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#1 Mar 29, 2009 3:33 PM
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The Legend of Spyro: Forest of Complaints
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#2 Mar 29, 2009 4:43 PM
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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Forest of Complaints
Well let me see, you show a nice understanding of their personalities, and I'll forgive you for a vague storyline since it's the first chapter. There are some annoying spelling mistakes, but I can't really judge very well this early. Also, Spyro does not use slang. Ever. "Ya" does not exist in his purpleness' vocabulary. But keep it going. The stories in here are hardly world class, so don't work too hard. You'll still get above average.
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#3 Mar 29, 2009 6:11 PM
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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Forest of Complaints
I'm gonna really need to edit on the spelling mistakes. I'd usualy type it on a word document first which is why this probably has so amny errors. *bleep* XD But thanks anyways. I always apreciate the comments. ^^
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#4 Apr 08, 2009 8:17 PM
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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Forest of Complaints
I think for the first, you did pretty good. Well Done!
Don't worry about the spelling mistakes.. Everyone does that. I loved their personality in the story 
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