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TY very much, its fun writing..................................

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heh, cute. ^^ lets just hope that cynder doesn't get a sugar rush. lol

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yeah, lets hope, or she will be uber hyper times 2... like when we had shots of expresso and a monster at the same time... fun fun fun

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hey guys, here is ch 21, i hope you read it, and enjoy....

Chapter 21- Stories:

After Spyro made sure Ember would be welcomed into the sanctuary he walked back to the place where he left them off at, seeing how they where not there confused him a bit. He began to look around, but the crowds made that hard for him. Spyro began to get some desperation and he began to worry. “Where could she be?” asked Spyro to Sparx. Then they started walking around looking for her.

The reason Spyro searched for Cynder so desperately and with worry was because of a past experience and a promise. Once, when Spyro and Cynder where younger, Sparx had said a really bad insult that day which caused Cynder to run away from the temple again, but crying this time. Spyro let her be away at first, to let her calm down. But after about an hour he began to worry, se he went off to go find her. When he found her, she was in a corner of a cliff crying and extremely afraid as some pirates had her ambushed, Spyro immediately went to the rescue and defeated the pirates, saving her. After defeating the pirates, Spyro approached Cynder slowly to not scare her, when approaching he heard Cynder silently saying to herself that she was lost “I’m lost, I’m lost,” she said to herself that day
Then Spyro approached her and hugged her. “You’re safe now Cyn, I promise you won’t be lost ever again,” said Spyro to comfort her.

“How about we search from an aerial view?” asked Sparx while searching.
“Yeah, do that Sparx,” responded Spyro.
Sparx began to raise and gain elevation when Spyro finally caught a glimpse of Cynder’s tail spike in the crowd, and it was unmistakable to Spyro. When they where young, that spike was always the downfall of Cynder during hiding dames. Because of its similarity to metallic materials, it had a sort of shine when touched by light, and when Cynder hid she usually forgot or ignored her tail, so Spyro always looked for it. One day when they where playing Hide-and-go-seek, Spyro was the seeker, and for the sixth time in a row, Spyro caught her. “ I see you Cyn!” said Spyro laughing.
Cynder then stirred and came out from under her hiding spot looking frustrated by yet another capture. “No fair!” demanded Cynder “How did you find me?”
Spyro giggled a little and said “Your tail again,”
Cynder pulled up her tail to her eyes and looked at that spike with hate “ooh! You again!” she said to her own tail. “I’m stopping this,” said Cynder
Cynder then stuck her tail into a puddle of mud nearby. Causing Spyro to laugh harder, but it did help out.

Spyro then ran towards the tail and the crowd luckily cleared out. “Cynder!” shouted Spyro
Cynder turned her attention to him and smiled, blushing a little, at the same time with Ember placing jewelry all over her as if she was a stocking.

I hope you read and enjoyed, please comment

I also have another question, i wanted to know your oppinion in somthing and i wanted to know if you guys would help me out, if you do want to help me out, pleasee PM me and i will ask you the question, i ask for help in this way for two reasons, first spoil wise reasons, and also bescause the question is a little..... well lets just say its better that way... please help out........

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      awesome. ill see about that question

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ty ty all of you guys............................

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Can hardly wait for the next chapter keep it up ^^

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I have it done, just have not written it up, ill get it up ASAP

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yeah! i cant wait! its an awesome story shade, you are a great writer!    

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Thanks, you guys make me feel good about my writing, im glad you all enjoy it....

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Hey guys, i finally did the next CH, i hope you read and enjoy

