was the he here caught word that someone was mistreating one of his ex-girlfriends that was a good friend of his too. Hearing this, he went off to look for her, and when he found her that’s when it happened. Her recent boyfriend and a couple flimsy pickpockets had her cornered in an ally, they were intending to do horrible things to her, and the worse you can think, but luckily Heat was there. Heat, got so enraged at this sight that he did a fire fury at those crooks, the fury was so powerful that we all swore that anywhere in he city you could feel the heat from it, so that’s where ‘heat’ came from,”
Even though Fert had gotten to the reason of the name, Spyro was still interested in learning more. He had never imagined that Ignitus could ever be that way, not to even mention having a relationship, was his past that hidden? “So what happened to the girl?” asked Spyro
“Well… Heat took her home, and she stayed there for a night, next thing you know, they are dating again. But I swear, that night Heat must have had some wild action or…”
Just before Fert could finish, Ignitus raised his paw again and said “That is enough! That past is over; he has no right to know of that,”
“Sorry mate,” said Fert “Went a little to far,”
Spyro then began to think there last two actions, why did Ignitus want to hide this? Would this embarrass him? Would it make him lose his slight divine image as a master? He did not know, but this started to spark memories about him and Cynder the night before, unlike Ignitus slipping that information out could cost him greatly. “Now, should we tell him about the reason of your nickname?” asked Ignitus.
“Sure, you go ahead Heat,” said Fert
“Well one time, also in our adolescence,” started Ignitus chuckling already, remembering the story “When his father owned this bar, I bet Fert to sneak into his dads wine storage, and to take the oldest barrel he had out to us, and he did, he snuck in and out, and came with it, amazed and almost disappointed that I thought I lost a bet I said ‘well… chug it, I dare you to’ and well, he did,”
Ignitus couldn’t help but to start laughing and thanks to laughs contagiousness Spyro and Fert also started laughing “He was so drunk after that, he could not even stand of his four! And he was hiccupping too!” said Ignitus in between laughs.
Spyro, laughing as well, could not help but to feel something different about Ignitus, right now he felt more vulnerable, more mortal.

well i hope this gave you a little alternative feeling about Ignitus..... please comment....

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I think you're making the dragons act too much like humans. They went to a bar and ate bread and cheese! Wouldn't it make more since if they had to hunt sheep or something? Other than that, good chapter.

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lol, next one should be about Cynder. ^^

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Ill think about it... as for Spash.... in a world where no humans exist... whats the limit for dragons? there is no right or wrong in the reality of this... but thanks, you dont like the idea... and thats what critics do... so ill take it and thank you for your opinion...

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This is such a great story, I hope DotD won't contradict any of it. Btw, where's Hunter? And Sparx for that matter...

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Well Hunter was never in my plans because i never even knew he was comming back, when DoTD comes out, and i see what clashes with my story... i hope nothing does, i will try to place him in somwhere, i do not even know his charecter... im guessing a little in the "Altair" from assasins creed is his char.... but ill see... as fr Sparx, he is in the village....

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Great story man! Keep up the good work!

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yeah like i said before, he sorta looks, and i bet acts like Altair from assasins creed

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Who knows? What's cool is that Spyro did get a letter from him when they were on the pirate ship, and it was signed, " Hunter of Avalar" Well, there's a shoutout to all the fans of the old games. I know it made me sit bolt upright. Then I put in Year of the Dragon and beat Hunter in skateboarding.  O:)

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hey, new chapter up! please reand and enjoy....

Chapter 41- Book of Cynder- Return?:

The day progressed slowly and peacefully for Cynder, after she had finished all of her entertaining activities in the garden she decided to find a patch of grass near the area to lie on. Lying down, she decided she would take a nap, what was more time killing then sleep? Now getting comfortable Cynder began to daze around in her thoughts and memories to see if that would rest her, success was near and she was beginning to close her eyes dizzyingly when she noticed a similar gold glow floating in the air, that glow that brought her repulsion “Sparx…” said Cynder softly un an annoyed tone.

