Spyro: Days of light

shade105 · Dec 14, 2007 11:13 PM

Prodologue:
This story starts after the defeat of the DM (The game after Eternal Night) Spyro and Cynder are back at the temple and are receiving training from the Guardians (Yes they are alive). Spyro and Cynder are now at the age equivialant to to a 16 year old human (im not sure how dragon ages work, but they are at that equivilant). They will go through many things (teen things). I'll try to keep it as clean as I can, but please, most of us are teens and might have experienced these things. There will be lots of twist and turns in this. I already have a shocker ready. Tell me if you like the idea and i will proceed.

Thankies

CynderRules · Dec 14, 2007 11:39 PM

Sounds great! espesically since they are teens, they will have a lot of emotion *cough*Cynder*cough*

shade105 · Dec 14, 2007 11:44 PM

Yup, im still trying to get to start it, i write it in a paper first, its going to be awsome tho

Orthas · Dec 15, 2007 12:19 AM

hey, looks great...have you alredy read the mine shade?

shade105 · Dec 15, 2007 1:48 AM

which one is it? ill go look for it

shade105 · Dec 15, 2007 2:40 AM

Here, i just made chapter 1..... enjoy........

Chapter 1- the endless night:

"Night Spyro"
"Night Cynder"
That was the last thing they said to each other untill they fell asleep. It had been a long day of training with Ignitus's strange ways
"For today, count all the mushrooms in the temple," Ignitus would say
Spyro did not really under why that would be usefull, but for him to have time alone with Cynder and Sparx was great.

Out of nothing Spyro awakes
"Ugh, another if thoes dreams," says Spyro
Spyro has been dreaming about Cynder for a couple days straight now, but these weren't his normal dreams with Cynder. In his normal Cynder dreams he was playing tag with her, or having fun, but these were different. In these dreams it started with both of them standing an a grass plane. Cynder looked beautiful in the sun, the grass reflected in her eyes. She notices Spyro and looks at him for a while, then she aproaches him and they start kissing.

Spyro would have never thought about kissing Cynder before, he had never even thought about her figure before either, it just sorta scared him.

Spyro lays there now, watching Cynder in the opposite side of him. He looks at her, resting in her own peaceful way. Spyro thought it was cute. She had grown to her teen age, Spyro had too. Spyro felt different about Cynder now. He looked at her now for more then her niceness.

"Blaflenagen..... Hold me mommy," Said Sparx.
This alearted Spyro, reminded him that Sparx was in the room too. Spyro watched Sparx rest.

"Somthing wrong Spyro?" Said Cynder quietly.
This made Spyro almost jump to his feel
"Huh"
"Is there somthing wrong Spyro?" repeated Cynder
"Its nothing Cynder" replied Spyro
"You look scared" said Cynder
"It's......." Said Spyro
"Come, sleep next to me Spyro. Here, you can feel safe with me"
"Ok" said Spyro
Spyro walks up to Cynder then lays next to her. Now Spyro sleeps in peace till the mourning.

Tell me if you like it and if you have any comments. Thankies

Hero58 · Dec 15, 2007 2:59 AM

pretty good so far looking forward to some more of this smile

shade105 · Dec 15, 2007 3:24 AM

thank you, i will try to make more asap

CynderRules · Dec 15, 2007 1:06 PM

ooooooo juicy!!!!!!!!

and, btw, if you keep the 'language' at this level, it should stay PG.

shade105 · Dec 15, 2007 5:02 PM

yeah, ill try not to go above pg-13, but if there are r thing going on, forgive me....

cooldude22345 · Dec 15, 2007 9:35 PM

Well, I think the idea is great. You seem to have a good plot/setting. I'd like to see you post another chapter.

shade105 · Dec 16, 2007 6:16 PM

thank you i will try asap

shade105 · Dec 18, 2007 12:45 AM

Ok, here is CH 2

CHapter 2- A day of rest:

"Wake up Spyro, wake up!" Said Cnder in a bright and happy mood.
It was a rest day for them. "Even the strongest of dragons need a rest day," Volteer would say.
Wise words these where, Spyro was tired from the day before.

"Its too early Cyn, go back to sleep," Spyro said.
Spyro gave the nickname "Cyn" to Cynder showing his care fore her, Cynder felt atcepted when she was given this nickname. "Come on Spyro, we have a whole day to do whatever we want," said Cynder.
"Spyro is not here, please leave a message after the beep," Replied Spyro jokingly with his eyes closed.
"Come.... on....," said Cynder trying to shove Spyro up to his feet.
She continued shoving him against the wall untill he stood up. "Im up, Im up," Said Spyro a bit annoyed.
"Aww, you dont have to get cranky Spyro,"

Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx now got breakfast and ate. It was a pretty quiet breakfast. When it came to eating, Spyro and them always ate with the guardians, Spyro usually felt uncomterabule speaking to Cynder in front of the guardians, so Ignitus did most of the asking.