Chapter 21- The Choker

“What’s all of this?” asked Spyro once he was up to them.
“We’re seeing what fits Cynder!” responded Ember in an uplifted tone.
Cynder stood still, looking at all the things hanging on her, shining brightly, varying from gold, to ruby gems. All of this excited her slightly, rings, necklaces, bracelets, a joy of treasures. Sparx quickly noticed that Spyro had found Cynder and flew to them “Jeez, thanks for telling me you found her,” said Sparx sarcastically.
Spyro first looked at Cynder, and them at the stuff in the merchants table. “We were looking for you guys. We thought we lost you,” said Spyro as he searched deeply through the table.
“Well, you told us we could look around,” said Ember “So we did!”
“We didn’t know you guys were going to enter a crazy market,” said Sparx
“Why do you care?” said Cynder
“Man, when I try to be nice, you flick me off,” said Sparx
Ember ignored Sparx’s and Cynder’s argument and walked up to Spyro “Hey Spyro,” she said “What do you think looks good on your girl?”
Spyro turned and then took a look deeply. Spyro truly did not care if Cynder wore anything or not, he loved her the way she was, but he guesses there was no purpose in telling that to Ember. He looked and really saw nothing good; he turned back to the merchant’s table and searched for an object that caught his attention when investigating before. He then found it. In the pile, in between a silver chain and a sword sheath, laid a chocker with an onyx gem. This beautiful choker was black, engraved with fluent designs, all leading to the onyx gem. The onyx gem, black their for matching the chocker, had a beautiful symmetrical figure, despite it being a dark color, it shined like the sun reflecting off a still lake. It reminded Spyro of Cynder in an inanimate object, the design on the choker, beautiful yet dark and riddling expresses Cynder’s mind, her way of being, flowing in its questioning twists and turns leading to the gem. The gem, perfect in every way represented Cynder’s soul, Mysterious for its shining darkness, but beautiful above all things.

Spyro smiled and grabbed it. He then turned to ember and presented her to it “I think this would look great on her,” said Spyro
Ember put her paws on it and looked. She saw its greatness as well, she walked to Cynder’s side and looked at it right next to her neck “Onyx, matches her… It looks great!” she said.
Cynder then took off all of the other jewelry and put the chocker on, looking at it from a dusty mirror; she also saw its beauty. “Wow,” said amazed “It looks beautiful,”
“Here, I’ll pay for it,” said Ember
Ember then took the attention of the merchant off another couple buyers to herself.
“Excuse me?” said Ember
The merchant, a green dragon wearing a farmers hat, turned and looked at the group “Yes miss?” he asked
“Hey, we wanted to buy a choker, the one my friend is wearing,” said Ember
The merchant then took a deeper look at the group, especially at Spyro. He quickly, after noticing his color, recognized him “Wait… you’re Spyro!” he said excitingly
This made Spyro jolt, he never knew he had fame,, he always saw himself as normal “well yes I am,” said Spyro
A crowd began surrounding them, the largeness of it made them feel uncomfterble. “We have heard so much about you, without you, we wouldn’t be here!” he said “It’s an honor to be at your presence,”
“Yeah, thanks… I guess,” said Spyro “Could we buy this chocker?”
The merchant looked at Cynder and then smiled “Oh, a gift for your lad friend,” he said while raising his eye brows “It’s completely free, a gift from me,”
They all looked at him with surprise, Spyro never thought his work would get him free stuff “Well thank you,” said Spyro
“The pleasure was mine, farewell to you, brave hero,” said the merchant

Spyro and the group left the merchant and went to a food court like area, and then they all sat, still baffled from the event “That was odd,” said Cynder
“Yeah, I never knew I had a fame,” said Spyro filled with pride
“Yeah, wired,” said Sparx
Cynder then held her chocker once more and went to embrace Spyro “Thanks for the gift Spyro,” she said.

I hope you enjoyed, please comment

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wow..... thats cool. hehe imagine spyro getting his own little following...wait... thats us!

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.... what??? well im glad you liked it...

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ah! DARNIT! i dont think i ever red this story! it looks really good! DARN DARN DARN! (edit) i red some if it and.... how
PATHETIC! AGAIN! no offense but what WIMPS!

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^Err...what?

BOT: Great chapter Shade, don't worry about the negative comments, from what I've seen...more positive than negative.

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sorry!!! (the thing says edited by me cause i edited it to say sorry then i edited it again cause i could have just posted it. probably don't know what i just ment.) but sorry again!

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Hey.... if your going to say somthing, dont say no offence, cause really you intend somthing, its what you think.....

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yeah but...im not even sure if he means that or not... he confused me. your story is great though says the majority so keep it up

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I will keep it up.... i like this stuff...

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i just noticed that we broke the rcord of most users online today!

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Ok, I think I know what Sails was ranting about...he wants more fighting and such...I'm pretty sure he's sick of the luvy-duvvy stuff.  And don't take that offensive Shade.

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Yeah yeah understandable...... but you do understand fight scenes are the hardest thing to write in a storie... the discription must be great... i will soon tho, do not loose your hopes...

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Hey don't worry...heh, you should see the fight scene I made in my literally "extinct" story on FF.net (The Avenger, Spyro fan fiction rated M for strong violence, read at own risk)

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nice, i bet that was fun, i think i can do one, but i have it already placed, its a little while untill, hey Lancer, can i get an oppinion about a question... i'll pm it to you...