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#51 Jan 07, 2008 6:32 AM

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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story

As Arcana staretd to talk he heard from a distance that these places were not good.He soon learned that this was sacred ground.I can't believe this!These trees and darkness are talking to me?How can this be?

For a while he started flaming off.Then as he stopped he fainted.When fainted,he had visions of the past.I was his story of when he fouond out he was a golden egg.The problem was that he was different from the last ones.

He had fallen from a great fall and a black bruise was on the egg.When it hatched they saw that he didn't turn out gold...but black?[color=dark green]MOM:He looks different?Oh,No!He can't be!
DAD:But he is!He's the one!He's the....[/color].As he woke up he had even more reasons to get the golden egg.


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#52 Jan 07, 2008 11:22 AM

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""Where am I...." was all the dragon could croak out, his voice was dry and his throat ached from just those three words, clearly he would need to get his energy back, but with no sight of a river or any sign of anything edible, the little dragon knew he was not going to have an easy time doing so. It was only after he rose to his feet and realized his surroundings that it finally hit him, maybe it was the thick, dark green fog or the smell and sight of the acidic dark water which fizzed with danger, whatever it is, it sent a message through his mind, he was a nobody. He could remember nothing, he could barely recognize himself, not even his face in the vague reflection of acidic water could jolt any memories of himself.

Slowly, he turned his head away from the water as he heard something, it sounded almost like, talking, but where could the voices be coming from?


"Protecta Requei, Laus Ergo, Horeblis Incantatus..."


What was that? Some kind of…of…

“Spell” whispered the dragon.

The second he did, a scorching pain surged through his brain, causing the dragon to yell out in pain as his legs gave in and he fell to the floor as his body began to spasm and he clenched his teeth, trying to ignore the large pain and the more he tried, the worse it got. Soon, voices whispered through his head as the pain continued, all different kinds of voices as the young dragon screamed out in agony, tears running down his cheeks.

“I’m not leaving him alone!”

“You helped me once, now I’m going to do the same!”

“Come on slowpoke! Gotta get there before sunrise!”

“No…it can’t be….it’s not possible!”

“The portal has opened! He’s coming back!”

“A new life, a new destiny awaits”

Suddenly, the voices stopped. The pain died away and soon it was gone. The small dragon panted heavily, his eyes felt heavy and his throat felt like it was on fire, but all he could think about, was the last voice he heard.

“Destiny….do I even have one?”


"We're going to free his people, travel to the deepest, darkest pits of the volcanic mines and free the lost dragon"

"Then! It's Karaoke!"

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#53 Jan 07, 2008 11:43 AM

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Re: Advanced Spyro RPG/Popcorn Story

@ Selva: I'v done this before but it was waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay more complex. here is a like:

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=38048


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#54 Jan 07, 2008 2:07 PM

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OOC: @ Clawtooth: I've done it way more complex too tongue. But I felt like doing it quite simple here, as there hasn't been a Popcorn story here before and people are mostly used to RPG.
(And try not to fill up the thread by small messages like this, it goes for me too. It kinda spoils the story. PM is a good way of chatting you know big_smile )


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#55 Jan 07, 2008 9:23 PM

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OOC: Not to spam up the roleplay...but whose go is it now? It seems to have gone oddly silent, though it just be because of my odd Time Zone.


"We're going to free his people, travel to the deepest, darkest pits of the volcanic mines and free the lost dragon"

"Then! It's Karaoke!"

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#56 Jan 08, 2008 4:37 AM

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OOC: . It's everyones go. Theres no turns. The only thing you'll have to watch is not to double post or write after every second post. I can add now, if there's no one else, you can post after me.
It's an oddball time Zone yes!

