#1 Apr 12, 2008 5:39 PM

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now im making master chief chapters with spyro

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#2 Apr 12, 2008 6:25 PM

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#3 Apr 12, 2008 6:48 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

now im goin on chap 2

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#4 Apr 12, 2008 6:49 PM

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Good so far! keep going, i hope you have read my fan fic too! i just hope you don't get stuck like i am now! big_smile  neutral

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#5 Apr 12, 2008 7:32 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

hehe.. pretty good...say, you want to join my RPG/STORY here in FanFic? you can be Cynder

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#6 Apr 12, 2008 8:17 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

LOL, i feel a bizzar day-ja-voo with this chapter... Its really similar to mine......

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#7 Apr 12, 2008 8:33 PM

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#8 Apr 12, 2008 9:09 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

ILE TRY DO CHAP 3 NOW

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#9 Apr 12, 2008 9:11 PM

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Good job, it was nice..... need quotation

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#10 Apr 12, 2008 9:49 PM

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CHAPTER 3 FUN FAIR ENJOY GUYZ

its morning now and cynder,spyro and sparx has been woken up by ignitus

what da hey ignitus why did you wake us all up?says spyro in confusement
i did it spyro because were all going to the dragon fun theme park replyed ignitus
finally a fun time away from here no affence but this is still a bit of a dump says sparx in relief
cool we get to go on the sky drop says cynder and spyro amazed
yay!!! wohooooo the three shouted were all goin to a theme park,were all goin to a theme park!
you all your giving me a headache says cyril
sorry cyril were just too excited says cynder
well i think well go shall we?asks ignitus
hell yeah!says sparx

they all arived at the theme park enveloped(covered) in dragons population

OMG ITS GOT CANDY FLOSS yummmmm!!!dribbles sparx
wow the three astonished by food to soviners

sparx throws himself in the candy floss machine weeeeeeee shouts sparx
ive got a sugar rush
oh come on sparx says cynder
ok miss i know everything says sparx
just ignore him cynder says cynder softly

lets go on a ride weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ok now that made me sick says sparx sparx throws up in someones face behind him and other dragon behind him got sick in his face !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!on the ride!!!!!!!!!!

gets off the ride ride to the soveners shop and spyro wants to buy cynder a necklace with a amber gem in it so he seachs for it and he finds a better 1 he finds a sapphire chocker instead he decides to buy it

this will be perfect for her he shows it beauty to cynder and she is amazed bye its glow
its beautifull says cynder shocked or joyfull
it matchs your eyes says spyro
awww thank you says cynder happy
dont mention it says spyro winked back
young dragon its time to leave!says volteer
just a sec says sparx stuffing his face in toffe apple dips
now spyro said and yanked him to the
flying point
spyro goes buy it and goe back to the temple

glad i still dragged u here says spyro in relief
yeah dont remind me i stuffed my head in all types of sweets says sparx
so what did u do then while i was in candy heaven says sparx
i bought her a chocker with a sapphire in it says spyro
ohh lover boy got her a gift u love her dont u?questioned sparx
umm none of ur bisniss sparx says spyro
okay mate says sparx
lets go to bed night dont let the bedbugz bite
owwww bedbugz!!!
cynder and spyro laugh while sparx gets chased by bedbugz
lol

hope u enjoyed the experience

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#11 Apr 12, 2008 9:52 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

commentplease on chap 3 k

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#12 Apr 12, 2008 10:07 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

ile think about chap 4 k (chap 4 in progress)

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#13 Apr 12, 2008 10:11 PM

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nice job, kinda funny, its like modern which is kool, hey check out my songfic...

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#14 Apr 12, 2008 10:13 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

i already did check out  ur songfic i thought i was cool

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#15 Apr 12, 2008 10:16 PM

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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro

im bout to write chap.4

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#16 Apr 12, 2008 10:23 PM

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kk, im glad you saw my fic...

