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#1 Aug 28, 2009 8:30 PM
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#2 Aug 28, 2009 11:31 PM
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#3 Sep 12, 2009 4:27 AM
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Nice.... good writing but just a couple of things....
Everytime a different character is quoted start a new paragraph...
Also clarify the setting a little more (was it day, night, or morning in the second chapter?)
lol.... other than that not bad.... this is not the place to post Fan Fiction though to be honest with you if you want somebody else to see it and read it....
(Can you P.M. me when (and if) you post a new chapter?)
Thanks & Write on 
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#4 Oct 10, 2009 1:04 AM
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#5 Oct 10, 2009 12:05 PM
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NIce story dude
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