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#51 Dec 31, 2007 5:53 PM
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Re: Spyro: Days of light
hey thanks, grats on being a mod tho dude, i will continue it
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This is awesome! ^_^ Please continue, I'm really enjoying this.
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#53 Jan 08, 2008 1:50 AM
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thank you, im eorking on the next one, just having a little writers block, losing it tho
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yup, thanks again...
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#56 Jan 15, 2008 1:35 AM
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Here's chapter 8, hope you read and enjoy.....
Chapter 8-The meeting:
After a while, Ignitus broke the silence "Well, should we get to the meeting?"
"Yes yes, right." said Graden
They all took their attention off Cynder and walked into the meeting room. Spyro waited untill all the leaders went into the room to go see Cynder. Spyro walked up to her and asked "What's wrong?"
Cynder rose her head up to look at Spyro and said "Spyro, I dont think I should be in this meeting,"
"What?" asked Spyro "Why?"
"Spyro, did you see their faces when Ignitus said my name? They looked at me like if I was a monster!" said Cynder with her mood sinking
"Cynder, your not a monster. They should give you a second chance, as I gave it to you," Spyro said and kissed her.
Cynder still looked down,sad. "Come on," said Spyro "Lets go, It'll be fine,"
"Ok," said Cynder.
They walked int the meeting room and sat down in thier appropreate seats, next to each other of course.
Ignitus stood up and began the conference, he said "Sp, Relm leaders, Lets begin. What is your first subjects?"
"Well, we first want to know how this relm is doing," said Graden
"Well, this relm is actually doing quite well, The patrolling is now bein done by my aprentices, Spyro and Cynder," said Ignitus "We are way too old for that anymore, so the young do it now,"
"Nice," said Tharus "So Cynder?"
"Huh?" said Cynder
She was busy starring at Spyro and daydreaming so this caught her by surprise.
Therus continued "Cynder, how did you end up... you know, with us?"
Cynder gloomed a little by this question. "Well, I guess Spyro saved me. You see, I was really just controlled by the DM when I was.... Bad. So then, Spyro saved me," she answered
"A new surprise with this boy every day!" said Sarador as he patted Spyro in the back, thus furthering Cynder in her depression.
"Well then, back to the meeting," said Ignitus "As I said, our relm is at a restfull station, how are yours?"
Graden then stood up and spoke "Our relms have actually been going well, at least better then at the time of war with Cynder's forces, the only problem me, and my represented relms are having are a lack of food,"
"Food?" asked Ignitus
"Yes food, That monster destroyed our farms and lands, so we now are having problems,"
At last Cynder couldn't take it anymore and slammed her fists on the table "Stop calling me a monster!" she started crying a little "Dont you know I have a soul too!"
She now stood up and ran away. Spyro now glared at the group and left after Cynder. Eventually Cynder came to a stop at the garden and Spyro followed after "Woaw queen evil, are you ok?" asked Sparx
"See! People like you Sparx, Crush me! Like an enemy!" said Cynder crying like crazy
"Cynder, Cyn calm down," said Spyro hugging Cynder comferting her.
"They hate me! All of them!" continued Cynder.
"No Cyn, the dont," said Spyro "They are just having a hard time being a new group of leaders,"
Cynder cried over Spyro's shoulder, and hard. Spyro shoulder was practacly a waterfall of tears, comming from the origin of Cynder's face. Cynder stood there for a while, letting it all g on Spyro's shoulder, Cynder had a sence of security hugging Spyro's built body, which had strengthened due to the training. Spyro stood silent as she cried, letting her get better.
Eventually Cynder picked up enough strength to say in a weeping voice "I don't want to go back,"
"You dont have to," said Spyro in a carring voice.
"Ok," said Cynder "Thanks,"
"Hold on," said Spyro "Im going to go exuce myself from them,"
"Ok," replied Cynder
Spyro walked off slowly, looking back at Cynder every once in a while. He got to the meeting room and Ignitus stood up saying "Cynder, is she alright?"