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As Koni glided across the dark misty swamps a heartbreaking scream was gushing through the woods. A tormenting scream in pain. Koni quickly unfolded her umbrella in mid-air.
"Mercy!" she said and ran behind the closest tree.
It seemed as she was not alone in these parts of the swamps. She had been traveling for hours, but the castle did not seem to get any closer. Koni looked around her once more and this time sharpened her ears. She had noticed an evil precense close to her, it was a being who lived in these swamps. But the scream did not come from the being, no, the scream came from the other side of the acid water.
Konis eyes was ment to look through the darkness, a power given to the cats by the sun.
She focused on the leaves that fell to the water, it was hard to see through the heavy mist.

It was a dragon. A purple dragon, with a golden shine. The dragon was just standing there. Koni could'nt see properly through the fog, but it seemed as though he was in a majority of pain. He was shaking.
Koni was about to call for help. She breathed in, and then out. She raised her voice and yelled: "Hel...!"
Tentacles shot up from the water and sliced across the trees at Konis side. Koni quickly dodged the slash an opened her umbrella.
"Mercy! Such power"

Koni was helpless against a being of this size. A monster. The tentacles cutted once more across the rotten trees. Dirt and mud flied across the swamps.
Desperately, Koni tryed to escape the tentacles. She jumped up in the air and started to glide towards cover. She looked behind her, the tentacles were after her.
The dark tentacles shot again against Koni, this time getting their slimy hands around her leg. Koni tried to get out of the ice cold grip, but it was no use.
Koni was slammed to the ground and quickly dragged towards the water. She lost her umbrella and was desperately trying to get hold of something.
But it was no good, soon Koni was gone, and the only trace from her was her umbrella and the clawmarks in the mud.
The tentacles dissapeared silently into the dark water, taking Koni with them.
"Save me..."
She thought. And in a last attempt to escape she sent a message to the dragon she had seen by the swamps. The only person close enough to help her. But it was unsertain if the message would reach him.

Koni lost consiousness.


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#57 Jan 08, 2008 5:36 PM

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A voice floated through his mind, a peaceful voice, but a voice of desperation and fear, a voice that needed help. Openeing his eyes, he could barely make out the cat being dragged under the swamp water, but the sight of those frightened eyes and those fearful, begging words were almost energy and strength that flowed through the dragon's body.

As he forced his aching legs to push his body up, he stared at the swamp for just a few seconds, before he pushed off the floor and glided through the air. He could hear whispers in his mind like before, but instead of pain, he heard encouragment, warmth, power.

Soon, the acidic, thick water hit the dragon's body as he dived under, forcing his sore eyes open as he searched for the girl's voice, as it called him on, but soon the voice was gone and he was left alone in the water.

Fear gripped his body, was he too late? But soon, he could see what appeared to be tentacles, pulling down the body of the feline with it. Pushing his body after it, he sunk his teeth onto one of the tentacles and as he did, the beast cried a horrible, high pitched screech, but another tentacles grabbed the dragon by the neck and began to strangle him. The dragon's eyes widned and he clawed at the water, trying to get away, but it was no use, it was over.

That was until, his eyes met the limp figure of the feline. Something about her helpless state, her soon to be lost life, something felt wrong and something gripped at the dragon's heart. Closing his eyes, he clentched his teeth as the water seemed to change it's current. As he began to speak through his mind.


"Can't give up, I can't give up, I've got to....I've got to....."

His eyes opened, as his eyeballs glowed a bright purple.

"Fight!"

As he cried that single word, his body flashed a bright purple and what seemed to be, a powerful shockwave of purple aura crashed into the creature and the creature screamed once more, but this time, it let go og the feline and the dragon had a feline, those tentacles were not going to have another chance to drag another girl down.

Taking her by the scruff of her neck, he forced his tired body all the way to the surface, going faster and faster as the hideous being made one more attempt to grab the pair. The tentacles were so close to them, but luck was on there side, as the dragon, holding onto the feline, soared out of the water and into the air, crash landing on the otherside of the swamp as they tumbled to a hault, the dragon breathing heavily on the ground as the tentacles hissed as they sank to the bottom of the ocean, never to pray on the innocent again.


"We're going to free his people, travel to the deepest, darkest pits of the volcanic mines and free the lost dragon"

"Then! It's Karaoke!"

