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#26 Dec 21, 2007 9:13 PM

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Re: Spyro: Days of light

it was a great chapter love it!

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#27 Dec 21, 2007 9:17 PM

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Re: Spyro: Days of light

Thank you, think the ignitus thing was good?

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#28 Dec 21, 2007 9:19 PM

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ya it was very good i kind of wanted Ignitus to say that in the legend of spyro game cause he is srot of like a father figure to spyro and all

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#29 Dec 21, 2007 9:26 PM

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yup, that is true............

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#30 Dec 21, 2007 9:31 PM

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This makes me want to start a fanfic of my own in fact im going to problly do that smile

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#31 Dec 21, 2007 9:41 PM

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ooooh! LOVE IT!!!!!!!

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#32 Dec 21, 2007 10:53 PM

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Re: Spyro: Days of light

like the Ignitus part?

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#33 Dec 21, 2007 10:55 PM

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yep!!!!!! it's awesome!!!!! Oh! And i like the part where he smiles when Spyro tells Cynder he'll show her how to fish sometime!!!!!
"Can you feel, the love, tonite!!!!!"

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#34 Dec 21, 2007 11:27 PM

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Im glad you enjoyed......

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#35 Dec 26, 2007 7:52 PM

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Here's chapter 5, in this one Cynder's a bit of a b**ch but i did this to show how in the end, they are teens, and it happens to them, please dont take that as an insult. enjoy smile

Chapter 5-little talk:

It was now late in the day and the sun was going down, Cynder was with herself reading a book in the room and Spyro and Sparx were playing magical chess. "Ha ha Sparx, I have your king in a check," said Spyro.
"Proves how much of a freak you are," said Sparx
"ugh," said Spyro annoyed.

Out of the door comes Volteer, looking sorta hyper and happy as he usually looks. "Spyro, Spyro my boy, come with me. I have somthing to show you. Its outstanding, magnificant, marvelus..." he starts saying rapidly, but Sparx stops him "we understand," Sparx said.
"Right," says Volteer "Come boy,"
"Ok," said Spyro and stands up.
Sparx starts flying up, but Volteer stops him. "I only asked for Spyro, and besides be a gentilman Sparx, Cynder needs company," he says.
"Great, go ahead, leave me," said Sparx a little angry.
Spyro and Volteer leave the room.

"Great, Im stuck with the she-witch now," Sparx says. "Better just talk to her,"
Sparx flies over to Cynder, and looks over her shoulder to see what she was reading. "So, hows my favorite evil dragon?"
"Don't call me that sparx, thats not nice of you," says Cynder.

"sorry," Sparx said "So, how are you, I never usually talk to you," then Sparx said to himself "Like i ever want to,"
"Im fine Sparx," says Cynder "How about you?"
"Good, Good, just hanging out with me FRIEND! Spyro," Sparx said shouting friend.
Cynder just chuckles a little and says "Your jealus that i kissed Spyro,"
"No! thats not true!" said Sparx.
"Your afraid that your losing him as a friend," Cynder said.
"nbo, he would never," said Sparx
"Don't worry Sparx, your not losing your friend," says Cynder
"Well you know what! Your not allowed to kiss Spyro anymore!" shouts Sparx
Cynder stands and looks tall in front of Sparx "Is that so? Who made you the boss of Spyro and me?" asks Cynder
"Uhhh... I don't know," answers Sparx
Cynder gives a grin of satisfaction to Sparx. Then Sparx said "Listen you, just leave my buddy alone you evil monster. Got it?"
Cynder just stands silently.