"So... happy you guys get a rest?" asked Ignitus
"Yup," said Spyro trying to give a simple answer.
"Right," said Ignitus "What are you guys going to do today?"
"I dont know, What do you think Cyn?" Asked Spyro.
" I think I want to go to the temple library and read," answered Cynder.
Cynder was a huge bookworm, she loved to read whenever she could, she read with a range from dragon history, to romantic novels which she loved. Spyro guessed that she enjoyed reading because It took he out of the hard cold reality that was her past life.

On the other hand, Spyro and Sparx enjoyed going around and seeing what the next stunt they are going to pull off.

Never the less, Spyro went with Cynder to the library. To Spyro, Cynder was always right. They reached the library, and Cynder reached for a book she has been reading for a while as if there was a line waiting to get it. The book was about a star that fell to the world and because of the wish of this young lady in need, the star turned into a beautiful young boy.

Spyro and Sparx went off and found a book about acient dark potion spells. With their natural guyness, they reached for it.

" Wow look at this spell," whispered Sparx "It makes you deathly ill,"
"Shhhhh!" shouted Cynder from a different table.
"How did she even hear us?" Whispered Sparx.
Spyro Shruged, he really wasn't paying attention to Sparx, he was really just looking at Cynder with dreamy eyes. "Ill be right back Sparx," said Spyro.
"Yeah, yeah," Said Sparx concentrated into the book.

Spyro walked up to Cynder cautiously, making sure he does not interrupt her. "What are you reading?" asked Spyro
"A book called Star's Dream," said Cynder
"Oh..." Said Spyro.
He really wasn't interrested in the book, he just wanted to make small talk. "So...." Said Cynder
"Yeah???"
"What is Sparx reading???" asked Cynder.
"Asenganden's book of dark potions," answered Spyro.
This brought a weird face face to Cynder, she remembered her about her past. She remembered that she used this book to torcher prisoners.

Cynder now stood in silence, showing great fear. "Somthing wrong Cyn?" asked Spyro
"It's nothing Spyro," said Cynder
She now looked at her book with disgust, It remembered her of the other book. "You know what Spyro?"
"What?"
"Im tired of reading, lets go to the guarden," said Cynder
"Ok. Without Sparx?" asked Spyro
"He is busy..." Cynder said and smiled
"Ok," said Spyro
The get up and leave.

Hope you enjoyed, and plz comment

CynderRules · Dec 18, 2007 1:41 AM

bravo! bravo!!!!!!!

shade105 · Dec 18, 2007 11:17 PM

thank you.....................

Orthas · Dec 19, 2007 12:10 AM

is good man only that are a bit short hehe, and i want more!!! wink

shade105 · Dec 19, 2007 12:18 AM

I try to do that on perpus, so you can take in each part in much better

shade105 · Dec 19, 2007 10:14 PM

Here is Part three, i think this is my best, tell me what you think

Chapter 3-Meeting at the garden

Spyro and Cynder get to the garden. It is midday and the sun is shining brightly. The sun slightly made Cynder's and Spyro's eyes irritated.

They get there and look at the flowers, they had just started blooming and looked beautiful under the sun's rays. Spyro spots a speacial flowers and says "Look Cynder a Brightlight flower,"
Cynder just stands in Silence, Spyro looks at her and sees a deep worry in. "Cynder, there has to be somthing wrong that's bothering you. What's going on?" asked Spyro.

At first, Cynder just looked at Spyro and hesitated to say what she wanted to say, but then it finally came out. "Oh Spyro, It's just that these days i've been having bad dreams, and the book that Sparx was reading..."
But Spyro interrupted "What about that book?"
"This book I used when," Cynder hesitates to say the next part "I was bad,"
"Oh Cyn, you still worry about that?" asked Spyro
"It's a lot harder to forget your past then you think it is!" shouted Cynder almost crying.

Spyro embrases Cynder, holding her tightly. "It's Ok, It's ok im sorry" says Spyro.
Cynder holds Spyro tightly, weeping silently. "It will all be alright. Now tell me, what are thoes dreams you are having?" asked Spyro trying to change the conversation.
"I dont want to talk about them, they will make you feel uncomfterable," said Cynder, trying to stop crying.
"Dont worry Cyn, I will be alright," said Spyro.
Cynder felt comterable about Spyro saying this, plus, she needed someone to vent her emotions on.

"Spyor, the dreams begin where I am with you, but a voice is speaking to me, It is telling me to kill you. I keep saying no and no, but then the voice takes over my body. I try to stop him as best as I can but I just continue hurting you and hurting you untill..."
She couldn't say anymore, the tears got the better of her and she begins crying hard. Spyro just holds her and keeps saying "It's ok, It's ok,"
"Spyro, I would never want to hurt you but the keep coming..." Said Cynder
"I know you would never hurt me, you are a good dragoness," said Spyro reasuring her.
"I dont know what I would do without you," Said Cynder "I just..."
Spyro interrupts her again and says "You may not know what you would do without me, but what could you do with me?"
This confused Cynder a little, but she knew where this was going. "Close your eyes," says Spyro.
Cynder did as Spyro requested, then Spyro pecks a kiss at Cynder, this brought her a warm feeling, she thought she would die from the heat. "Cyn, I would never let anyone touch you, not anyone," Said Spyro.
"Oh Spyro," says Cynder and returns a kiss.
They now continue kissing, and Sparx walks in. "Hey Spyro, I found this really cool spell and all we need..." Sparx notices Spyro abd Cynder making out "Oh boy..." Sparx says and faints. Spyro and Cynder notice this, they stand in silance for a bit, but then start laughing, forgetting about all of darkness.