Quickly Sparx reached the garden and headed towards Cynder’s direction. Cynder began to tighten up, feeling slightly threatened, Sparx’s intentions towards here were usually bad and she was not in the mood to take them. Sparx flew right up to Cynder, causing Cynder to stand her ground by digging her claws to the grass, ready to defend herself from Sparx insultive comments, but surprisingly he just flew past her heading for the door “Hey,” saluted Sparx quickly to Cynder.
Cynder waited a small while to move, she was shocked by the fact that he had not attacked her instantly, it sounded not Sparx-ish, she had to figure out what was going on. Cynder quickly stood up after deciding to discover what Sparx was up to and headed his direction, catching up to the little “gnat” Cynder said “Hey what’s up? Why did you come back s early?”
Sparx did not respond, he just continued to his destination the room. Getting there without saying a word, Sparx began to go into a small box he had, which had all his belongings and knick-knacks, he looked around in it, pulling out several things he had acquired during his time in the temple. Cynder noticing he was not going to respond got slightly annoyed at this fact,  truly she was ready for him to insult and argue with her, for entertainment, but this bothered her past that level, dud he know this too? “Hey Sparx!” shouted Cynder in another attempt to gain his attention.
This tine the shout was successful, Sparx, naively aware turned around to Cynder and said “Huh? What?”
Cynder looked deeper into Sparx facial expression, he had looked unaware, sorta occupied with something else in mind, and he did not look as if ignoring was part of an evil plot he would have conducted. Cynder stayed quiet now, sorta shocked and surprised by how Sparx was acting, this now made Sparx annoyed “What?!? What is it?!?” asked Sparx in an occupied tone now.
Cynder shook out of her slight trance once Sparx spoke again and said “Oh!  I just wanted to know why you came back so early…”
“I’m not back to stay for long,” responded Sparx, going back to his personal scavege in his box “I’m just here to grab some things to show mom and pop, you know, to give them a better image of the stories I am going to tell them,”
Response from Sparx surprised Cynder once more, Sparx sounded real tranquil, and downright happy, she usually never heard Sparx with this tone, was this a sign that he did not really belong to the temple? That it made him uncomfortable? Surprising her more was when Sparx pulled out a very large replica of Spyro’s outer skin, one of the skins he had malted some time ago. Why on earth did he even have this? Raising an eye ridge Cynder said “Is that so…”
Sparx turned to look at Cynder after she responded to him, still holding the large dry skin, he said “Yeah why not? Does it bother you?”
Cynder continued to stare at Sparx, and his large collection of her love’s excess skin, Sparx, noticing her attention to what he was holding at the moment said “Oh! Heh, the reason I have this skin is because I want to show mom and pp how fat Spyro is, I mean come on! With all this, you could roof like 30 dragonfly homes!”
“Odd…” said Cynder stranged out at Sparx inventive way of thinking
“Shut it doom-and-gloom, said Sparx
Cynder then smiled, strangely enough she had been waiting for Sparx’s “Sparx-ness” to come out, and it satisfied her, she could now be entertained.

That was not true for long though, after Cynder and Sparx remained quiet for a long time, Sparx just shook his head and turned back to his box, after a while, he finished grabbing all he wanted and wrapped it around with the skin, the contents, feathers, leaves, and other useless objects that only god could tell how you could use those in your story telling.  “Well, I’m leaving now,” said Sparx grabbing his things, getting ready to leave. Then out of nowhere, Cynder had a bizarre feeling of panic, for the small time Sparx had been there she had entertained herself greatly, she needed company, and bad. Cynder’s social expansion might have been small but was intence; she was always around her friends 24/7. So even company with Sparx was sufficient “Don’t go!” shouted Cynder randomly
“Wha…?” asked Sparx confused
“Look…”  Cynder began to explain “I have been bored all day, and it’s only been day one, it proves that I need my friends around all day, every day, can you at least hang out with me for a while?”
This quickly gained a big Smirk from Sparx, and Cynder knew she was going to gain this by opening herself that much “wait… back up, you, doom-and-gloom, need me? The queen of all that is emo needs me? Man this is like Historical, and amazing, Mrs. ‘oh Spyro is the world to me’ needs me? Am I dreaming?”
Cynder rolled her large green eyes, she was slightly annoyed once more, but this time, slightly entertained by the way Sparx reacted.
“Yes… I need you… Will you stay?” asked Cynder slightly pleading
Sparx remained silent for a small while, thinking of he would do so or not, when he came up with a question “What are the chances you call me ‘sexy’ and ‘beautiful’ of I do so?”
“None,” said Cynder bothered by even the idea of her saying these words to him “That’s reserved only and only for Spyro,”
“I see…” said Sparx
“But… I could prepare you some sweetflower tea,” said Cynder trying to convince him.
Another small moment of silence occurred once more, when Sparx said “Fine, I’ll stay to chill with you for a while cutie,”
“Don’t push it,” said Cynder, getting bothered further.

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