Now Spyro returns to the room and looks at Sparx and Cynder facing each other. "Whats going on?" asks Spyro.
Cynder notices Spyro and Smiles at Sparx. She then walks up to Spyro in a girly manner and kisses Spyro, Sparx looks at Cynder with rage. "So, what did Volteer want?" asks Cynder in a giggly voice.
"Oh, he was just showing me some new ingridients he got for potions, then made one, it blew up. I can still taste the smoke," said Spyro.
Cynder giggles cuddling up to Spyro and Sparx says "I swear he's on somthing,"
Spyro laughs at Sparx's remark and says "I know,"
"Spyrie, Its getting late, lets go to sleep," says Cynder.
Sparx gives the "Im looking at you" finger signs to Cynder and then says "Lets finish our game first,"
"Ok,"
Spyro and Sparx finish the game, of course Spyro won, then they go to their sides of the room to fall asleep. Spyro is settling into his spot when Cynder comes and lays right next to him and not in her normal spot, "Night Spyrie," said Cynder
"Night Cyn," says Spyro comfterable that Cynder is there.
"rrrrh," says Sparx quietly.
Then they fall asleep.


Hope you liked it a pleasde comment!

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#36 Dec 26, 2007 10:12 PM

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OMG!!!!! LOL!!!!!

but, you know, I think that Sparx should try to split them up or something, maybe insult Cynder so much that she can't take it???

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#37 Dec 26, 2007 10:14 PM

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well you know he's going to get revenge..... one way or another

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#38 Dec 26, 2007 10:36 PM

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good anyway shade, sparx jealous of cynder hehe!!, who will think that, but who know?...peraphs sparxs is planing something about that, and now he hate cynd...hmmm funny!!nice job!

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#39 Dec 26, 2007 10:38 PM

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Re: Spyro: Days of light

thank you, i will try to get ch 6 asap

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#40 Dec 26, 2007 11:06 PM

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take all the time you need to do it man, there's no need to hurry

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#41 Dec 26, 2007 11:29 PM

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alright i will....

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#42 Dec 28, 2007 6:56 PM

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Hey guys, here's chapter 6, enjoy......


Chapter 6- Before the meeting:

Spyro and Cynder were awake early in the morning, they knew the guardians wanted them training early because that night they where going to have a meeting with dragons from other relms. This meeting was important because they because they talked about all the matters in the relms, and they only met twice a year. This year, Ignitus invited Spyro, Sparx, and Cynder to it, the last couple years they just stayed away from it and stayed in their room, but Ignitus thought it was time for them to be in it too. "To give in ideas," as Ignitus said.

For Spyro and Cynder this was an important day, because it made them feel older, ready to take responsability. As for Sparx, he felt different about it. "Great, another way to get in trouble with the guardians," said Sparx as they where walking into the dojo.
"Shhh," said Spyro

It was Volteers turn to give them a training assignment, he was standing in the middle of the dojo looking impatient. "Whats our training for today?" asked Spyro
"Since today is an important day Spyro, I will have you do somthing easy. First practice your long range attack, get all the targets under 1 minute and your done, then I want you to practice your balance by doing a melee combat. Thats all for now, after you get all thoes things done go to Ignitus to see what else you need to do,"
"Alright," both Spyro and Cynder said.

Spyro and Cynder began thein training, they shoot their targets, every time Cynder missed Sparx said "Wheres your aim miss perfect?"
This eventually bothered Cynder and she said "Dont make me hit you by accident," But this breif moment made Cynder fail to hit her targets in time. "he he," said Sparx.
So she had to redo her training.

After that, they got to their combatting, they prepared to fight each other. They fought really hard, the purpus of this combat was to make your opponent lose his balance so he can fall to the ground. "Look out Cyn," said Spyro as he did a tail swipe.
It hit her front legs and she fell back to her back legs starting to lose balance, but then as Spyro came in for the headbull to make her fall to the ground, she jumped over Spyro and Struck his hind legs. Due to mometom he triped and grinded a couple feet on his face. "Ohh... Crash and burn," said Sparx watching.
Cynder came over to where Spyro was, Spyro looked up to Cynder and then she said "Who's the three time winner?"
"You are..." said Spyro in pain
Cynder kisses Spyro in the forehead and says giggling "Maybe next time you'll win,"

They left the dojo and went to the fire chamber, where Ignitus was. Ignitus was putting on his special cloak as they came in. "Spyro my boy," said Ignitus
"Volteer told us to come here," said Spyro
"Yes," he said "What I want you to do right now is go and clean yourselves, the training must have been tough. Then put on your cloaks and go make yourselves look nice,"
"Alright," said Spyro.

