Remove two words, add four.

Sheep · Feb 27, 2015 11:05 PM

Copy the sentence(s) in the previous post. Remove two words and put two new words in both places.
You can add punctuation marks, but only connected to your new words.
Try to keep a sensible sentence structure.
If the text get's too long, impossible to change, or boring, start from the beginning with a new sentence.

Example:

Bob existed.

The cat was sleeping.

Bob's precious cat was long gone.

Bob's precious cat was a secret super villain.

Bob's precious cat was stolen by secret super intelligent pelicans.

Bob's precious cat was stolen by alien scouts. They were intelligent pelicans.

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I start:

The whale came.

Last edited by Sheep (Feb 27, 2015 11:06 PM)

Stormy · Feb 28, 2015 2:35 PM

The story is about cats.

Sheep · Feb 28, 2015 3:13 PM

The little fish is king of cats.

Last edited by Sheep (Feb 28, 2015 3:16 PM)

Scaler · Feb 28, 2015 3:38 PM

The little fish is lazy of his own oven.

spyrothepalmontcityracer · Mar 01, 2015 9:29 PM

the little fish is lazy of someone's excuses and words.

Sheep · Mar 01, 2015 10:13 PM

The little fish is a construction of someone's excuses and terrible past.

#1 Feb 27, 2015 11:05 PM

Remove two words, add four.

#2 Feb 28, 2015 2:35 PM

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#3 Feb 28, 2015 3:13 PM

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#4 Feb 28, 2015 3:38 PM

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#5 Mar 01, 2015 9:29 PM

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#6 Mar 01, 2015 10:13 PM

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