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#1 Oct 27, 2009 6:53 PM

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The Eye of the Storm

Ladies and gents, presenting, the product of five minutes of Ace's immeasurable genius, "The Eye of the Storm". A demon cat production.

Well, that was fun. Been in a couple of interesting RPs and I'm finally prepared to take a stab at one of my own. Here's the scenario:

Having emerged from hiding, free from the opression of the dark forces, the dragon species lifted its head in triumph, but it was not long before it was met by a new foe. Dragons have been apart for so long, there is no order or law. Divides slice the people apart, and Spyro, the one dragon who all dragons might unite under, is nowhere to be found. In these chaotic times, new heroes emerge, hoping to unite the land, make an honest living, or even forge their own empire.

As you can probably tell that makes this

Now, I'm not big on rules, but you need them when you have something like this, so here they all are.

Rules
1) Obey the rules (no it's not a paradox, just self-ratification)
2) Don't be hating on each other, yo? In other words, don't fight constantly. Take it outside!
3) When you are not talking as your character, use "OOC:" or (()).
4) Use narrative writing. That mean no "Spyro: Hey Cynder!". Instead, use "Hey Cynder" said Spyro. Seriously, it looks so much nicer.
5) When posting a character application, type "Cannabilism" at the bottom. Also, congratulations for being awesome enough to read the rules. Go you.
6) Use proper spelling and grammar. Look, I can sympathize with people who haven't learned English from birth, but the rest of you have no excuse. I can live with the occasional typo, mispelt tricky word, or grammar mix-up, but if I deem your writing incomprehensible, that's bad.

If you break the rules too often, I will probably simply exclude you from the thread. I'll give you a warning, but if you push the letter too much, tough. You'll be out on your backside.

Character Specification:

Name-
Age-
Gender-
Element-
Skill Level-
Appearence-
Possesions-
Personality-
Any other info?-

Well, that's it. Have fun and play nice.

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#2 Oct 27, 2009 7:00 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

Name- Mull
Age- 25
Gender- Female
Element- Earth
Skill Level- Good in defensive techniques, but struggles when attacking with magic. Prefers to simply bite people's throats out.
Appearence- Rough looking, dark green, with brownish marks around her feet. Crest also brown.
Possesions- Camping equipment, a few scrap pieces of armour (to wit, right shoulderguard, right thigh armour, and jawpiece)
Personality- Impatient and bossy, enjoys a scrap, but hasn't ever heard of fair fighting.
Any other info?- Nope.

Cannabilism

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#3 Oct 27, 2009 7:09 PM

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#4 Oct 27, 2009 7:17 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

Name- Nathan Shade
Age- 20
Gender- Male
Element- Fear
Skill Level- He is a ferocious fighter and marksman.
Appearence- His scales are grey and his chest is a dark grey. His eyes are blue.
Possesions- Some pieces of armour and a handgun.
Personality- He is a massorchist, violent but he can be kind sometimes.
Any other info?- He hates people he doesn't know, cuz he was betrayed by an acient spirit who forced him to destroy his homeland.

Cannibalism

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#5 Oct 27, 2009 8:18 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

Name- Argon
Age- 27
Gender- Male
Element- Shadow
Skill Level- He is a rogue. He is quick to do attacks with physical attacks and can fouse his attacks with shadow. But has very poor defensive ability
Appearence- black scales, dark blue under belly and crest, black wings, deep blue eyes with a blood red scar across the right eye and black dark blue horns.
Possesions- A shadow emerald neckless around his neck.
Personality- Violent, knows nothing of 'friends', keeps to himself, but does anything if he thinks it right.
Any other info?- Hates people who take adventage of him or acts like they know best.


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"I wouldn't knife you in the back.
For warriors like us,
In the face."
Grunt, Mass Effect 2.

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#6 Oct 27, 2009 8:24 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

Who's gonna start?

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#7 Oct 27, 2009 8:40 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

Shall I?

Ophelia sat in the Dragon Temple, that once stood proud and tall and was dominated by Elder Dragons. She gazed out of the window at the landscape. Several clouds of smoke arose from small settlements.