Spyro and Sparx went off apart from Cynder to get ready, they washed at the bathhouse and went to the room, there Spyro put on his purple cloak and Left to the temple lobby to wait for Cynder. When Cynder got there she amazed Spyro, she was very clean, she was wearing a beautiful necklace with a green gem in the middle of it matching her eyes, making them look wonderful, and to finish it all off she was wearing a long green cloak that glittlere in the light. "How do I look?" asked Cynder
"Wow," said Spyro.

Hope you enjoyed the chapter and you comment, thanks

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#43 Dec 28, 2007 7:48 PM

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cool man!!!, sparx is always disturbing Cynder hehe, and Cynder is better than Spyro at close combat wow, nice job man!!

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#44 Dec 28, 2007 7:59 PM

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thanks for the comment

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#45 Dec 29, 2007 2:28 AM

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wait for it..........

..........YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (that obivously means it was good! lol! wink)

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#46 Dec 29, 2007 3:22 AM

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thanks cynderrules.............................................

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#47 Dec 30, 2007 9:13 PM

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Hey guys, i got done with Chapter 7, enjoy smile

Chapter 7- Greeting the elders:

Spyro stood with Cynder at the meeting room, sitting silently not saying much "So..... Excited?" asked Spyro
"Yes," said Cynder "A bit nervus, you?"
"Yeah" said Spyro
The time finally came and the other Relms' elders arrived, it was a bit strange though, they where quite young, like human 35 year olds, not a common age for elders. "Why are they so young?" asked Terrador as they start landing in the guardens.
"Remember Terrador," said Ignitus " Their elders where lost when we brought them to help in the war against..." he looks at Cynder which was in the lobby now with Spyro ready to greet the other elders.
"Right," said Terrador.
"So they had to be replaced with the young," said Ignitus.
Then Cyril said "I just hope they can do their job right,"
"yes me too Cyril," said Ignitus.

The guardians went out to the other elders to meet them, they got to them and the young dragons bowed. "Welcome elders of other relms," said Ignitus atcepting their bow.
"Please," said one of them "Dont call us elders, we are way too young to deserve that formality. Call us relm leaders, or by our names, Im Graden, these are Tharus, Makus, Ceknen, and Sarador," he said as he pointed at the others.

These five "relm leadsers" where there to represent their own Relms, plus other relms that couldn't attend. There are plenty of relms in this living universe, but only these could attend. "Well... relm Leaders," said Ignitus "Should we get to the meeting?"
"Yes we must," said Graden. "But first, we wish to have a little break, we have had a hard journey to here,"
"Yes, alright we will. Plus, I want you to meet my aprentices," said Ignitus.

The whole group came into the lobby and Spyro and Cynder immedietly did as told, they started greeting the whole group. "Leaders, I want you to meet my aprentices, this is Spyro," Ignitus said as he pointed at him.
Immedietly the relm leaders all looked amayed. "So this is Spyro," said Makus "I've heard a great deal about you,"
They all start to crowed around him, Spyro peeks through the group and looks at Cynder with a "what do I do now?" look and Cynder just smiles. "Yes, we've all heard a lot about you Spyro," said Graden "You are quite popular,"
"Hey, what about me? I've always been with that purple... thing all my life," said Sparx "Where's my fame?"
"Yes, you are Sparx right?" said Ceknen
"Wow, at least someone knows my name," said Sparx
They all start laughing.

Then graden turned around at Ignitus and asked "And who is the other beautiful miss?"
Cynder blushed a little at this comment. "Well," said Ignitus "This is my other aprentee, her name is Cynder,"
All the relm leaders took their attention off Spyro and looked at Cynder gasping. They too also knew a great lot about her, but this was of no graditude. Cynder knew this and put her head down in shame.

Well, i hope you enjoyed and please comment

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#48 Dec 30, 2007 11:13 PM

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*gasps* poor Cynder, oh well, I'm sure Spyro will try to perk her up. wink

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#49 Dec 31, 2007 12:10 AM

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yup, thanks for coment

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#50 Dec 31, 2007 7:52 AM

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