"Yeah," said Spyro "a little depressed that's all"
"Im sorry," said Graden "Tell that to Cynder,"
"And i suppose she does not want to come back?" asked Ignitus
"Yeah, I'm going to be with her, so exuse me," answered Spyro
Ignitus nodded and Spyro left back to Cynder, ready to care for her for the rest of the day.
Thanks for reading and i hope you enjoyed and comment... thanks!!!
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#57 Jan 15, 2008 1:40 AM
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Bravo bravo! I will comment more but right now it's bed time lol! seeya later!
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#58 Jan 15, 2008 1:50 AM
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#59 Jan 15, 2008 1:52 AM
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Im glad you injoyed, comment more if you want (i know CR will)
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#60 Jan 15, 2008 2:25 AM
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Re: Spyro: Days of light
decided to read the whole thing (took me 30 minutes)...and wow. Great job!
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#61 Jan 15, 2008 3:38 AM
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thank you thank you
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Fantastic! I really enjoyed it! And I was angry with those other dragons giving Cynder a hard time. The suspense is killing me now, continue!
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thanks..........................................
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#64 Jan 17, 2008 1:25 AM
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Re: Spyro: Days of light
Here's Chapter 9, read and enjoy.......
Chapter 9- Ember?:
The day was over and so was the meeting, or as Cynder saw it, the nightmare. The night passed by slowly and Cynder could not rest, thoughts of her past floated around her, the torchers, the killings, the pain. It made her suffer, feel the pain. She fell asleep crying.
THe next day came by abd Spyro and Cynder where awake early. Cynder was in a better moob today, Spyro was quit happy about that. "Ready for today's training?" asked Spyro to Cynder, hoping to keep her mood up
"I guess..." said Cynder in a quite mono tone.
"Good, I wonder what we will do today?" asked Spyro
"I dont know," said Cynder
They walked off to the water room, It was a large room with many pools quite deep. Cynder and Spyro both lowered their heads to take a drink when Spyro used his hand to splash Cynder in the face with water. She glared at Spyro as he laughed, then stomped out of the room. "Do you think I made her mad?" asked Spyro to Sparx
Sparx shrugged and yeawned, he was still tired. Out of nowhere Cynder came back in charging at Spyro and hit him unsuspectidly. He flew right into the pool and made a huge splash. With water flying everywhere, a giant drop hit Sparx and knocked him down. "Got you," said Cynder proud with revenge.
Spyro got a stable swim going and laughed, not able to help it, Cynder laughed as well.
Spyro got out and unsoaked himself before they went to the dojo. When they got there, Ignitus was there, waiting calmly with his eyes closed. Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx tried to sneek in to dodge the unavoidable. "Why are you late?" asked Ignitus as they got in their spot.
"Uhh... we were delayed," said Sparx
"Why?" asked Ignitus again.
"I had a pool problem," said Spyro.
"Let's not see that happen again alright?" said Ignitus as he opened his eyes, getting off meditation.
"Ok," said all of them sorta laughing about what had happened.
"For today," said Ignitus "you are patrolling the forest near this temple,"
"Ok," said Spyro and Cynder.
Patrolling was actually pretty boring for them, usually nothing new came. As Ignitus said, these where restfull times, there was nothing to do but fly around "Spyro, Cynder, today you will split up, If you find somthing, send a flare up to the air, so the other can find you," said Ignitus instructing them.
So Spyro and Cynder left separate ways, both flying. 10 minutes later, bored, Spyro began conversating with Sparx while flying.
"Hey Sparx?" said Spyro
"Yeah?" asked Sparx
"Remember when I joined the flying club?" said Spyro
"Yeah, but now you're out," said Sparx.
"What, Why?" asked Spyro turnin directions.
"Cause you Ugly, U-G-L-Y yu so ugly," said Sparx in a rythmic way.
"Cynder thinks otherwise," said Spyro
"Well," answered Sparx "She ugly like you.... oh! dis!"
"What!?" asked Spyro "Well, you have not even dated yet,"
"Yeah i have," demanded Sparx "Remember Syren,"
"Sparx, you where 5, It was nothing," said Spyro laughing
"Least she was hotter then that beast," said Sparx
"Sparx," said Spyro "Im going to kick your..."
but then Sparx Interupted. "Yo, see that there?"