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#58 Jan 08, 2008 8:29 PM

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Ancane had just heard in his mind about sceams in thease woods as if it was tta day he destroyed.As he heard them he wanted to follow it because he thought he could save them.As he followed these voice as the trees screamed the way his heart inside strenghend him maving him faster,and stronger to which he got to the ocean. he saw two figures.

One was tired to which he seemed to die,and the other seemed dead.His anger broke to which he looked and saw the tentacles and as a desparate move he jumped into the water and he seemed to feel eviler.He saw a tentacle and chomped on it,and using Arcane venom,he saw it darken and wither it death.

After that he swam over to the other side to see if they were all right.He layed by them and gave some of his power and food to them.When they reganied conscionese they saw the figure and got scared.

Don't be afriaid!I want to help you!I have to get that egg!I really need youre help..Please!!What wolud this bring they thought in there minds....


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#59 Jan 09, 2008 8:11 PM

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OOC: Not to be rude, but isn't that kind of...character control? I mean, you can't say what other characters are going to think or the fact they are scared, also, the creature is already dead, the hint was in my last line and my dragon isn't dying or unconsious, just in some pain. I know I am probably not allowed to be *bleep*y since it is not my Popcorn Story, but still, just wondering.


"We're going to free his people, travel to the deepest, darkest pits of the volcanic mines and free the lost dragon"

"Then! It's Karaoke!"

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#60 Jan 09, 2008 9:05 PM

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Woops!I didn't really remember!


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#61 Jan 09, 2008 9:47 PM

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Cepxis woke up in the middle of the night. He had a queer feeling that there was something trying to talk to him. He quickly walked to the edge of the barrier and looked around all of it. There was no-one there. He then heard a quiet buzzing in his ear. It steadily got louder and louder and louder until both of his ears were full of the harsh and loud noise. He clutched his head and as he did so, a voice appeared in place of the Buzzing which had disappeared.

Be careful and listen for I haven't much time. There is a grave peril waiting for you. A peril that you cannot face alone, You must help your companions and DO NOT leave them. When you reach the egg, there may be something guarding it. This guard is more powerful than all who shall oppose it. You must try the light. It will be the only thing to help you and you must have your companions help. I know this is a difficult task but you must try and you can't fail please take care and be safe. This is from your...

The voice stopped and a crackling was heard then ... silence.

Who? What? A Guard? Some peril? I must remember this message. It may be astronomically important to the survival of our cause.

"Menmento Libera"

A white light engulfed Cepxis' head and the memory was extracted from his mind and transformed into a Lavender crystal. He tucked the crystal inside of his pack and tried to get back to sleep.

And as for the light ... I swore never to use it again. Not after ... Reia ... He shuddered Only if things should get so dire that it is a last resort.

And with the message still haunting him he cast a sleeping Charm over himself which would break in the morning and slept.


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#62 Jan 10, 2008 2:45 AM

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As Arcana got closer and colser to finding it..He never stopped.His leg was even injured,but for some reason he didn't know why!As he limped through the forest,he started to see his marking glowingWha!?!?!?Waht is happening1I have never seen this...this glow in my markings!

Suddenly they started to show him past events and things that seem uncertain?!These woods put rondom events and made them innacurate?He saw his father here and he saw that he protected a golden egg.It was him.It seemed that this couldn't be right?

As he followed the voices he founght it but..When he got there he saw that there was nothing protecting it?As he looked at his shadow he saw it move,and then it started to try to kill him!He dodge but it was no use!He saw that if he didn't act quick he could die!Then all he did was meditate and as he took so much pian...his darkside took over.His markings glowed and his clawed rie up and when he pushed down he absorbed it and created detah in the trees.When he picked up the egg he looked at it and destroyed it but..he found that it was a dud and he knew that  he was not going to stand for this!It had time for extreme mesures...


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#63 Jan 10, 2008 4:46 AM

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"The bell-tower!" thoughg Grom as a lizard advanced.
       
