#1 Feb 18, 2014 12:05 AM

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The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

I have never written (typed) any fanfic... But here's my try!

PROLOGUE

The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

"The years have passed since Malefors defeat. The people celebrated, the world was free from most of the evil. Dragons from everywhere came out of hiding from evil and populated cities making the world a peaceful place once again.

I took the responsibility of the death of Ignitus, but i was told many time that it was his own choice, a choice to be never forgotten. It felt hard, but it was true and I accepted it.

Sparx began to like Cynder more then I expected from him, even calling her 'sister' sometimes. He says that he mispronounced her name, but I think that my bond with Cynder makes her more or less a sister for him."

-Spyro, 5 years after the defeat of Malefor.

There is only one way to avoid criticism: do nothing, say nothing, and be nothing. –Aristotle

Do you people like it?

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#2 Feb 18, 2014 1:47 AM

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Re: The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

there's not much here yet. but i like the overall vibe i'm getting from this. it could be good. keep going, i say.

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#3 Feb 18, 2014 4:28 PM

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Re: The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

Alright, I need some opinions...

As it is clear that im trying to type some FanFic here, I have other ideas with it.
My brain doesn't like story's, it likes movies. As so, I get most inspirations by listening to songs.
Sometimes however, songs can fit in the situation I think off. I have a big imagination!
So I came up with this idea:

Lets just say for example i have chapter 3.
Cynder wakes up Spyro while the world is in darkness (nope, no spoilers).
Wake Me Up by Avicii fits in like the last piece of the puzzle.
So I put the video above the scene.
You can play it.
I mix the lyrics with the story.
Depending on how fast you read, the story , the lyrics and the song should be in sync.
And now I have a musical story about how hard it is to survive in a world of darkness.
I put a link down to another version of the chapter, with no musical guidance.
For the people with less imagination but/or still wanting to read normally

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#4 Feb 19, 2014 2:16 AM

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if someone doesn't want to listen to the music, they could just not click on the video link. no need to post different versions.

otherwise, sounds like it could be cool!

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#5 Feb 21, 2014 3:29 PM

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Re: The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

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#6 Feb 23, 2014 6:32 PM

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Re: The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

"Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars"

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#7 Feb 24, 2014 5:47 AM

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Re: The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

...?

did you post that, but then forget to paste the chapter, or...?

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#8 Feb 24, 2014 11:45 AM

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#9 Feb 26, 2014 9:11 PM

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Re: The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

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#10 Feb 27, 2014 9:39 PM

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#11 Mar 01, 2014 4:21 AM

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Re: The Legend Of Spyro: end of the beginning

i read this, but then i was too tired to leave a reply.

this could be interesting! a few small mistakes with the language, but overall, could be good! smile

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