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#26 Apr 13, 2008 11:26 AM
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PLZ COMMENT ON CHAPTER 6
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#27 Apr 13, 2008 11:30 AM
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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro
ILE THINK OF CHAP 7
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#28 Apr 13, 2008 11:33 AM
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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro
CHAP 7 IN PROGRESS
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#29 Apr 13, 2008 12:05 PM
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#30 Apr 13, 2008 12:10 PM
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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro
aw, a storm dragon ^^! what will its name be?
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#31 Apr 13, 2008 12:11 PM
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ILE CONITINUE THE 2ND BIT THE NEW PET A BIT LATER HAVE READING MY CHAPTERS THOUGH
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#32 Apr 13, 2008 12:23 PM
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OK NOW IM GOIN TO MAKE THE 2ND BIT THE NEW PET
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#33 Apr 13, 2008 12:45 PM
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2ND PART OF THE NEW PET CHAPTER7
AFTER WAITING FOR A WHILE THE RARE EGG MOVES AND CRACKS OPEN TO SEE LIFE FOR THE FIRST TIME
EVERYONE IN THE ROOM WERE AMAZED BY THE DRAGON IT WAS YELLOW ALL OVER EXPECT FOR THE PURPLE CREST HORNS TAIL AND CELTIC PARTERNS ON HER
SO DO YOU TALK LITTLE ONE? ASKED IGNITUS
SHE REPLYED YES I DO,SO WHERE AM I?
YOUR IN THE DRAGON TEMPLE YOUNG ONE REPLYED IGNITUS
NICE PLACE SAID THE DRAGON
YEAH YOU SHOULD SEE THE REST OF THE TEMPLE SAYS SPARX THINKING WHAT A DUMP THIS PLACE IS
VOLTEER SAYS IGNITUS COULD YOU ESCORT HER TO THE KITCHEN PLEASE?
YES IGNITUS SAYS VOLTEER
IN THE KITCHEN
WELL LETS GET YOU A CUP OF TEA SHALL WE?SAYS VOLTEER
YES PLEASE SAYS THE DRAGON
AFTER SHE HAS HER TEA SPYRO SHOWS HER THE BED CHAMBERS
THIS IS MY BED COOL SAYS THE DRAGON
SO WHAT SHALL I CALL YOU SAYS SPYRO
I KNOW ILE CALL YOU VOLTRINA!SAYS SPYRO
AWESOME NAME AND WHATS YOUR NAME? SAYS VOLTRINA
MY NAME IS SPYRO SAYS SPYRO
SPARX INTERUPTS AND I AM THE FORMER GOD OF TALL PLAINS SPARX SAYS SPARX
AND MINE IS CYNDER SAYS CYNDER
WHILE INTRODUCING EVERYONE AND PLACES ROUND THE TEMPLE ITS HER BED TIME NOW
SO THEY SAID NIGHT TO HER AND SHE SAID NIGHT BACK
THE NEXT CHAPTER GETS INTRESING
HAVE YOU ENJOYED IT IF YOU DID PM TO ME
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CHAPTER 8 THE TRAINING FOR VOLTRINA
ENJOY
VOLTRINA WAKES UP TO SEE THAT SPYRO CYNDER AND SPARX HAVE WOKEN UP AS WELL
WELL VOLTRINA DID YOU HAVE A NICE SLEEP?ASKS SPYRO
OH YES IT WAS LOVELY!SAID VOLTRINA BACK
SO WHY ARE YOU UP THIS EARLIY?ASKS VOLTRINA TO THE 3
THIS IS WHEN WE HAVE TRAINING SAYS CYNDER
TRAINING WHAT FOR?ASKS VOLTRINA AGAIN
JUST FOR MORE STRENGNTH SPEED AND POWERFUL BREATHS SAYS SPYRO
OH RIGHT SAYS VOLTRINA
OK DOES ANYONE WANT BREAKFAST ASKS IGNITUS IN THE NEXT ROOM
SURE SAYS THE 4
SPARX HAD DRAGONFLIE DELIGHT LIKE USUAL AND CHOCLATEBALLS FOR THE DRAGONS
OK ON TO TRAINING SAYS IGNITUS
TRAINING
OK FOR TODAY MORE FLYING CORSES WITH RINGS YOULE HAVE TO GO THOUGH SAYS IGNITUS
OH GOODIE SAYS SPARX