"What?" asked Spyro
"That pink thing," said Sparx "I think she's an injured dragon,"
"What? no way!" said Spyro seeing her too
"Lets go check it out," said Sparx
Spyro and Sparx both landed right by the pink dragon, she was trembling and unconcius
"Is she alive?" asked Sparx
"Of course idiot, Im calling for Cynder," said Spyro
Spyro looked up in the air and sent a flare up, smoke flying everwhere.
I hope you enjoyed and please comment, If you wondering why ember, you'll see, it sucks for Cynder tho.......
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Oh no........... Bad news never ceases to turn the corner....
By the way, awesome job! ^_^ Please do continue!
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#67 Jan 17, 2008 2:30 AM
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Very interesting...i hope cynder manages to get spyro not ember...she's way to flirty in AHT...but still awesome job keep up the great work
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#69 Jan 17, 2008 4:21 AM
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oh, you'll see how it goes.....................
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#70 Jan 17, 2008 10:51 AM
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LOL! This is going to be funny.
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yup, great indeed..............................
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#72 Jan 19, 2008 1:32 AM
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Ok guys, here's chapter 10, read and enjoy......
Chapter 10- Waking Ember:
When Cynder arrived she was astonished. She had never seen another girl dragon before, she always felt so cornered when it came to guys versus girls. “I will be fine Cyn,†said Spyro one day demanding at Spyro to not do one of his stunts, but of course, the guys won that conversation, the outcome, a nasty gash on Spyro’s forehead.
“What happened to her?†asked Cynder as she kept her eyes on her.
“I don’t know, I found her like this,†responded Spyro.
“She looks wounded,†said Cynder as she spotted the bruises. “Do you think we should take her to the temple?â€
“No doom-and-gloom,†answered Sparx sarcastically “ We are going to leave her here to die,â€
Cynder gave a death glare at Sparx, but before she could kill him, Spyro spoke “Yes Cyn, I called you so you could help me pick her up,†he said
“Oh,†said Cynder “Ok,â€
As Cynder picked the dragon up with Spyro she thought “Wow, a chance to even up the score with the guys,â€
They held her tightly and flew off.
When they got back to the temple, Ignitus was there waiting for them, “He must have seen the flare,†Spyro figured. They landed and Ignitus came to them looking at the dragon. “What happened to her?†asked Ignitus
“Ugh, here we go again,†said Sparx tired of the same question.
“We don’t know,†said Cynder. “We just found her like this,â€
“Lets fix her up,†said Ignitus “Take her to a room to see what happened to her,â€
They took her to a room and Ignitus came in. He checked her out and said “It’s just bruises, I can fix that,â€
Ignitus started going back and forth from the room to the medicine area. Cynder followed him along asking questions like “You sure she’s ok?†or “What about her unconscious?â€
Eventually Ignitus asked after reassuring Cynder multiple times she was ok. “Why do you worry so much for her?â€
“Uhh, I like knowing people are safe,†said Cynder avoiding the truth
“You want another girl in the temple right?†said Ignitus seeing the truth in her eyes.
“Well, yeah…†said Cynder
Ignitus smiled and continued his back and forth trip.
At last Ignitus finished and said “Now she just needs some rest, we’ll see her when she wakes up,â€
Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx all waited outside of the room for a couple hours, conversating with each other. Finally, after Sparx finished his long speech about how cool he was, they heard movement in the room. “She’s awake,†said Cynder “Lets go in,â€
They entered the room and they saw the dragon, standing, now looking at the group that barged in. Like a damsel just saved, she said “My hero,†and ran up to Spyro, hugging him tightly. Now a strange force entered Cynder’s head and pushed out excitement, It was jealousy. After the long hug ended, Cynder started brushing up to Spyro, as a natural defense move.
I hoped you enjoyed, please comment.....
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oooohhhhhh, cat fight!!!! LOL, can't wait to see how this goes.
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Hardcore cat fight...........
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