ColdCore [RP thread]

Swaffy · May 04, 2009 2:32 AM

Exodus waited behind the rock. He waited for the right moment to come ...

Wolfgurl989 · May 04, 2009 11:13 AM

Spirit glanced to the rock quickly, then turned her attention back to Gertok. -I wonder what Exodus is doing...- She thought.

Aceedwin · May 04, 2009 12:33 PM

Gor stood and stared. For a while he was still. Finally, he floated down and looked into Getrok's eyes. He smiled. Getrok snatched Gor up and hurled him into the air, but all that came down was dust. Gor smiled as he lay on Getrok's back. "Isn't it strange. No matter how strong you are, if a simple trick can fool you, your only weapon is your appearence." Gor raised a virus covered claw and threw it into an arc towards Getrok's spine. It would attack the brain, turning the victim into little more than a vegetable.

It's been too long since Gor has used a virus I reckon. But I guess Swaffles has a big plan, which doesn't happen as often as my big plans, so you can interrupt should you wish it.

Swaffy · May 04, 2009 7:31 PM

Perfect. :) Goes with my plan, too. This'll be good.
[And for Exodus's spike shooting, imagine the sound of a paintball gun.]

Aceedwin · May 04, 2009 7:42 PM

Gor dived for cover as Exodus' spikes flew at Getrok and himself. "If you would be so kind to not shoot me." Gor snarled and launched himself at his opponent. Getrok lifted a talon, puncturing Gor's side. Gor gritted his teeth and flung his claw against an opening in Getrok's scales. Gor felt blood. The infection was complete. Getrok howled at him and flung him down. Gor hit the ground with a crack. He had landed near Spirit, and tried to speak audibly. "Three minutes, then he dies." Gor twitched his legs and finally gasped before knocking himself out.

Gor just don't understand when he shouldn't assault a creaturefive times himself. Plonker. Also, my poor Gor broke something important. Gor's gonna be pretty useless for a while, but I thought he needed weakness to develop as a character.

Wolfgurl989 · May 04, 2009 11:34 PM

 woah ok..lol..sorry for not posting! Posting now!

"three minutes..and he dies.." Gor said, then fainted. Spirit loked at Gertok. "Hear that? he must have infected you with some kind of virus, there's no way to get it out..now either you wait for that slow painful death to happen-" Gertok's eys went wide and he shuddered as the virus started to leak into his brain. Spirit smirked. "Or you have Exodus and I kill you..." She said. "Go to hell!" He muttered, then collasped on his side as his mind started to break down. "Alright I'll just enjoy this then!" Spirit said bitterly and laid down to watch him slowly die, one minute later he was screaming, the next he was dead. "Well that was something I'm sory Gor had to miss...poor Gor, passed out!" Spirit said looking at him. "Ah well, I have to go...do somehting..." She muttered walking off int the forest...

 sorry for kinda taking over the virus thing! That's what it was supposed to do right Aceedwin?

Aceedwin · May 05, 2009 3:39 PM

Well yeah, but he would still be able to fight for three minutes. He could have bled it out of his system. The idea was not to end the battle, but to give it a time limit. Swaffy isn't going to be happy...

Wolfgurl989 · May 06, 2009 11:10 AM

Aceedwin · May 06, 2009 8:03 PM

Wolfy, don't play the blame game. I am better atit than you.

Gor lay in the blackness. It felt like a soft touch that invaded you. Gor knew though, that regardless of it's beauty, it would kill him. It wouldn't kill Gor as a whole. Just him. Gor sat for a moment and wondered whether he should give himself a proper name. It made more sense but it wouldn't feel right. He was Gor in every part of him. Every emotion he faced was Gor. Every experience translated was Gor. He was Gor. Turning away from that was foolish and nothing more than a desperate lie. But did that mean he was responsible for the deaths of the murders?

Spirit thought so, but she refused to acknowledge him as a different person. She could only see skin deep. For someone with such deep thoughts she was very shallow.

Exodus... Well, Exodus had always seemed suspicious. His mind told him that Gor was seperate, but he couldn't help but see the claws that killed that dragoness. Gor almost sypmathized. Heart versus head was never an enjoyable experience. Gor had undergone that torture, but much, much deeper.

Gor made a decision. He had a purpose, however short-lived it would be.

Gor's kinda stuck, and Spirit abandoned him. How cruel...

Anways, where be ma Swaffles?

Swaffy · May 06, 2009 8:42 PM

Right here, buddy.

Exodus walked over to Gertrok's stiff body. He looked down at it as it lay
there, waiting for something to happen. Nothing. So he turned to Spirit to
say "Great teamwork, beautiful," but she wasn't there. He looked in every
direction, and never saw her.

So he decided to walk back to his old village, the one in which he first met
Gor. As he arrived at the village, nothing much had changed. The
inhabitants had been settled in from the previous disruption, and his
house had oddly been fixed. He walked inside, and checked his meat
storage for food.

