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#1 Oct 27, 2009 3:14 PM
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Shade
It was dark, it was raining heavily. A man was strolling through the valley, with blood on his hands. There was an evil grin pasted on his face, he stepped into a human village. A man approached him.
"Greeting sir, would yo....nnngh!"
The man grabbed him by the throat and lifted him in the air. He drew his large sword and stabbed him and dropped him. The people gasped and stepped back. He left the village, stained with blood. His laughter echoed through the valley. The next day nomads found the village and saw all the dead people. The dragon council was baffled.
"What? When did you hear the laughter?"
"Quite late sir."
"That doesn't sound good."
"What does this mean?"
"It means we are no longer safe in Avalar, humans, dragons and other creatures are in grave danger from this killer."
"Spyro and Cynder are in the valley! What about them?"
"There is nothing we can do for now, all we can do is.....pray."
The man from last night was asleep in a cave. He wore a grey short sleeve shirt with black jeans and shoes, his hair was short, his eyes were blue, he had a sword on his back and a gun on his hip. He woke up and walked out of the cave. There he saw two dragons, a malicious grin pasted itself on his face. He jumped down and surprised them.
"Who are you?" asked the one.
When he got up to see who it was he saw it was Spyro and Cynder. He said nothing.
"Did you hear me? Who are you?" asked Spyro
"My name......is Nathan Shade. And I'm gonna give you HELL!"
End of chapter 1
Yeah this one is short but the other chapter are gonna be longer
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#2 Oct 27, 2009 4:11 PM
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yeah it was a bit short but good u got me to want to read more.
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#3 Oct 27, 2009 4:59 PM
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Did you read the new chapter of The Legend of Alexi?
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#4 Oct 28, 2009 3:05 AM
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Yeah i did ch.7 was the last chapter u posted & the last 1 i read.
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#5 Oct 30, 2009 7:35 AM
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What do you think of chapter 7?
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#6 Oct 30, 2009 5:09 PM
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it was good. just want to know what was happening to alexi? i like your & dragon of darkness stories u guys r really good
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#7 Oct 31, 2009 9:46 AM
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You must try it, when you get an idea
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#8 Oct 31, 2009 4:37 PM
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i'll try & write a story or better yet a comic about spyro & cynder lol. maybe i'll do that
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#9 Oct 31, 2009 4:42 PM
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I can't really draw to save my doggawn soul. I will write more once the creative juices start flowing, have you read my lyrics on DA?
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#10 Oct 31, 2009 5:13 PM
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sorry bro not yet. been busy with work. but i will
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#11 Nov 01, 2009 4:24 PM
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