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#17 Apr 13, 2008 9:29 AM

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chapter 4 spongebob convention
cockle doodle dooo shouted  sparx
spyro and cynder jumped out of bed
whats the racket about cynder said sharply
have you forgot you dimbats we are  going  to the spongebob squarepants convention , sparks said excitedly
spyro and cynder hopped out of bed brushed their teeth,eat their breakfast and then did their training,
lets call a cab said sparx
not when we can fly lazy!  spryo  said  nodding his head
they were off glading thorugh the soft clouds and the sky as blue the sea and the birds flying alongside
they arrived at the spongebob covention
omg omg omg omg omg omggggod said sparxz bouncing up and down like a little dragon child in a sweet shop
sparxs flow off and  his brought  spongebob teddy bear,spongebob balloon, a patrick sun hat with a matching squidward sunglasses.
sparxs flew back to cynder and spyro still overwhelmed with ecxitcment  and showed them his toys and soviners
wow there lovely said spyro
cnyder stuffing her mouth with spongebob sweeties, the crumbs flying everywhere as she crammed them all in her mouth, then the crumbs flew into spyro's face when she spotted spongebob and patrick
omg omg omg omg sparx said
all three of them flew over and asked for a picture to be taken, they all posed
then as they walked away sparxs was rambling on about how he met the real spongebob and patrick
but spyro shouted they're not real and sparx wouldnt listen and srpyo said ok i dare you to go over there and pull at their heads
cynddeer was worried whast sparxz would do when he found out thye y werent real
sparx flew over shaking, but he tugged and tugged until spongebobs head came off
omg !! screamed sparx
he fell to the floor crying and fainted
after that cynder ansd sproy took him home to lay next to  the roaring fire so his all nice toasting warm
he woke cynder lening over him argghh shouted i dont remembered anything , why am i  sleeping here,  i had thew worst nightmare that spongebob and patrick werent real
omg omg omg omg we missed the spongebob  convention
yes sorry we fought we would let you sleep like little baby

i hope u enjoyed it

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#18 Apr 13, 2008 9:31 AM

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please comment on chapter4

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#19 Apr 13, 2008 9:40 AM

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ile think about chap.5 ok

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#20 Apr 13, 2008 9:41 AM

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chap5 in progress

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#21 Apr 13, 2008 9:43 AM

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spongebob??? LOL! you are getting very good at this!

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#22 Apr 13, 2008 10:34 AM

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chapter 5 the zoo

hey guys guess what!said cynder
what?sparx and spyro unsure
were going to a zoo!cynder said excitedly
cool we go to a manky zoo including things bigger than me and uhhhhh gaint poo yuckkk!!!says sparx in disgust
oh come on lets go! we get to see a tiger and all sorts of animals and even bugs like butterflies!says cynder
did you say butterflies! im going see ya i love bugs!!!!sparx said in astonishment and even shocked in a happy way!
ah wait for us sparx!shouted spyro
ok lets fly! said cynder

there at the dragon realm zoo

OMG WHERE THE BUTTERFLYS ZOO KEEPER!SAID SPARX CRAZYILY
um you have to pay first said the zoo keeper
ok said spyro
ile pay said cynder

once they got in theres all animals even big cats
bi bi big cats oh its a jaguar JAGUAR NOOOOOOOOO ITS GONNA EAT MEEEE!!!!!shouted sparx in fear
oh dont get your wings in a twist its behind glass sparx says cynder
well i hope its strong glass says sparx still a bit scared of the big cats
it is now lets go to the reptile house says spyro

i hope there not vicous wait your a reptile?says sparx questioning spyro and cynder
yes we are now lets go there says spyro
ok says sparx

the 3 are at the reptile house now
cool snakes!says cynder
AHHHHH!!! a cobra!!!!!shouts sparx once again
look if you keep on screaming ilt be a screaming zoo instead says spyro
ok lets go to the butterflie house now says cynder
OMG BUTTERFLIESSSSSS YAY FINALLY SAYS SPARX IN RELIEF


at the butterflie house

BUTTERFLIESSSS!!!!!SHOUTS SPARX
UM WHAT 1 SHALL I EAT TODAY (EVIL LAUGHING SPARX)

THEN SPARX SEES A CRIMSON BUTTERFLY THATS BEAUTILFULL
I THINK IM IN <3 SPYRO!!!SAYS SPARX TO SPYRO
WHAT YOUR IN LOVE WITH YOUR LUNCH? SAYS SPYRO CONFUSED
YEAH ILE EAT EAT TILL I DROP
SPARX WENT TO WOOSH OFF WITH HIS TOUNGE HANGING OUT WITH DROOL BUT CYNDER DRAGGED HIM BACK OUT OF THE BUTTERFLY HOUSE

NOOOOOOO!!!BUTTERFLIES!!!!!!!SHOUTS SPARX
OH PUT A SOCK IN IT!SAYS CYNDER

LATER THE PENGUIN EXHIBIT
I CANT BELIEVE THEY EAT FISH ALL THEIR MISABLE LIVES YUCKK THATS DISGUSTING THEY MUST HAVE TO BE SICK AFTER 10 FISH SURELY!!!!SAYS SPARX IN REVOLT

hey a baby penguin owww its so cute says ember
whos that?spyro says cynder
i dunno but must be a penguin lover says spyro
lets says hi to her says cynder
hi says spyro to amber
hi whats your name?says ember
oh my names spyro and this is cynder and sparx
nice to meet you three so do you like penguins?questioned ember
yes i love em says spyro and cynder
but sparx just says i love them in a sarcastic voice
so would you like a tour to the hiyenas pen?says ember
sure ilt love to!says spyro