I hope you enjoyed that, PLZ comment

Orthas · Dec 19, 2007 10:27 PM

well, again short!! wink ...and sparx is the perfect fainter...what a romantic chapter wink

shade105 · Dec 19, 2007 10:33 PM

Thank you, but i try to make them small, cause i want you to feel each part better, and i write the story in paper first, so it would take forever to make it in the forum, so i preffer small, nice chapters

Orthas · Dec 19, 2007 10:39 PM

well done anyway!!

shade105 · Dec 20, 2007 2:53 AM

thank you again....

CynderRules · Dec 20, 2007 10:33 AM

awwwwwww! CUTENESS!

maybe for the next chapter, you can have sparx flipping out about them being together cuz Cynder is still a 'she dragon'

shade105 · Dec 20, 2007 9:01 PM

Yeah, an evil she dragon Ty for comment

shade105 · Dec 21, 2007 8:51 PM

Hey guys, im back with Chapter 4, enjoy

Chapter 4- Loved filled hearts:

Ignitus goes into the garden and sees Spyro and Cynder laughing "Spyro, Cynder, What happened to Sparx?" asks Ignitus.
"Nothing," said both with a nervus tone.
Ignitus doesn't question their answer, "Well, wake him up," he says.

Spyro grabes Sparx and shakes him softly to wake him up, he does. "You awake Sparx," asks Spyro.
Sparx replies a bit dizzy "Im fine,"
The he notices Cynder there and gives her a nasty glare. "Well," Said Cynder "I think im going to go back to my room, bye Spyro,"
She giggles a little, gives dreamy eyes to Spyro, and leaves.

"Im glad she's in a better mood," said Ignitus entertained at Cynder's show of affection. He did not kbow it was love though, he thought it was a very good friendship. "Yeah," said Spyro in a dreamy voice.
"Son, I want to know if you could go with me to the creek?" said Ignitus.
This surprised Spyro, Ignitus had never called him "Son" before. He just figured that Ignitus must be attcepting him as his Child, and that guess was true. Ignitus felt pride for Spyro, he had never had a child so Spyro was the closest thing to it he had.

"OK," said Spyro
"Uhh, could we meet you at the entrance, I have to say somthing to Spyro," said Sparx
"Ok, meet you at the temple entrance," says Ignitus and leaves.

Sparx now looks at Spyro with a serius face. "What?" asks Spyro
"You kissed her," says Sparx
"So?"
"You kissed that evil, dark, monsterus she dragon," says Sparx
"Don't call her that Sparx!" said Spyro in an aggresive tone.
"You dont even know if your breaking a rule here Spyro," says Sparx.
"Now dont be stupid Sparx!" says Spyro "I cant be breaking any law,"
"Im telling Ignitus," says Sparx.
"Please don't!" shouts Spyro
"Ok, I wont. You better thank me," says Sparx
"Thank you Sparx,"

Spyro and Sparx get to Ignitus and they leave for the creek. When they get there, Ignitus takes a big breath and Says "Well Spyro, you've never fished before right?"
"No," Spyro Said
"Well, let me show you how," says Ignitus.
They now have a father son moment, Ignitus tell him how to put his tail in to lure the fish, he fails the first couple times but then gets it."I have one!" shouts Spyro ah he pulls his tail out and looks at the fish.
Good job son," says Ignitus.
Spyro once agian looks at ignitus in shock. Ignitus says "Forgive me, for calling you son,"
"It's ok," says Spyro
"Its just," Ignitus begins explaining "You make me so proud, and somtimes, I just wish you where my son,"
"Wow, thanks," Spyro said.
Spyro had never felt so much pride before, It felt great, he was happy Ignitus said this.
"So is it alright?" asks Ignitus
"Ok for what?" asks Spyro confused
"For me to call you son," answers Ignitus
"Yes... Father," Spyro says.
Ignitus smiles, they continues fishing for a while

After they finish fishing, they head home. They had enough fish to feed fifteen grown dragons, but Ignitus said "The more the better,"
When they get there, Cynder is waiting for them "Where did you get all the fish?" asked Cynder surprised at the large amount.
"You should have seen it Cyn, Ignitus taught me how to fish, it was great," Ignitus watchs them leaving inside, the last thing he hears Spyro say was "I should show you how somtime,"
Ignitus just smiles and thinks "Good job, son,"

Hope you liked it and comment.. smile

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