I FEEL EXCITED SAYS VOLTRINA
ME TOO SAYS SPYRO
START NOW SAYS IGNITUS
THEY FLY OUT THE TEMPLE FLY IN RAINBOW RINGS GO ROUND,FLY ROUND THE SILVER RIVER,PAST IT GO TO THE DRAGON MARKETS RINGS PAST IT GO TO DRAGON VILLAGE,PAST IT AND GO BACK AGAIN
SO THEY DID BUT VOLTRINA WAS A BIT LEFYT BEHIND BUT FINNALLY MADE IT
IM PROUD OF YOU ALL ESPECAILLY VOLTRINA AT HER 1ST CORSE SAYS IGNITUS
THEY CELEBRATE HER SUCESS WITH CAKE
IM SO HAPPY NOW WELL GOOD NIGHT SAYS VOLTRINA
NIGHT SAYS SPYRO
NIGHT SAYS CYNDER
GOODNIGHT MY BUTTERFLIES
OH SHUT UP ABOUT YOUR BUTTERFLIES SAYS CYNDER
AND ALL 4 LAUGH AND SLOWLY DRIFT INTO DREAMS AND SLEEP
HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT
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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro
OKAY ILE THINK OF MORE LATER
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#36 Apr 13, 2008 3:08 PM
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CHAPTER9 SHOPPING
MORNING VOLTRINA SAYS CYNDER
MORNING SAYS VOLTRINA
SAY WHERES SPARX AND SPYRO?ASKS VOLTRINA
THEY SAID THEYLE GO ON THE XBOX 360 AND BECAUSE TO LET US HAVE SOME TIME TO KNOW EACH OTHER MORE REPLYS CYNDER
OH RIGHT SAYS VOLTRINA
OK I THINK WE SHALL GO SHOPPING SAYS CYNDER
SWEET SAYS VOLTRINA
LETS GO GIRLFRIEND SAYS CYNDER
CYNDER AND VOLTRINA GO TO THE SHOPPING MALL
AWESOME THERES LOADS OF SHOPS FULL OF CLOTHES JEWELRY AND EVEN ACSESSORIES SAYS VOLTRINA
COME ON LETS SHOP!SAYS CYNDER EXCITEDLY
LETS GO TO THIS 1 FIRST SAYS CYNDER
OMG THIS BEAUTYFUL GEM IS A AQUAMARINE STONE SAYS VOLTRINA
YOU WANNA BUY IT?ASKS CYNDER
LOVE IT CAN YOU GO BUY IT PLEASE?!REPLYS VOLTRINA
OF CORSE !SAYS CYNDER
EXCUSE ME MISS CAN I BUY THIS PLZ?ASKS CYNDER
SURE SAYS THE LADY
THANKS SAYS CYNDER
NO PROBLEM SAYS THE LADY
CYNDER HANDS IN THE GEMS TO HER
BYE SAYS CYNDER AND VOLTRINA
THE 2 GOES TO A CLOTHES SHOP
SWEET CLOTHES HEY LOOK A ANGEL T-SHIRT COOL SAYS CYNDER
I WOULD TO BUY THIS?ASKS CYNDER
SHE BUYS IT AND FINNALLY GOES TO A CLAIRES A ACSESSORIE SHOP TO GET HER EARS PIECERED AND GOT LOADS OF STUFF INCLUDING A EARRING WITH A DAZZLING GLOWING DIAMOND
CYNDER AND VOLTRINA LEAVE THE MALL JOYFULLY AND GO BACK TO THE TEMPLE WEARING THE THINGS THEY BOUGHT
I BEAT YOU AGAIN SPARX SAYS SPYRO
OH YEAH YOUR LUCKY PAL!SAYS SPARX
AND CYNDER AND VOLTRINA COME INTO THE ROOM AND SPYRO AND SPARX ARE AMAZED AT THIS SPARK OF LIGHT COMING FROM CYNDER AND VOLTRINA LIKE HEAVEN
CYNDER AND VOLTRINA WERE HEAVEN SPARKLING IN THE MOONLIGHT
CYNDER!SAYS SPYRO
YOUR BEAUTIFULL SAYS SPYRO
YOU GOT THAT RIGHT!SAYS SPARX
OMG AM I DEAD?ASKS SPARX
NO BOYS ITS US SAYS CYNDER
GOODNIGHT CYNDER START TO KISS A BIT(CYNDER AND SPYRO)
GOODNIGHT EVERY1
HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT
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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro
ile think about chapter 10
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#38 Apr 13, 2008 4:11 PM
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Re: now im making master chief chapters with spyro
chapter 10 sealife centre
um whats this?asks voltrina
hey guys were got a tokens of sealife centre says voltrina
huh what? says spyro
were got a tokens of sealife centre says voltrina
i know we can go to the sealife centre together suguests cynder
that be great says spyro
sparx wake up!shouts spyro
what is that you mommy!says sparx
oh ile wake him says cynder