hiyena pen

OMG THEY HAVE BIG TEETH  AHHHHH!!!!!SAYS SPARX

OKAY LETS GO ON THE RHINOS ENCLOSURE SAYS EMBER

AHHHHH THEY HAVE BIG GIANT HORNS AHHHHH!!!!SHOUTS SPARX

THE END OF THE DAY

NICE MEETING YOU SPYRO CYNDER AND YOUR CRAZY YELLOW FRIEND BYE HAVE A NICE DAY SAYS EMBER

BYE
SAYS CYNDER AND SPYRO

BACK TO THE TEMPLE

OMG I RELEIFED IM NOT THERE NOW SAYS SPARX SHIVERING IN TERROR
OH SPARX YOU BIG SCARDYCAT GO TO BED SAYS CYNDER
OK SAYS SPARX
GOODNIGHT ALL YOU IGNITUS SAYS
GOODNIGHT THE 3 REPLYED BACK

HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT

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#24 Apr 13, 2008 10:45 AM

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ILE THINK OF MY NEXT CHAPTER 6

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CHAPTER 6 THE ARRIVAL

DING DONG HELLO THERE I HAVE A DELIVERY FOR CYNDER SPYRO AND SPARX PS.SPARXS STUPID AND KOOKOO IN THE HEAD SAYS THE DRAGON
AWESOME WHAT IS IT?SAYS SPYRO
I HAVE NO IDEA BUT I JUST NEED YOU TO SIGN HERE PLEASE SAYS THE DRAGON
OK SAYS SPARX >(SPARX PS IM NOT STUPID!!!)<
SERIOSLY WHOS PUT A PRANK ON ME SAYING PS IM STUPID
UH WASNT ME SAYS SPYRO AND CYNDER GIGGLELING
THANKS OK SEE YA SAYS DRAGON
BYE SAYS SPYRO
I WONDER WHAT IT IS SAYS SPYRO
WELL IT NOT GONNA OPEN  ITS SELF UTIL CHRISTMAS IS IT SAYS SPARX IN A SARCASTIC VOICE

THE 3 OPENED IT AND ITS A XBOX 360!!!
A XBOX 360 JUST WHAT I DREAMED SAYS SPARX IN AMAZMENT
THATS THE ONLY THING YOU WANTED TO DREAM ABOUT COME ON LETS PLAY IT SAYS CYNDER

XBOX TIME
HEY IT CAME WITH SPYROS DARKEST HOUR  SAYS SPYRO
COOL LETS PLAY IT THEN SMART ALIC SAYS SPARX 
OKAY SPARX SEE IF YOU CAN BEAT ME AT FIGHTING SAYS SPYRO
BRING IT PURPLE BOY SAYS SPARX CHALLENGEING SPYRO
WATHCHA WATHCHA WOAHH YEEE!!(MARTAIL ARTS)SAYS SPARX AS HIS CHARACTER IN THE GAME
YOU THINK MARITAL ARTS IS ANY THING AGAINEST ME I AM LEGEND AND I PICK LIGHTNING STREAM OF SHOCKING DEATH
ILE GET SOME SNACKS WHILE YOU TROUBLESOME DINAMIC DUO ARE PLAYING OKAY SAYS CYNDER
YEP SAYS SPYRO AND SPARX
AWWWW I GOT KILLED SAYS SPARX DISSAPOINTED
HAH MY POWERS ARE TO STRONG FOR YOU LANTERN BUG SAYS SPYRO

OK IVE GOT THE SNACKS AYS CYNDER SO WHO LOST?
I KNOW SPARX SAYS CYNDER

SPYRO NODS
OH COME ON SPARX I BET YOULLE GET IT SOMETIME YOULLE SEE OKAY?SAYS CYNDER
OK SAYS SPARX
5 HOURS LATER WHILE SPARX STUFFS HIS FACE IN POPCORN AND BUTTERFLIES AS ITS SPYRO VS CYNDER
SPYRO LOSES
OH I GUESS IVE GOT COMPERTITION SAYS SPYRO
YOU BET SAYS SPARX

TERRADOOR COMES IN TO SEE THE GAME AND THE OTHER GUARDIANS COME IN TO SEE IT TOO
WELL THATS A FUN LOOKING GAME SAYS TERRADOOR
ITS SO EXSILARATING AND EXCITEING SAYS VOLTEER
OK NO MORE DICTIONARY FOR YOU PAL SAYS SPARX
YES THAT ELECTRIC TOUNGE OF YOURS WILL CONITUE TALKING TILL THE END OF TIME I FEAR SAYS CYRIL
WILL ALL OF YOU PLEASE BE QUIET!SAYS IGNITUS RASING HIS VOICE
ITS BEDTIME PAL LETS GO TO BED SAYS SPARX
OKAY SAYS SPYRO AND CYNDER

GOODNIGHT EVERYONE!

HOPE YOU ENJOYED THAT CHAPTER

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