This lizard was small, only 7 feet tall. Armed with two dirks. His rank was ovis, the yellow pattern on his green scales showed he was no more than a privet, lowest rank. More like a student than a warrior.
       
  Grom smiled as he rushed up to the lizard. The lizard stabbed at Grom with one of his dirks, missing by inches. Then the lizard tried to slash Grom across the neck, but instead of flesh his dirk hit steel.
       
Grom blocked the slash with his dagger, pulled out his sword and stabbed the livard through the kneecap. The lizard screached in pain and fell in a heap, his leg sticking out at an odd angle.
     
Grom lest the lizard to die slowly, he diddn't care about how the creature died, only thing that mattered is that the lizard does die.
     
A thudding caused Grom to turn around and stop his slow march to the bell-tower. When he looked he saw a club hurtling towred his skull. Ducking quickly Grom caugh a glimps of a red pattern. A privet still but a privet first class.
     
Getting back to his feet [he had fallen over to avoid the club] Grom too stock of the hulking monster of a lizard before him. 9 feet tall, covered in roinling mussles and two beady red eyes.
       
  The creature swung the club doward this time, Grom dove to the left. The club sang as it sowared harlessly behind Grom. Rolling to his back Grom threw his dagger at the brute, it sank into the back of the brutes neck. Getting to his feet Grom brabbed the dagger's hilt and hefted himself upon the sholderof the dieing beast.
       
"May your gods pity your pathetic soul, s you will get none from me." said Grom as he thrust his sword into the top of lizard's skull.
       
  The beast fell foreward into a croud of oncomming lizards, crushing most of them. Grom hopped off the beast mid-fall and ssprinted the last few yards to the bell-tower.
       
  Once he opened the door Grom instantly spotted two lizards trying to cut the rope to the bell. Casting about for a moment, Grom spoted a blood staind sheild with the lizard army insignia. He grabbed it, took 3 steps and lept on the sheild. He aimed it so he would land on the railing.
     
The lizardss looked behind them to see a robed figure flying up the railing to them. That was the last thing they ever saw. Grom  lept off the sheild and kicked it wile in mid air. It smashed into the neck on one lizard. Wile dieing the lizard pushed his partner in crime. The misfortanute move sent the other lizard plummiting to his death at the botem of the bell tower.
     
  Grom rang the bell in hope that it would bring renforccemnts from the west to aid them. He knew that the surprise attack and made shure that his village could not defend itself. Thoughs of what would happen if his village fell bubled in Groms mind as he shot arrows from one of the dead lizard's bow.


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#64 Jan 10, 2008 3:14 PM

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"pyros"
OOC: Not to be rude, but isn't that kind of...character control? I mean, you can't say what other characters are going to think or the fact they are scared, also, the creature is already dead, the hint was in my last line and my dragon isn't dying or unconsious, just in some pain. I know I am probably not allowed to be *bleep*y since it is not my Popcorn Story, but still, just wondering.

OOC: You are allowed to be *bleep*y if you feel that your character is being over controlled.  wink  I'm just a NPC so my character can mostly controlled by anyone. AS LONG AS SHE STAY TO CHARACTER AND DOESN'T STRAY OF MY original story.  big_smile  Just a little mistake, it had to happen sometime, so don't take it up badly Deathseeker.

Time to be *bleep*y *taps fingers and reads through stories*  O:)

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@ Everyone: Things are improving majorly. And everyone is doing a great job. Not really much to complain about.

@ Sleva: <.< I won't contribute to the story on a couple of days as my head is a total soup after the Exam, and my girl is coming to stay here in the weekend  big_smile

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Anyone can take control of my character for awhile. As long as they just include her in their story, keep her personality, Don't write her thoughts, and make her stray of and die... <.< Or... since I'm absent... Someone could actually just kill my character  o_O .
That's not even against the rules.  :-P  but it's still early in the story so don't make things to complicated


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#65 Mar 01, 2008 6:37 PM

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HELLLOOO!?!?!IS ANYONE STILL IN THIS?!?!?!


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