cynder gets a bucket of water and throws it across sparx
AHHHHHHH!!!!!WAHAT WAS THAT!!WAS IT A ANOTHER EVIL SHE DRAGON ITS BAD ENOUGH WITH 1 shouts and screams sparx
oh come you cry baby says cynder
lets go!shouts spyro
ok ok SHEESH ITS ENOUGH COMPETEING WITH YOU ANYWAY!says sparx
they all glide to the sealiife centre in tall plains
cool man im worshiped still by lama people says sparx
congrats laternfly says spyro
lets get in the till bit says voltrina
ok says cynder
ok we pay a family ticket says spyro
ok says the till dragon
have a good time says the till dragon
sealife
oh its so cool i just a giant crab spider says voltrina
AHHHHH SPIDERRRR!!!!!SCREAMS SPARX
OH NOT THIS AGAIN SAYS SPYRO AND CYNDER
voltrina can u take sparx to the fish section asks spyro
yep says voltrina
voltrina,sparx,cynder and spyro meet up again
hey whats wrong with sparx says spyro
oh hes terrofided of little fish says voltrina
sparxs all scared
i wanna go home MOMMYYYY!!! SAYS SPARX
AH HE WONT SHUT IT SAYS VOLTRINA
OK LETS GO HOME SAYS SPYRO
YAY!!!SAYS SPARX
BACK AT THE TEMPLE
I WAS TERRORFIED SAYS SPARX NOW I WANT BED!!!! OH GOD I HAVE TO PUT UP WITH HIM!!!SAYS CYNDER NOW WE GO TO BED
GOODNIGHT EVERYONE
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ILE DO CHAPTER 11 LATER
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#41 Apr 13, 2008 5:49 PM
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hey guyz im login out so i can play my spyro game ok bye
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#42 Apr 13, 2008 8:45 PM
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ok im back and ready to write chapter 11 sparxs birthday
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#43 Apr 13, 2008 9:38 PM
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chapter 11 sparxs birthday A SHORT STORY
1 2 3 and cynder,voltrena and cynder all blow a party poppers with a boom
AH THAT HURT MY EARS WHO DONE THAT!? >_< SAID SPARX
OH WE JUST WANTED TO SAY HAPPY BIRTHDAY PAL SAYS SPYRO
YAY I REMEMBER AT LAST THANKS GUYS SAYS SPARX
NO PROB SAYS CYNDER
VOLTRINA COMES WITH A BIG SPRIKLED CAKE WITH A SPARX TOPPER AT THE TOP OF IT
OK IM DONE WITH THE CAKE SAYS VOLTRINA
SPARX LOOKED GOBSMACKED AT THIS IN A JOYFULL WAY
YUMM ITS GREAT VOLTRINA SAYS SPARX
WHY THANKS YOU SPARX SAYS VOLTRINA
DONT MENTION IT SAYS SPARX
NOW LETS EAT THIS BAD BOY IN THE KITCHEN SAYS SPARX
THEY ALL WENT TO EAT SOME CAKE AS WELL
YUMM SAYS SPYRO
THAT WAS TASTY SAYS CYNDER AND SPARX
1 HOUR LATER
SPARX BURPS
EWWW SPARX SAYS SPYRO
I HOPE YOU DONT BURP WHEN WE GET TO THE BEDROOM
WELL IT WAS FUN SAID SPARX
NOW WHERES MY PRESENT!!!ASKS SPARX
YOULE GET IT TOMMOROW SAYS CYNDER
WHY SAYS SPARX
BECAUSE ITS A SUPRISE SAYS SPYRO
NOOOO I WANT IT NOWW!!!SAYS SPARX
OH YOULE GET IT AND WHEN YOU DO ILE DO SOMETHING HORIBLE OK JUST JOKING SAYS CYNDER
WELL GOOD NIGHT BIRTHDAY BOY SAYS VOLTRINA
GOODNIGHT HE SPARX REPLYS
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ok im about to log off bye
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#45 Apr 14, 2008 2:34 PM
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ok im back sry bout earlier i was at school and now im doin my next chapter (NOW CHAPTER 12 IN PROGRESS)
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#46 Apr 14, 2008 6:45 PM
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ok im back sry bout earlier i was at school and now im doin my next chapter (NOW CHAPTER 12 IN PROGRESS)