She lowered her head and solemnly whispered, "Where did it all go wrong?"


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#8 Oct 27, 2009 8:47 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

"Ugh. It went wrong when we had a f**king war!" said Nathan rather bluntly

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#9 Oct 27, 2009 8:52 PM

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"Thank you for that remark Nathan... But wars shouldn't have to exist. We have lived in peace for so long. And then one petty argument practically destroys us."

Ophelia looked at Nathan, tears in her eyes. "What can we do?"


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#10 Oct 27, 2009 9:05 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

Nathan clutched at the wound on his arm.

"There's not much we can do. Except, fight."

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#11 Oct 27, 2009 9:32 PM

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"But our own people!" Ophelia cried. "We should help each other, not fight one another!"

She lowered her head"Where is Spyro? Why does he have to leave when we need him most?"


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#12 Oct 27, 2009 10:15 PM

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Nathan grunted and clutched at his wound again.

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#13 Oct 27, 2009 10:21 PM

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Ophelia's voice was quiet and solemn. "Once upon a time, I admired him. He was an inspiration to me. A brave soul. Then he just leaves. We need him."

She glanced at Nathan. "Are you OK? You're awfully quiet." She noticed the wound on his arm. "I can't be the only one who has a scrap of faith left in me. You do too, don't you?"


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#14 Oct 27, 2009 10:28 PM

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"Yeah...I'm fine, thanks." he said wiping the blood from his hands.

"I still believe he'll return, but there is a part of me that says he will never come back. It's hard to ignore."

He dragged himself closer to her and collapsed there, coughing.

"God d@mn this bloody wound. I can't even use my weapon anymore!"

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#15 Oct 27, 2009 10:34 PM

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Ophelia rested her head on his and comforted him. "It's OK, It'll heal. Would you like me to get you a bandage?"

OOC: I think it's just you and me Apoc... Where's everyone else?


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"No, it's fine. Just hurts slightly, it isn't as bad as yesterday. Thank you Ophelia, for being with me." he grunted and fell asleep

(I think they've gone to bed or something, I'll be bouncing off to bed soon too, not now but just now.)

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#17 Oct 28, 2009 8:39 AM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

Back at the temple, Ophelia kept her eye on Nathan. In the corner of her eye, she saw a cloud of smoke larger than usual.

"Oh no, not again..." She gently nudged Nathan's shoulder. "Hey, wake up. There's a fire!"


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#19 Oct 28, 2009 10:56 AM

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Aim high in life but watch out for Flying Boxes

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#20 Oct 28, 2009 12:19 PM

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Re: The Eye of the Storm

The village was under attack by some kind of bandit or outlaw group. Without any army or justice-imposing force, the land had grown rife with warlords and bandits. Why they'd set fire to the village was beyond her, perhaps this was a revenge attack. Thankfully the attackers were all wearing black collars so it wouldn't be too hard to identify them. Mull reached a sutiable altitude, curled her wings in, and dived, hardening her skin as she went. She hit one of the bandits with a crunch, which a slightly more worried part of her hoped wasn't a spine. It was, apparently, so Mull dragged the body into an abandoned house, and dug her tail into the ground to feel her surroundings.

OOC: I suppose I should've mentioned Mull's ablity to feel the earth with precision. It's not unlike sonar, and it's very accurate. Just so you lot know.

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#21 Oct 28, 2009 2:34 PM

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Argon yawned. He was bored, not like it was a change. He sat on a tree branch watching smoke rise higher in the sky. A small smile appeared on his face. "Nice to see Destruction is still in this world" he muttered his words full of malice. "Almost wish I was there... or it's cause." he added with a cruel smile before jumped of the branch and started to fly to the smoke to see the damage.

OOC: edited...


"I wouldn't knife you in the back.
For warriors like us,
In the face."
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#22 Oct 28, 2009 3:00 PM

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OOC: That's pretty bad English. Tidy it up, mah boi.
Edit: That's great. It looks so much nicer now.

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#23 Oct 29, 2009 5:34 PM

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#24 Oct 29, 2009 5:50 PM

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#25 Oct 29, 2009 7:17 PM

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OOC: Go ahead, post away.

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