Wolfgurl989 · May 07, 2009 11:03 AM

 grow up...I wasn;t smart allic, but whatever. Lemme work with this thing ok? I havn't done one thing in here yet!

Spirit stared at the tree's and then jumped into one, darting form tree to tree she went to the, what she had thought had been destroyed, town. "I wonder how it was fixed?" SPirit asked herself. "Agh...why do I care? I don't even live here!" She exclaimed walking away form the town.

Aceedwin · May 07, 2009 4:08 PM

Other than reforming Gor's personality? Well, let's face it. The story isn't exactly advancing quickly. And why you decided to take offence is beyond me. Now, Gor will stay dead till I see a good opening.

Wolfgurl989 · May 07, 2009 8:59 PM

 oh geez...then what DID you mean by it? Geez!

Aceedwin · May 08, 2009 4:04 PM

Just for you to survive for three minutes as he unleashes every ounce of power in a desperate revenge attack.

Wolfgurl989 · May 08, 2009 9:01 PM

 well how the heck was I supposed to know that!?

Aceedwin · May 09, 2009 7:34 AM

You probably wouldn't have, but never mind. I don't remember freaking out, so why are you? It's done now, so why do you persist in such a pointless argument?

Swaffy · May 09, 2009 4:03 PM

Gosh, I play Call of Duty 4 too much. Sorry.
Ace, this story is supposed to go slow. Take your time.

Wolfgurl989 · May 09, 2009 4:08 PM

 SHUT UP! It's not pointless, dude...OMG QUIT! *punches a wall*

Swaffy · May 09, 2009 4:25 PM

Cowgirl, please post. Expodus misses Spirit at the moment.

Wolfgurl989 · May 09, 2009 6:34 PM

 lols' kk then..

Spirit noticed it was becoming morning now...Exodus would probrably be wondering where she was. She just kept flyign over the tree's..

Aceedwin · May 10, 2009 7:18 AM

Where did my rather long post go??? Also, did Gor even leave that telepathic link to Exodus? I don't think he did. The new Gor just didn't want to use it.

When Gor lay in that rocky outcrop he thought for a long time. He thought about his past and his future. He thought about his aims, his life, his oppurtunities. He thought about how people saw him. It had never seemed important before, but now Gor was seeing it did have an effect. Gor lay there, not deciding on much, but at least now he knew the questions.

Gor felt cold. There was a thin harsh breeze, the sort that seemed to ignore your skin, and go straight on to your bones. Gor frowned to himself, he was never very imaginative. Gor rolled his head. Getrok was dead as expected, but the other two were elsewhere. Gor stood up, and decided his front left leg was broken. It was strange. Pain didn't seem to affect you when you didn't care about it. Or for that matter anything. Gor smiled. In power, he was equal to the gods, but sometimes, he was like a lonely child. Always confused as to what to do. Hm, these creative bursts were becoming a nuicance.

Wolfgurl989 · May 11, 2009 11:27 AM

 how would the creative bursts become a nuiscance? lol's

I flew over to where Exodus was and spiraled down, my hair had grown longer nd it went over one eye..."Hi..." I said.

Swaffy · May 12, 2009 2:08 AM

Again with the 1st person, Cowgirl. Watch it.

Exodus turned and looked at spirit as she entered their home. Exodus had
been cooking some boar meat over a small fire in the meal room.

"Oh, welcome home. I thought you ran off to see what Gor was doing.
You two seem to never stop arguing with each other. Well, I'm glad to see
you again. Are you hungry?"

Aceedwin · May 12, 2009 6:13 PM

"Sometimes, I just wish I had something to do. I think maybe if I had a direction, I'd pick up all the rest on the way. But everything seems so pointless. I just can't get excited about cusing myself on something. You used to have something to aim for. It ultimately led to your downfall, but even then. If I live eternally with no goal, I wonder if I will feel any better than your short existence of pain, blood and death."
"You know what your problem is? You haven't spent enough time on the world. You're just not used to it. You'll grow things back. Heh, that was always my saying. "If it gets hacked off, it'll grow back or you'll die." It only meant I never risked a fatal injury, so it kept me safe you know?"
"But I still haven't a clue what to do. Where to go. What to see. Who to speak to. And why."
"Why not?"
"A nice riposte... But if I simply choose to do simply because I need to, it seems irrational to choose anything else."
"Not irrational. Just arrational."
"Hm?"
"It's not idiotic. It's just not completely rational. And you shouldn't just be rationality and logic."
"Why not?"
"Because they are constant. And a constant is never interesting."
"I see. One last question, do you hate me?"
"Oh of course."
"Then why help me?"
"It's arrational."
"Ah."

I really like dualouges and monologues, but you don't tend to see them in fan fiction or rps...

Swaffy · May 13, 2009 2:50 AM

Exodus took the meat off of the fire and placed it on a wooden platter. He
carried the platter to the stone feasting table, where Spirit was sitting.

"I have been here for quite a few hours. I missed you."

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