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#47 Apr 14, 2008 7:23 PM
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short story for chapter 12
hey guys why dont we go to the theater says cynder
thats a great idea says spyro
yeah why dont we go to crazyland instead says sparx sarcasticly and rolls his eyes
come on it will be fun says cynder
yeah says spyro
okay this is what im talking about you always agree with the cyco evil she dragons appear huh?asks sparx
well im just trying to be polite replys spyro
<_< oh lets go already says cynder
okay okay says sparx
the theater
okay ile go get the toffee popcorn says spyro
ok you do that says sparx
and ile get the tickets says cynder
sparx is now looking at posters like ALVIN AND THE DRAGMUNKS(LOL)
hey look says sparx
ALVIN AND THE DRAGMUNKS OK LETS SEE THIS FILM SAYS CYNDER
ok says cynder
stairs
OMG I HATE THESE THINGS!!!SHOUTS SPARX
oh stop winening just fly you idoit says cynder
says hey lets go in now
ok pally says
film expeince
after 2 hours of it
that was so awesome says spyro
i say i should have been called SPARX AND THE BUGMUNKS!says
yep amazing we have to tell voltrina says cynder
back to the temple
it was so fantastic,you should seen it says cynder and spyro
and sparx still moaning about it should of been called SPARX AND THE BUGMUNKS
well goodnight everyone says
goodnight butterflies says sparx
oh shut up about youre bugs says cyril i coming to a nightmare with you saying that
well get used to it says sparx
I HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT
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ile do chapter 13 laTER GUYZ
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#49 Apr 15, 2008 3:07 PM
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the next story is spyro finds a enchanted spell book and shows it to cynder,sparx and voltrina
well the next bit of it gets pretty good now chapter 13 is now in progress
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chap.13 TRADITY
spyro finds a book of magic spells near the silver river
he brings it back to the temple
cynder come over here says spyro
yes says cynder
look at the spells in here says spyro
cynder looks at the writing in the book
and says i know this book it is called the malefors book of enchanted spells
how do you know its called that? asks spyro
because when i was a servant for the darkmaster he told me to learn this books langueage and its power says cynder
thats fasinating says spyro
yes but now if anyone read the spells it will make them evil says cynder in fear
dont worry says spyro trying to comfort her
sparx says whats goin on?
oh im just talkin to spyro thats all says cynder
voltrina says yeah as she walks you shouldent get on there bisniss sparx
ok missy says sparx
but whats this? says sparx
spyro whispers the words in the book quietly in his mind
and hopes for him to well lets say somethings goes good OR MAYBE bad
cynder replys back to sparx but then omillian(black) glow from spyro shines dark
cynder turns to spyro and shouts SPYRO!!!
SPARX FAINTED
OMG SAYS VOLTRINA SPYRO!!
OH NO!!!SAYS CYNDER
I LOVE YOU WHISPERS FAINTLY SPYRO
NO!!!SHOUTS CYNDER
AND AT THAT SPYRO DISSAPEARS RIDE OUT THE STORM TO FIGHT ANOTHER DAY
DONT THINK SPYROS OVER HE WILL RETURN IN THE NEXT CHAPTERS IN THE FUTURE
WELL,HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT
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