The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

DragonOfDrakness1992 · May 10, 2009 9:17 PM

dragonball06 · May 11, 2009 1:46 AM

Great job! Keep it up! Sorry to hear things didn't work out with your other story, but that doesn't mean no one will like this one.

Keep up the good work!

Aceedwin · May 11, 2009 4:23 PM

Two enemies. One room. Can't tell whether it's a classic or a cliché, but there you go. Other than that good start. Let's see if you're any good at character development.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · May 14, 2009 6:49 PM

Aceedwin · May 15, 2009 5:05 PM

*puts on white coat and pulls down blackboard*

Character development is the growth of a character's personality in relation to its surroundings. For instance, a character in a situation of extreme hard work and pain is likely to become more gritty. Also, if a character is told something dramatic, like, "Your father murdered thousands of innocent people." Your character will be affected.

In GCSE English, we look in great depth into the way events and situations affect characters. Right now in a project, that's what I have to do. In "How I live now" I have to write a presentation on how the war affects the characters of four people.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · May 16, 2009 6:04 AM

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DragonOfDrakness1992 · May 24, 2009 6:17 PM

Aceedwin · May 24, 2009 6:41 PM

Okay, that's kinda silly. Who asks their mortal enemy if they look good naked? That's just a little bit silly.

It's also possibly going too far with sexuality.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · May 24, 2009 6:47 PM

Of cuase it is silly XD i'm a silly boy and I like to be it tongue
And do you know that dragons are always naked? XD
Have you seen a dragon with clouthes on?
I don't think so XD

(Eidted becuase then would the topic be closed)

Aceedwin · May 24, 2009 7:04 PM

Alright, just warning you.

Also, have you ever seen a dragon taking a shower?

RedDragonX · May 26, 2009 11:53 AM

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Aceedwin · Jun 29, 2009 8:10 PM

This is your best story. You could take that as a compliment or an insult.

What? Well, you looked like you wanted comments...

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jul 01, 2009 9:03 AM

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DragonOfDrakness1992 · Jul 14, 2009 11:17 PM

Well I have an important messages...
I got suspended from DA in two weeks... and it sucks >.<
And I first post a new chapter on DA and then on this site so I will not post anything here in two weeks...
So if the adminds sees that I don't post anything so don't lock it... it is just becuase I'm suspended from DA...

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